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Dragonfire

by MrAquino
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A comment driven story where, after dying from the hands of Sombra and his Doppelgangers, Spike is resurrected with the help of the infamous group F.I.S.T. and must assemble a team that will determine Equestria's fate.
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*The following is recorded audio from a news report on May 25, 3942 at 4:37 P.M. (Canterlot time) *

Are we on? Oh! Hello Equestria! Nansy Pansy reporting in for Channel 10 news! Here we are, live in Canterlot, is a ceremony happening right now where Celestia, our intergalactic immortal queen, is handing out medals for a group of soldiers that stopped an entire Doppelganger hive from taking over Canterlot! Oh! Looks like one of them is actually Spike, Equestria's first Draco soldier, is with them! What's this!? He's been given the Medal of Honor!!! Speculations have pointed that the young, adopted brother to Princess Twilight and Captain of the Royal Guard, Shining Armor, single handily lead these soldiers down and took out the Doppelganger ship above! For being the first Draco soldier, Spike here must have the potential to become a true leader, almost like his step brother. We will soon have an interview with him soon, folks. Stay tuned!

*4:49 P.M.*

Spike! Spike!

Hello?

Spike! Good sir, do you have time to answer some questions?

Uh... sure. What is it?

How does it feel to earn the Medal of Honor?

It... I can't really answer that. I had to what I had to do, which rewarded me with this. It feels good, I won't lie, but, at the same time, it feels natural.

Alright. How does it feel to be the world's first Draco soldier for the Canterlot army?

...It was tough. Only Humans, Mages, and Angels have landed here, any other species working here are rare. With my species having a negative perception by almost everyone in the galaxy, I had to work hard mentally and physically to break all the Draco stereotypes, though upheld the positives view my kind gets.

Good, good. This is more of a two part question, but why did you join the army and what do you plan to do in here?

... This will sound cliche, but I want to protect my sister and prove not all Dracos are the giant, destructive beasts everyone fears.

Care to explain?

Well... with Twilight being there for me my entire life, after seeing all the stuff we've been through, eventually with her becoming a princess, I had to join! Looking back, I was more or less a clown to them who did little to nothing to help but provide laughs and acted as, and please don't take this offended, a servant to Twilight. As for my other reason, I believe that's quite self-explanatory.

Thank you so much Spike. And this is the last, but what do you think will happen next?

... I sleep, read some comics, eat, and wait for something else exciting to happen.

Ha, Ha, Ha! Thank you so much, Spike.

It's Commander Spike now.

Oh! Thank you, Commander Spike. There you have it folks! Commander Spike! Thank you for watching Channel 10 News. This is Nansy Pansy, signing off!

*July 17, 3492. 1:41 P.M.* (Ponyville time)

... Hello everyone... Nansy Pansy here. As you all saw, Spike, Commander of Divison M6, is now dead. What started off as the wedding between the reformed Discord and one of the bearers of Harmony, Fluttershy, soon turned into an attack from the once thought dead tyrant, Sombra, and an army of Doppelgangers following him. We have the princess, and older step sister to Spike herself. Twilight... care to tell us what happened?

...You already saw what happened! We were attacked, and Spike... he... he's... *starts sobbing*

I'm... sorry for your loss. We're all sorry for your lost.

No! You're not! If he hadn't saved Canterlot, none of you would even give a single damn about him!

Princess!!! Whoah! Calm down! I'm just trying to-

NO!!! Shut up!!! I'm going to change things here in Equestria! I'm starting with every Drake out there can join us now, and we need papers & registrations to know if you're still with us and not with Sombra!!!

...Princess, what about the-*Punched in the face*

I'll get those up! Unless someone can bring Spike back or he miraculously comes back from the dead, I'm going to be in charge now! If you want to tell the other Immortals, fine by me! Now get out of my way!

*Gets up* Ow! Well... there you have it folks. This in Nansey Pansey, signing off for Channel 10 news. Can someone give me some titches?

F.I.S.T. Headquarters.

...Spike did everything he could to make this galaxy right... more than what we could hope for. Saving Canterlot, Queen Celestia & the princesses, and all with no real sense of gain whatsoever. With him, Equestria's Pride was at the top, especially to Princess Twilight Sparkle's family. But... it's still not enough!

The Immortals may control order in this Galaxy, but Spike is still our only hope.

But he died at the hands of Doppelgangers. Doppelgangers! We know they're not the true threat. Sombra is still out there, and they're nothing but his pawns!

...And it's up to us to stop him.

Those immortals will never trust F.I.S.T. They won't accept our help, even with all the bits and facts in our hands. But Spike... they'll listen to him. He's a hero... a god damn icon! But... he's only one man.

One Draco, to be exact.

I know. But, if we lose Spike, all of Equestria may follow

...Then make sure we don't lose him, Diamond.

Yes father.

Author's Notes:

Dragonfire's is set in an idealistic future where it takes place a bit over 10 years after the events of the Season 5 premiere, so all kids in the show are now young adults ranging from 18 to 21. Equestria is a unified galaxy where the locations in the show are now different colonies on planets, and, despite having fantasy names, all sapient creatures from the show are remade to fit with the Sci-Fi setting while real animals will vary from animal to robotic. Spike is the main character of this whole story, and your votes will determine his actions on what will happen next in the story. King Sombra is the villain of this whole story, so he matters in that direction. Diamond Tiara is Spike's second in command, as she's in charge of making sure Spike's mission to stop Sombra is a success, and is one of the many crew members Spike will lead & help in this adventure. The Other is mostly used for different characters that, from the show, movies, and (if I've read it) comics who YOU want to be in the crew with that fits a certain role. The O.C. is for one certain planned crew member I have, but it's also a 'just-in-case' character if there's no character from the three for Other is chosen.

