Currently being rewrittn/rebooted.
Rewrite will have the same premise and improve on this story overall, but is otherwise different and started from scratch.
After some bad writers block I looked back at the whole thing and felt I can do much better now then when I originally started this back when I was going through a phase, where there was a bad word every sentence and what not.
Link to the new story will be here: /story/394901/into-the-veil-new-misadventures-of-dj
My name is Derrick Young but you can call me DJ. I was living a solitary, simple gamer life before I, how do I put this. Got transported to the land of Talking Magical Ponies? Yeah I know it's a lot to take in, but as much as I hate to admit it, it's true! And the worst part? They all think I'm cute like REALLY cute, its starting to scare me. Rated M for language, themes and ETC.
23 Chapters:
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Act 1 part 1: I must be high [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Mar 27th, 2015
5,728
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Act 1 part 2: Welcome to Ponyville [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Mar 27th, 2015
6,423
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Act 1 part 3: A Party and a Princess [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Mar 27th, 2015
5,899
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Act 1 part 4: Meet Celestia [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Mar 27th, 2015
8,624
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Act 1 part 5: Impossible Magic! [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Mar 27th, 2015
11,962
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Act 2 part 1: The new ME [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Mar 27th, 2015
9,139
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Act 2 part 2: A few new Muzzles [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Jun 26th, 2015
9,216
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Act 2 part 3: Ancient evil [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Mar 27th, 2015
10,475
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Act 3 part 1: Who's the Hottie? [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Jun 26th, 2015
12,889
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Act 3 part 2: A Looong Day [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Mar 27th, 2015
15,068
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Act 3 part 3: Bear with us [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Mar 27th, 2015
11,101
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Act 3 part 4: Small talk [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Mar 27th, 2015
11,487
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Act 4 part 1: Extra Guests [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Mar 27th, 2015
8,470
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Act 4 part 2: Truth or Dare? [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Mar 27th, 2015
10,414
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Act 4 part 3: 7 Minutes in Tartarus [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Mar 27th, 2015
10,043
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Act 5 part 1: Emotional Barriers [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Mar 27th, 2015
13,316
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Act 5 part 2: Awkward flirting [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Mar 28th, 2015
9,228
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Act 5 part 3: Awkward Hangout [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Apr 3rd, 2015
8,158
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Act 5 part 4: Return [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Apr 10th, 2015
5,239
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Act 6 part 1: Tis the season [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Apr 20th, 2015
10,469
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Act 6 part 2: Finally! [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
May 12th, 2015
9,047
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Act 6 part 3: Everyone Rutts [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Jun 24th, 2015
4,949
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Act 7 part 1: Event on the Horizon [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Jul 13th, 2015
6,890