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Desperation forces people to do desperate things, things that can lead to a new beginning, or a swift and brutal end.
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The End is near for Queen Chrysalis, after the failed invasion of Canterlot her subjects are dying and her hive is tumbling down around her. She is forced to make a choice, a dangerous choice which will have many unknown outcomes and a choice that askes the question "How far will you go and what will you sacrifice for your survival?"

In her misson to save her Hive from destruction, she unleashes a terrible creature, an unstable, violent mess.

That creature,

Is Nigel M Chalmers

Featured 27/5/14

First piece of writing so any opinions will be welcome. First few chapters will have some minor grammer errors and I do plan to fix them up, just have to find the time.

Would just like to point out the massive help the guide provided by Ezn gave me. I would like to think that it really improved my first peice of writing.

Oh, and if you enjoy Nigel's character, check out Nigel M Chalmers, Emperor

Graded a Ruby: by the Gemhunters group.

Coverart done by Avatar of Madness

Editing of the entire fic is currently in progress, so I apologise for any errors.

Mature
Complete
Comedy
Dark
Gore

129,498 words: Estimated 8 Hours, 38 Minutes to read: [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]

29 Chapters:

  1. Desperation [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] May 27th, 2014
    1,174
  2. What do we do with a flightless diplomat? [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] May 27th, 2014
    1,284
  3. Flawless Introductons [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] May 27th, 2014
    2,657
  4. Second time lucky... [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] May 27th, 2014
    1,541
  5. Chemical Love (I can feel you in my veins) [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] May 27th, 2014
    1,693
  6. An apple a day keeps starvation away [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Nov 26th, 2013
    2,053
  7. Hey! Thats our job! [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Nov 27th, 2013
    1,973
  8. Diplomacy, Commander Chalmers Style [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Nov 30th, 2013
    4,033
  9. Salvation via Home Invasion [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Nov 30th, 2013
    3,249
  10. Trouble in the Wild, Wild West [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Dec 1st, 2013
    4,806
  11. There were... Complications [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Dec 3rd, 2013
    2,419
  12. Confounding Confrontations [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Dec 4th, 2013
    3,186
  13. An Unusual Interrogation [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Dec 7th, 2013
    2,126
  14. Canterlot Capers Two: The Return of The Nigel [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Dec 9th, 2013
    2,360
  15. Not Only a Killer, But a Poet As Well [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Dec 10th, 2013
    2,175
  16. A Truce By Any Other Name Would Smell As Sweet [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Dec 13th, 2013
    4,352
  17. The Mystery Of The Decade [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Dec 15th, 2013
    2,460
  18. Manehattan Here We Come [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Dec 19th, 2013
    2,371
  19. Bar Room Brawls [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Dec 24th, 2013
    2,946
  20. The Morning After [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Dec 29th, 2013
    2,791
  21. Funky Town [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jan 10th, 2014
    2,812
  22. Don't Send a Pony to do a Human's Job [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jan 10th, 2014
    4,433
  23. Why You Should Just Walk Away [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jan 16th, 2014
    2,757
  24. Just Some Friends I Brought With Me [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] May 26th, 2014
    5,528
  25. Chaos and Coffee [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Feb 10th, 2014
    6,621
  26. Two Spooks and A Priest Walk Into a Theological Debate... [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Mar 10th, 2014
    13,067
  27. We're All a Little Insane [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Mar 18th, 2014
    18,708
  28. A Friendship Renewed [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Apr 9th, 2014
    10,895
  29. All Things Must End [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jun 12th, 2014
    13,028
Published Nov 22nd, 2013
Last Update May 27th, 2014
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