Currently under editing I've gotten some complaints about grammar and I'm fixing it
Marvil, a Reasuin warrior from Reasu, ally and friend of Sparta falls through a hole escaping a betrayal that nearly kills him. after he falls though in lands in a Mysterious land with no way to get back. did i forget that there are talking ponys. Can the ponies change the battle hardened warrior into something better... or worse?
Rated mature due to violence and language.
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3rd person at first but then gets to first person.