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Moon Mender's adventure continues right where left off. He jumps at the chance for a new life, but will his old one truly leave him in peace? Some things are better off forgotten.
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The story of Moon Mender continues after his dream of an ending ceases. He continues his struggle to belong in a world so far divorced from the only other experience he can remember, but as an outsider of truly alien mindset, will he ever be able to find a place in Equestria? More importantly, will the life he left behind give up on its death grip so easily? The most important thing to remember is that things are rarely as they seem and sometimes, some things are better off forgotten.

This story is a direct sequel to Memory Pending. Without having read that, this story might be a little strange to most, which is frightening considering how strange it is already. It can be read as a standalone story of course, but you won't get the most out of it.

Further, I’m fully aware that not everypony enjoys more mature themes, so any scenes containing things of an M rated nature shall only be released in a separate story when the time comes. This story deals with more mature themes on a whole, as a warning. This version will do its best to censor the really sensual or graphic content out, of course.

Last but not least, this story has reached this final format through combined efforts of not just myself, but many a helpful pony along the way! Here’s an abbreviated list of those involved and the rolls they played:

Kiroberos – Author (Obviously)

Julia – Editor (Corrections, Grammar, and Flow)

Azu – Beta Reader (Corrections, Flow) (Until Chapter 35)

ExplosiveBrohoof – Beta Reader (Grammar) (Until Chapter 22)

Muffinking – Beta Reader (Corrections, Grammar) (Until Chapter 22)

All of my readers for being amazing, supportive, and best of all, enjoying the world we read and write about.

Young Adult
Complete
Adventure
Romance
Comedy
Gore
Sex

1,047,449 words: Estimated 4 Days, 14 Hours to read: [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]

