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Rarity's invisible adventure

by DryvernX

Chapter 11: Invisible rescue Part 1(edited)

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During the next day afternoon, Rarity has just started her meeting, with Sassy Saddles, who has blue skin color, wearing a blue skirt, a purple blouse, and has light orange hair. They were sitting on a little cafe drinking some coffee and were talking about the dresses Rarity will show later in her boutique.

"I must say Miss Rarity. You indeed have a sense of morality." Sassy Saddles complemented Rarity.

"Oh stop, darling. I'm certainly not complaining." Rarity responded.

"Oh, and back to your dresses. I can't wait to see them." Sassy Saddles said. Rarity has told her about the newly made dresses. She couldn't wait to see them.

"Just like I can't wait to show them to you either." Rarity said, who was more than eager, to show her dresses to Sassy.

"I must ask you. How is your sister Sweetie Belle?" Sassy asked about Rarity's little sister.

"Oh she's fine. She has just with her CMC group."

"CMC? What is that?"

"Canterlot Movie Club. They go to the theater all the time" Rarity answered.

Then Sassy came up with another question. "Oh, I was also thinking,do you have any assistants working for you?" Sassy asked.

"Well, I do have my young assistant, Coco Pommel. She's about 17 years old and a great assistant." Rarity responded.

Sassy Saddles begins to take more interest in her. "She sounds interesting. Will I meet her today?" Sassy asker her.

"I'm not really sure. Coco Pommel was really into her work yesterday. So she must be really tired today." Rarity said.

"Poor girl. I hope she's gotten a good night's sleep afterwards."

"Me too Sassy. Me too." Rarity said. "By the way, don't you think it's time to see my dresses?"

"I certainly think so. Let's go."

They then raised up, laid money out for their coffee, and began to walk over to Rarity's boutique.
"Let's hope your little assistant, hasn't overslept." Sassy giggled.


Sassy Saddles and Rarity has now arrived to Rarity's boutique. They both were walking towards the door when Sassy noticed the boutique's cameras from above the door.

"Wow. I can also see that your security is really secured." Sassy complimented.

"I know. With those cameras checking I can worry less of thieves coming in." Rarity said. She then opened the door and showed it to Sassy.

"Ta da darling. A nice boutique right in front of you." Rarity said while making a good first impression of her boutique's insides.

Sassy was quiet as she looked into the boutique.

"Uhm... Rarity. About your boutique..." Sassy was about to say before she was cut off by Rarity.

"Yes of course. My boutique is beau-tee-ful. I even made all the decorations myself." Rarity continued to make a good impression of her boutique.

"No no, not that. Please look inside." Sassy nervously said, with a sweat drop.

Rarity was confused and then did so. She looked inside her boutique and almost fainted at what she had seen. Her boutique was really messed up. "What?! What has happened to my boutique?!" Rarity yelled and quickly ran inside. She looked at the mess: Her newly made dresses were covered in paint, her self-made undergarments have been burned to crisp, and all the spools, needles, and other stuff were all over the floor. Rarity almost cried at all the worst possible things.

"My dresses are all ruined! Completely ruined!" Rarity cried. Rarity begins to cry her eyes out, making her mascara run. “My boutique! All ruined!" Rarity cried, while falling to her knees in sorrow.

Sassy Saddles felt bad for her. She kneeled down to Rarity, and gave a comforting pat on her back. The pat then turned into a comforting hug.

"Ssshhh... It's alright Rarity. I didn't know it would happen." Sassy Saddles comforted her. Rarity however still cried.

"You are just saying thaaaatttt! Me and Coco has just cleaned up the last mess just yesterday!" Rarity cried. But her crying soon stopped, when she reminded herself of something. She quickly raised up from the ground. "Coco Pommel! She was here last night. I hope she's alright." Rarity said full of concern. Rarity ran over to the workroom, and saw a shadow, what appeared to be Coco Pommel.

"Coco! Thank goodness you are alright. What happened last ni..." Rarity said, before noticing "Coco Pommel" falling down to the ground, and falling out of the shadow, revealing to be just a doll... With Coco Pommel's clothes.

"What?! No!!!" Rarity said, while beginning to cry again. Her assistant was as well gone. But now the question is just: What happened to her? And where is she? Rarity stopped her crying, and begins to take out her phone.

"Sassy. I'm afraid to say, that our friendly meeting, will have to end, sooner than I thought." Rarity said, while beginning to text on her phone. Sassy nodded her head, understanding Rarity's situation.
"I understand. If you want, I can stay, and clean up the mess." Sassy offered her.

"Thanks Sassy." Rarity smiled to Sassy, who in response smiled back. Rarity then finished her text, and send it to her 6 friends. The text says "Quickly, meet me at my boutique. It's an emergency! Rarity.". Rarity then began to wait for her friends arrival.


