When a human arrives in Equestria, how will he cope? And more importantly, how will he survive?
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When Peter Roose, a famous psychological scientist, digs deep into the human psyche and is finally able to enter it, how will his mind cope to the new surroundings and rules, and how will he survive in a world of vegetarians?
However, more importantly, what will become of him once Celestia finds him? Will the old Prophecy be true, and will he become something greater than Magic itself, or will he leave, and leave his destiny unfulfilled?
And even more importantly, when he arrives, will the ponies shun him or leave him to the elements of nature, with no food, shelter, or a way to defend himself?
And when it comes down to it, he will have to choose many times, and so will all the ponies in Ponyville. And when a new element joins the variables in his choices, he will be left in the shadows of his actions, constantly asking himself if he's doing the right thing.
But, before that, he goes on vacation.
FOR A LONG ASS TIME, AND THAT LONG ASS TIME RUINS THIS STORY.
I've cancelled this. If you want to see this story executed as it was intended, then read this.
Please comment, as I love to see what people think of my story! And don't say what you like about it, say everything you think of it, especially your qualms with it. I read all of my comments, as I'm kind of obsessive like that.
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