This story is a inspired by both Mass Effect 1 & 2, complete with loyal missions, a codex that will pop up for important character profiles, species, locations, & Miscellaneous, and, to top it all off, choices at the end of chapters that will alter the story & characters that YOU decide on what will happen next. Links (usually music) will be added to try to enhance the mood, though it may not, depends on how well I'll do it. The first three chapters show Spike's early military career before the story begins, so choices will be present in the 4th chapter.

Gore added for violence and some detailed deaths. Sex added for anatomical & physiological reasons with some remarks (Ex: "Why are you asking me these questions? Are you trying to have sex with me right now!?" "WHAT!?!?!? No!!! I want to see if you're alright!" "Oh!... Really? Well... Good! I don't want any of that stuff around me!")

Teen
Cancelled
Adventure
Alternate Universe
Human
Gore
Sex
Drama
Sci-Fi

124,743 words: Estimated 8 Hours, 19 Minutes to read: [Cache]

41 Chapters:

  1. Prologue Part 1: The new soldier. [Cache] May 15th, 2015
    4,437
  2. Prologue Part 2: The Canterlot invasion. [Cache] May 15th, 2015
    12,712
  3. Prologue part 3: The Death of a Hero. [Cache] May 16th, 2015
    7,277
  4. Awakened [Cache] May 21st, 2015
    8,991
  5. Meeting the crew. [Cache] May 25th, 2015
    4,783
  6. The Scientist Part A: A Distraction. [Cache] Jun 1st, 2015
    2,973
  7. The Scientist Part B: We're saving this district! [Cache] Jun 22nd, 2015
    4,448
  8. The Scientist Part C: We'll take care of this. [Cache] Jun 26th, 2015
    3,937
  9. The Arch Angel Part A: Recruitment. [Cache] Jun 28th, 2015
    1,626
  10. The Arch Angel Past B: Archangel and the Gangs. [Cache] Jul 2nd, 2015
    5,472
  11. The Arch Angel Part C: Finishing the gangs [Cache] Jul 4th, 2015
    2,264
  12. The Convict Part A: Older faces [Cache] Jul 9th, 2015
    3,102
  13. The Convict Part B: Restoring Order [Cache] Jul 11th, 2015
    1,184
  14. The Warmaster Part A: Respected people [Cache] Jul 15th, 2015
    1,659
  15. The Warmaster Part B: Father & Daughter [Cache] Jul 24th, 2015
    3,445
  16. Little Strongheart - Big News. [Cache] Jul 26th, 2015
    2,224
  17. Not so great reunions. [Cache] Aug 5th, 2015
    5,151
  18. The Mechanist Part A: Sweetness [Cache] Aug 13th, 2015
    3,419
  19. The Mechanist Part B: Grown up [Cache] Aug 19th, 2015
    1,901
  20. Family business. [Cache] Aug 22nd, 2015
    3,120
  21. Some R & R. [Cache] Aug 26th, 2015
    5,601
  22. The Doppelganger Ship. [Cache] Aug 29th, 2015
    3,154
  23. The Assassin Part A: More familiar faces. [Cache] Sep 27th, 2015
    2,093
  24. The Assassin Part B: Used. [Cache] Sep 28th, 2015
    4,002
  25. Diamond Tiara Loyalty Part A: A friend in need [Cache] Oct 9th, 2015
    2,361
  26. Diamond Tiara Loyalty Part B: She needs help [Cache] Oct 10th, 2015
    1,523
  27. The Vigilante Part A: A murder [Cache] Oct 13th, 2015
    2,510
  28. The Vigilante Part B: We'll help [Cache] Oct 23rd, 2015
    1,258
  29. The Vigilante Part C: Take a nap. [Cache] Oct 28th, 2015
    1,101
  30. Sonata Dusk Loyalty Part A: An Epiphany [Cache] Nov 1st, 2015
    2,310
  31. Sonata Dusk Loyalty Part B: I'll do it. [Cache] Nov 2nd, 2015
    801
  32. We need to work together [Cache] Nov 3rd, 2015
    1,023
  33. Sunset Shimmer Loyalty Part A: Killing who!? [Cache] Nov 17th, 2015
    2,217
  34. Sunset Shimmer Loyalty Part B: Arrest him. [Cache] Nov 18th, 2015
    1,051
  35. Sunset Shimmer Loyalty Part C: Shoot, but reprogram [Cache] Nov 19th, 2015
    1,627
  36. Zecora Loyalty Part A: A mother!? [Cache] Jan 14th, 2016
    1,384
  37. Zecora Loyalty Part B: The lost children [Cache] Feb 4th, 2016
    1,615
  38. Zecora Loyalty Part C: Motherly Love [Cache] Feb 10th, 2016
    1,095
  39. Garble Loyalty Part A: Disgraced Scumbag [Cache] Mar 17th, 2016
    1,721
  40. Garble Loyalty Part B: Win-win? [Cache] Mar 21st, 2016
    918
  41. Garble Loyalty Part C: Mercy. [Cache] Apr 7th, 2016
    1,253
Published May 15th, 2015
Last Update Mar 27th, 2016

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