104 Chapters:

  1. Chapter 01 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Dec 24th, 2012
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  2. Chapter 02 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Dec 31st, 2012
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  3. Chapter 03 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jan 5th, 2013
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  4. Chapter 04 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jan 17th, 2013
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  5. Chapter 05 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jan 19th, 2013
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  6. Chapter 06 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jan 25th, 2013
    6,208
  7. Chapter 07 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Feb 4th, 2013
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  8. Chapter 08 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Feb 15th, 2013
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  9. Chapter 09 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Feb 15th, 2013
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  10. Chapter 10 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Feb 22nd, 2013
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  11. Chapter 11 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Mar 1st, 2013
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  12. Chapter 12 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Nov 19th, 2013
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  13. Chapter 13 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Mar 17th, 2013
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  14. Chapter 14 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Mar 24th, 2013
    12,573
  15. Chapter 15 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Apr 7th, 2013
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  16. Chapter 16 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Apr 6th, 2013
    8,393
  17. Chapter 17 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Apr 9th, 2013
    11,829
  18. Chapter 18 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Apr 12th, 2013
    11,049
  19. Chapter 19 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Apr 21st, 2013
    8,583
  20. Chapter 20 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Apr 26th, 2013
    10,311
  21. Chapter 21 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] May 5th, 2013
    12,702
  22. Chapter 22 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] May 11th, 2013
    10,567
  23. Chapter 23 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] May 17th, 2013
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  24. Chapter 24 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] May 24th, 2013
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  25. Chapter 25 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jun 1st, 2013
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  26. Chapter 26 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jun 7th, 2013
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  27. Chapter 27 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jun 15th, 2013
    8,511
  28. Chapter 28 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jun 21st, 2013
    8,773
  29. Chapter 29 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jun 29th, 2013
    10,526
  30. Chapter 30 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jul 6th, 2013
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  31. Chapter 31 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jul 14th, 2013
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  32. Chapter 32 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jul 20th, 2013
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  33. Chapter 33 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jul 27th, 2013
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  34. Chapter 34 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Aug 3rd, 2013
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  35. Chapter 35 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Aug 10th, 2013
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  36. Chapter 36 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Aug 17th, 2013
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  37. Chapter 37 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Aug 23rd, 2013
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  38. Chapter 38 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Aug 31st, 2013
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  39. Chapter 39 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Sep 6th, 2013
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  40. Chapter 40 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Sep 14th, 2013
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  41. Chapter 41 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Sep 20th, 2013
    9,141
  42. Chapter 42 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Sep 27th, 2013
    10,551
  43. Chapter 43 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Oct 4th, 2013
    10,476
  44. Chapter 44 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Oct 12th, 2013
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  45. Chapter 45 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Oct 18th, 2013
    10,032
  46. Chapter 46 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Oct 25th, 2013
    12,674
  47. Chapter 47 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Nov 2nd, 2013
    10,567
  48. Chapter 48 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Nov 8th, 2013
    12,328
  49. Chapter 49 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Nov 15th, 2013
    10,604
  50. Chapter 50 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Nov 23rd, 2013
    12,044
  51. Chapter 51 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Nov 29th, 2013
    10,401
  52. Chapter 52 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Dec 6th, 2013
    12,589
  53. Chapter 53 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Dec 21st, 2013
    10,550
  54. 2013 Hearth's Warming Short [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jan 24th, 2015
    6,202
  55. Chapter 54 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Dec 27th, 2013
    11,294
  56. Chapter 55 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jan 3rd, 2014
    13,532
  57. Chapter 56 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jan 10th, 2014
    12,138
  58. Chapter 57 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jan 17th, 2014
    12,817
  59. Chapter 58 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jan 24th, 2014
    11,962
  60. Chapter 59 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jan 31st, 2014
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  61. Chapter 60 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Feb 14th, 2014
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  62. Chapter 61 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Feb 21st, 2014
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  63. Chapter 62 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Feb 28th, 2014
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  64. Chapter 63 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Mar 7th, 2014
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  65. Chapter 64 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Mar 21st, 2014
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  66. Chapter 65 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Mar 28th, 2014
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  67. Chapter 66 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Apr 11th, 2014
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  68. Chapter 67 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jun 9th, 2014
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  69. Chapter 68 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] May 8th, 2014
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  70. Chapter 69 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] May 24th, 2014
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  71. Chapter 70 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jun 8th, 2014
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  72. Chapter 71 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jun 21st, 2014
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  73. Chapter 72 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jul 5th, 2014
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  74. Chapter 73 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jul 20th, 2014
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  75. Chapter 74 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Aug 2nd, 2014
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  76. Chapter 75 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Aug 16th, 2014
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  77. Chapter 76 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Feb 6th, 2015
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  78. Chapter 77 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Sep 24th, 2014
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  79. Chapter 78 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Oct 3rd, 2014
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  80. Chapter 79 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Oct 18th, 2014
    10,552
  81. Chapter 80 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Nov 1st, 2014
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  82. Chapter 81 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Nov 16th, 2014
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  83. Chapter 82 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Nov 29th, 2014
    8,031
  84. Chapter 83 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Dec 14th, 2014
    7,792
  85. Chapter 84 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Dec 27th, 2014
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  86. Chapter 85 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jan 10th, 2015
    13,320
  87. Chapter 86 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jan 24th, 2015
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  88. Chapter 87 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Feb 6th, 2015
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  89. Chapter 88 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Feb 25th, 2015
    16,315
  90. Chapter 89 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Mar 7th, 2015
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  91. Chapter 90 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Mar 21st, 2015
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  92. Chapter 91 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Apr 4th, 2015
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  93. Chapter 92 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Apr 17th, 2015
    15,112
  94. Chapter 93 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] May 2nd, 2015
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  95. Chapter 94 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] May 16th, 2015
    7,340
  96. Chapter 95 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jun 1st, 2015
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  97. Chapter 96 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jun 14th, 2015
    7,706
  98. Chapter 97 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jun 29th, 2015
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  99. Chapter 98 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jul 16th, 2015
    8,221
  100. Chapter 99 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jul 26th, 2015
    8,785
  101. Chapter 100 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Aug 8th, 2015
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  102. Ending 1 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Dec 25th, 2015
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  103. Ending 2 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Dec 27th, 2015
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  104. Ending 3 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Dec 29th, 2015
    21,135
Published Dec 21st, 2012
Last Update Dec 29th, 2015

Other Titles in this Series:

  1. Memory Pending

    by Kiroberos
    100 Dislikes, 69,821 Views

    An outsider finds himself flung into Equestria, and forced into a new form. Will he fit in?

    Teen
    Complete
    Adventure
    Romance
    Comedy
    Sad
    Gore

    17 Chapters, 106,466 words: Estimated 7 Hours, 6 Minutes to read: Cached
    Published Jan 12th, 2012
    Last Update Sep 9th, 2022
  2. Forgiveness Pending

    by Kiroberos
    115 Dislikes, 22,252 Views

    Moon Mender's adventure continues right where left off. He jumps at the chance for a new life, but will his old one truly leave him in peace? Some things are better off forgotten.

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