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Im not in Sparta anymore

by little big pony

Chapter 17: Ch.17 I go to the spa

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Ch.17 I go to the spa

Ch.17 I go to the spa

Twilight walked to her house, her mind preoccupied in all the work she had to do on the library. Something caught her eye, something was watching somepony and it was hiding in the trees. Curious, she walked closer to the treeline to see what it was. She could almost make out what it was... it looked really far away....  Something appeared out of the shadows, grabbing her and covering her to keep her from screaming. " Shut up Twilight!" It whispered to her. She stopped trying to scream and looked at it. It looked like it was a bush, but two hands removed what was a head covering, revailing Marvil. " What are you doing Marvil?!" Twilight demanded, whispering " You nearly scared me to death!"

Marvil almost looked sorry when he grabbed her and pushed the both of them on the floor ground. They both got up and Twilight say who they were hiding from, Pinkie. " Why are you hiding from Pinkie?" Twilight asked, Marvil stared at Pinkie Pie intently then turned to her. he sighed and said," I'm trying to evidence that Pinkie is a god." " What?!" Twilight asked, really confused " Pinkie isn't a god! She's just a average earth pony!"

Marvil looked at her like she was nuts, " Pinkie pops out of nowhere whenever she wants, whatever she wants something it appears out of thin air, hell Twilight, she hops 15 feet in the air to just get around! All she needs to do is change forms and you have a god!"  " Did you find anything?" Twilight asked, less convinced of what she said about her pink friend, she had never thought of it like that..... Marvil's shoulders sagged, " Not a thing"  he said " I've been watching her for hours, all she did was eat a huge amount of sweets and went to wo-"

Twilight turned around, Pinkie was walking toward her, Marvil was nowhere to be seen, he had vanished in the forest again. " Hi Twilight!" she said happily. " Whatcha doing in the woods?.... O hi Marvie!!" Pinkie waved at what to Twilight was nothing but something started moving. Marvil appeared out of nowhere, walking to the girls, his shoulders sagged in defeat. " There's no way she should of been able to see me." Twilight heard him mutter. he walked past both of the ponies and walked back to his house. He looked at Twilight, as if to prove his point, and shook his head at a confused Pinkie and muttered all the way to his house.......


" Scootaloo, get up ! it's time for school!" I yelled, getting up myself. I knocked on Spells door to wake him up and went to the kitchen. I poured cereal into 2 bowls for me and Scotts. She trotted happily and sat down next to me, grabbing her bowl. " Are you ready for that spelling test today?" I asked her. She nodded" Yep!" I raised a eyebrow. " Okay how do you spell supportive?" " S-u-p-p-o-r-t-i-v-e!" She told me. I had been helping her study for days. " Good!" I said, messing her head, she complained loudly. I laughed. " Now go brush that rats nuts, Cherrilee wouldn't want you to look like that!"

She gave me a outraged look and wined," But you're the one that messes it up!" I laughed again." Alright, I'll do it, go grab your brush." She came back with her brush and sat on my lap as I got her hair back into order. When I was done we had just had over 15 minutes to get to school." Come on Scoots, grab your backpack, we have to go.

The whole way to school I drilled her in her spelling and she told me about her day yesterday. What I got from it the cutiemark crusaders had been trying to make furniture, it didn't go well. We met Rarity and Sweete Bell on the way and we all went to the school together. Rarity and I talked while the girls ran around and played. I asked about how she was doing and she told my about the latest fashion and she wanted me to come down and get fitted for some new cloths. I flinched, last time I did that I spent 5 hours standing in one place.

I tried to figure out a good lie to get out of it but us arriving at the school saved me. I got on my knee and and gave a hug to Scoots," Goodbye dad!" she said, running to the school door. Both Rarity and I smiled. " Marvil, you would be a good father!" she told me. I smiled. Scoots real dad had gotten a real job and had quiet with the drink, but Scoots didn't want to see him. I Got up, cracking my back. Rarity looked at me with concern.

Dear you sound like a old man! I know just what you need! Fluttershy and I are going to the spa!" I had no idea what I spa was but I accepted anyway because I knew she really wouldn't take no for a answer.

The next day.....

" A spa is a place where you relax and get your nails done? That seems silly to me." I told the girls. Rarity looked offended and Fluttershy looked like she was about to laugh. " Darling, its much more than that, you'll understand when your there." She refused to tell me anymore. Then we got a big white building that I assumed was the spa. As we opened the door I heard," Welcome to the ponyvill- O hello Rarity who is your big friend here?" There were two ponies sitting behind the counter looking me up and down like I was a piece of meat. They both looked like twins with thick accents.

I bowed to the 2 girls, making them giggle," I, my ladies, am Marvil. Its nice to meet you. Miss Rarity demanded that I come here and get the full works here, so here I am." The 2 mares giggled," My name is Aloe and this is Lotus. Nice to meet you Marvil!"  The two girls got down to business and ordered me to undress and and put on a towel. I did so and they led me and the girls, to what looked like a big bathtube with really hot water. When I got into it it was like all of my muscles deflated, " Good gods, this feels good!"

Then they lead the 3 of us to chairs and all of these workers come out and started to rub our hands and feet. " Gods ,ladies" I told all of the girls " You really know how to treat a fella." All of them giggled and I kept flurting with all of them until they all were the same color as each other, beat red. Aloe came into the room and grinned at me." Marvil, what did you to all of my workers?" She jokenly scolded me " There all as red as tomatoes. Come on you 3, it's time for your massages."

She let us into another room and told us all to lay down in these beds, they were tiny so they had to put two together for me. To my surprise Aloe was my massuce. " The boss rubbing my back? Why am I so special?" She grinned and winked at me." Can't have you making the other girls blushing again, can we." I laughed and she started on my back.

At first I expected that since she had hooves it would be rough, but I couldn't of been more wrong, it felt great. I was moaning when Aloe suddenly was on top of my back. She grabbed both of my arms and pulled back, cracking every bone in my back. " Sweet Gods!" I moaned in pleasure. There was a silence and I chuckled and said," I think I just finished." All of the girls laughed, expect Fluttershy. She was to shocked and red to do anything.......

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