My strange friends, clinical insanity is magic.
Chapter 17: 3000 view special
Previous Chapter Next ChapterAs I sit in Daniel's room talking with him about TouHou and other ridiculous things, having just finished a chapter in which Daniel was the author (finally). I am reminded by the stats of my story that I have over 3000 views on my story, so I have taken Danny's advice and decided to do an author's overview chapter, where Daniel and I talk about things that ended up in this fic and why they ended up there. Ommy also has a few things to say as well, so I will pass it off to him for a moment so he can explain a bit more.
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Basically we're just gonna comment on the goings on of the story and what we think of them, as well as explain away some of the more confusing parts of the story some of you might want answers to. If you liek the confusion, it's wise to not read.
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Throughout the story Kyle seemed to do a pretty good job depicting me over all, but did imply a few things that might give the wrong impression of me. First off, RainbowDash is NOT amungst my favorite ponies, jsut to clear that up. As well as I am not a drinker, not because i think its 'immoral' or any bullshit like that. I just don't liek it, same goes for most, if not all drugs.
I also am NOT the dominant type, sorry if that ruins anyone's wet fantasies about me.
With that cleared up let's get into finer details.
When it came to concentration of magic the rolls were kind of reversed until we reached my chapter, seeing as his 'ponysona' is an earth pony and mine is a unicorn, you'd figure I'd be the one with magic. I just corrected this in my chapter and as to conserve space, i will not be going into depth scientifically about these magical things.
"Scientific magic? are you high?"
Shut up me, I'm talking now.
Anyway, before I so rudely interrupted myself I was going to continue on..to...something. Fuck it. Tagging out.
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*fapfapfapfap* Oh I'm on? Shit. Uhh, that didn't happen, and it's not what you think. Moving on. So firstly, I would like to clarify on a few things. Firstly, all the stories you here from us are true (so far). The one about rusty stainless steel? That was a legit story where I was looking around his room, and I found a knife that was made of stainless steel, and it was rusted. I don't know, don't ask. Next, for a while, I was writing without any interaction with Danny, which explains why key elements of his personality were overlooked, and improperly displayed. Next, I actually like Pinkie Pie, but for the sake of the story, I made her the most annoying thing to me.
"Awwww you really like me?"
"How?"
"I'm Pinkie Pie."
Moving on. I never considered Chrysalis to be a smart villain, in fact she was one of the dumbest villains I ever saw in a movie. She was never so bright in my eyes, I also didn't like her very much, but she is a villain after all. Regardless, I can promise that there will be better antagonists in the future. I also got some constructive criticism from Danny about how I was too OP. I will be toning that down in favor of a more balanced team of the three main humans, each with abilities designed to augment each-other. Like an RPG.
That's what I got for now, back to you Ommy.
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Motherfucker! I just died in touhou because you tagged me in! Fucking asshole...
Anyway...seeing as Chrysalis was brought up, I'll address that too. As odd as it may be, Chrysalis is sexy pony to me, so, there's that. And I agree...she isn't the brightest tool in the box, but she isn't quite as stupid as she is made out to be in my opinion, shes just what she is, a changeling.
As for the key personality elements, we will work those back in through a little corrective literature, and creative reasoning.
In terms of the more balanced team, I will be aiding in the effort to balance the team, and keeping everyone at their own level of power instead of one being OP and the others just having 'their moments'. Though with one particularly inflexible character...it will be hard, but I will make it work.
I think that as long as both me and Kyle are working on the story we can balance out the team and keep each other from becoming too OP or drifting too far off from our generalized 'classes'.
I tend to, when writing or collaborating, try to apply science and logical reasoning to ANY action that happens, and make sure that it is physically possible, soemtimes i go overboard and hinder storyline due to it, hopefully at the end of this fic, Kyle will have helped me learn how to tone that down.
Also, Pinkie Pie is best pony.
"Awww, you know what this calls for?"
"A party?"
"A PAR--oh, yea, that, hehehe"
"Let's let me get back to the authors notes now, Pinkie"
"Okie-dokie-lokie"
Anyway, thats my favorite pony :3
Hmm...other authors notes....eh fucks it, tag, Kyel's it
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"So then I said Why would I care if he has AIDS? That's his prob- What? I'm back in? Ohh..."
Anyway, I wanted to talk about Bloodmoon, so far the only truly scary character I have created. She was sort of a spur of the moment decision, which turned into a full on crazy freakazoid scary chick. This was of course what I wanted in a real villain, and it is gonna get really good when Danny kicks its ass. I'm waiting for that. Also, there are a lot of things flying around about how Danny reminds them of themselves. My response to this is simple you are not fucking Danny. Sorry.
Back to you dude.
"I want an authors note!"
"No."
"Please."
"Pinkie."
"Fine."
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"What? Already? I just started petting this pussy"
So anyway,. I suggested that each of the three main characters get to defeat a different evil, and mine was Bloodmoon.
Oh yea, thought I should clear up too that Glenn is in fact(for the most part) Pansexual, and leans towards males, rather than females.
Kyle wasn't SUPPOSED to spoil the bloodmoon and me kicking its ass thing but meh...its whatever.
"I wanna do an authors note!"
"Fine, pinkie, do an authors note"
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HIHIHIHIHI
I'm Pinkiepie and I get to be part of the authors note!
YAY!
Uhhmmmm uhhmmmmm
I think that Glenn should be more active and uhm uhm uhm
OH OH! There should be more parties--
"Pinkie"
And cakes! and cupcakes!
"Pinkiiee"
"What?"
"I think thats all you need"
"Aww, alright Ommy"
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With all that said I think it's safe to say I can end my part in this authors note, and I am sure Kyle feels the same
BBUUUUTTT Just in case he doesn't HERES KYLE :D
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"So if a Westborough Baptist dies in the woods, do people care? They are dicks after all." Oh, I'm back on? Fuck. I'm out of things to talk about. Uhhh. Yeah, fuck it. Stay tuned for the next chapter, coming soon to a Fanfiction sight near you!
See ya!
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