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Im not in Sparta anymore

by little big pony
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Maril, a Reasuin warrior from Reasu,ally and friend of sparta falls through a hole escapingBetrayal
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Currently under editing I've gotten some complaints about grammar and I'm fixing it

Marvil, a Reasuin warrior from Reasu, ally and friend of Sparta falls through a hole escaping a betrayal that nearly kills him. after he falls though in lands in a Mysterious land with no way to get back. did i forget that there are talking ponys. Can the ponies change the battle hardened warrior into something better... or worse?

Rated mature due to violence and language.

Please write me and tell me what you think:)

3rd person at first but then gets to first person.

Dubious
Incomplete
Adventure
Romance
Comedy
Tragedy
Human

41,122 words: Estimated 2 Hours, 45 Minutes to read: [Cache]

35 Chapters:

  1. Ch.1 Prolouge [Cache] Sep 15th, 2012
    189
  2. Ch.2 The night before the raid [Cache] Nov 15th, 2012
    1,062
  3. Ch.3 We get screwed [Cache] Nov 15th, 2012
    1,709
  4. Ch.4 Introductions [Cache] Nov 15th, 2012
    1,643
  5. Ch.5 Celestia tries to read my mind [Cache] Nov 15th, 2012
    1,347
  6. Ch.6 My Arrival [Cache] Sep 15th, 2012
    1,926
  7. Ch.7 I give the girls a talking to and get a job [Cache] Nov 15th, 2012
    1,112
  8. Ch.8 I Make Big Plans [Cache] Nov 15th, 2012
    1,624
  9. Ch.9 We party till everyone passes out and I make a deal with Luna [Cache] Nov 15th, 2012
    1,390
  10. Ch. 10 I build my bitchin house [Cache] Nov 15th, 2012
    1,561
  11. Ch.11 Getting Settled in [Cache] Oct 4th, 2012
    1,837
  12. Ch.12 I go fishing [Cache] Sep 27th, 2012
    959
  13. Ch. 13 I get Celly back [Cache] Oct 4th, 2012
    1,265
  14. Ch. 14 I help out a cutiemark crusader [Cache] Sep 15th, 2012
    1,038
  15. Ch. 15 I do Celestia a favor [Cache] Oct 4th, 2012
    1,529
  16. Ch. 16 Realization [Cache] Oct 4th, 2012
    1,319
  17. Ch.17 I go to the spa [Cache] Sep 17th, 2012
    1,323
  18. Ch.18 A day out with Scoots [Cache] Sep 19th, 2012
    1,102
  19. Ch. 19 I catch a dog and Dash gets some advice [Cache] Sep 27th, 2012
    1,256
  20. Ch.20 I get another roommate [Cache] Oct 4th, 2012
    1,110
  21. Ch.21 getting settled in ( again) [Cache] Sep 24th, 2012
    789
  22. Ch.22 I go fishing with gods [Cache] Sep 26th, 2012
    1,118
  23. Ch.23 Estrus gives me the reach around [Cache] Sep 28th, 2012
    1,258
  24. Ch.24 In the woods part 1 [Cache] Oct 4th, 2012
    1,330
  25. Ch.25 in the woods part 2 [Cache] Oct 4th, 2012
    1,064
  26. Ch. 26 Death [Cache] Oct 4th, 2012
    1,333
  27. Ch.27 Relationships [Cache] Oct 8th, 2012
    1,037
  28. YOU DECIDE! [Cache] Oct 12th, 2012
    66
  29. Ch. 28 meeting the parents part 1 [Cache] Oct 15th, 2012
    1,180
  30. Ch.29 meeting the parents part 2 [Cache] Oct 18th, 2012
    1,321
  31. Ch. 30 The Forger gives me a job [Cache] Oct 22nd, 2012
    1,227
  32. Ch.31 Homecoming [Cache] Oct 30th, 2012
    1,054
  33. Ch.32 Man time [Cache] Nov 6th, 2012
    934
  34. Need editors [Cache] Nov 12th, 2012
    53
  35. Ch.33 A Hunting we will go (part 1) [Cache] Nov 19th, 2012
    1,057
Published Nov 19th, 2012

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