Meanwhile, Coco Pommel was beginning to wake up. She slowly opened her eyes, and saw herself stark naked and her hands chained up like a cross and her chained to the floor and forcing them to go spread eagle. Coco Pommel saw that she was hanging against a wall. Coco felt fear in her heart.

"Where am I? Where is my clothes?" Coco said, while trying to break free from the her bonds, but to no avail. "I need to get out of here!"

"Oh, you're not going anywhere." A voice said. Coco looked up, and saw a familiar face. It was her ex-boss Suri Polomare.

"Suri? What are you doing here?" Coco asked her. Suri however merely laughed at her.
"What am I doing here? I was the one who brought you here." Suri now said.

"But why? Why are you doing this?"

"I thought it was obvious my dear Coco." Suri said, while leaning towards her. "For revenge." Suri said with venom in her voice.

Coco became more and more afraid. But what you did to Rarity, was so awful. You didn't even deserve to win that dress up contest." Coco said while remembering the time where Suri almost humiliated Rarity to make herself the default winner.

"I deserved it! I deserved that trophy more than this Rarity could ever achieve." Suri said remembering what happened that has made Suri hate both Rarity and Coco ever since.

"But you won't get away with this. When Rarity checks the cameras the will see that it was you who abducted me." Coco firmly said. But Suri wasn't worried at all.

"Oh I don't think so. The cameras haven't noticed a thing and I didn't even destroy the cameras." Suri said, while beginning to laugh wickedly.

"What... What do you mean?" Coco asked nervously.

"Well, why don't you ask Rarity. When she arrives of course." Suri said with an evil smirk before disappeared into the shadows. Leaving the naked Coco alone.


Almost 30 minutes later, the rest of the Humane 7 arrived to the boutique. They were also shocked at the boutique's current state.

"Wow. This almost looks like a wrestling arena." Rainbow Dash said, the boutique's current state reminded her of a wrestling match she once saw on TV.

"Well I'll say, this looks worse than any mess,Apple Bloom could ever make on her own." Applejack complimented the place.

The rest of the Mane 7 met up with Rarity, who was standing besides some dresses, which have been painted.
"Hello girls I’m glad you all came, we’ve got an emergency." Rarity said.

"Well, if it's about cleaning up this mess. Count me out." Rainbow Dash said.

"No no Rainbow. It's not with helping me clean up this mess." Rarity said. The others now looked at her.

"Then why are we here?" Twilight asked Rarity, who in response took out the dol, with Coco Pommel's clothes on.

This made the others twist their eyebrows in surprise.

"This looks like Coco Pommel's clothes. What's it doing on that doll?" Sunset asked.

"I don't know. That's why I wanted you to come." Rarity replied.

"Wow, this reminds of yesterday, where i left all my clothes on a scarecrow. So i could go invisible yesterday." Pinkie Pie said, while remembering her invisible streak yesterday.
"You were invisible yesterday? So did I. Awesome!" Rainbow Dash said in surprise. Yesterday she pranked on Lightning Dust. "High-five!" Rainbow Dash yelled out, while her and Pinkie makes a high-five.

"You know, that also reminds of yesterday. I was stopping some old enemies while I was invisible." Sunset said, remembering that she stopped the Dazzlings plan for power.

"AndIi was exposing the Flim Flam brothers to get ma plow back." Applejack said, remembering her invisible escapades.

"So that's the reason why there wasn’t many people around yesterday and why the Flim Flam brothers were running away."

"You know... I was also invisible yesterday." Fluttershy said shyly. "I was trying to protect the sea turtles yesterday at the NAP." She said, remembering as well.

"Wow, guess almost all of us were invisible yesterday." Sci-twi said, who was currently the only one, who hasn't been invisible yet. Rarity then broke off their minor talk about yesterday, by making a few fake coughs.

"Can we focus please?" Rarity said their attention back.

"Anyway. When I arrived today and saw this mess I headed to the workroom to make sure nothing happened to her and I found this doll. I’m scared this is supposed to send a message whoever did this has dear Coco." Rarity said.

Sunset tried piecing together the few clues they had, but there were still a few more clues required. "Do you have any camera videos?" Sunset asked her.

"I do have cameras. But they didn’t show anyone coming in last night, or Coco going out." Rarity answered.

Sunset then walked over to the doll, while having a few speculations. "Rarity. You don't mind if i do this?" Sunset asked her fashionista friend.

"What do you mean?" Rarity asked. Then the others saw Sunset Shimmer taking off Coco's clothes off the doll.

"Sunset?! What are you doing?" Rarity asked, while being a bit shocked. Sunset stripped the doll, until there was only the bra and panties left on it.

"Aha, i knew it." Sunset said.

"That's right. She knew it." Pinkie Pie said. "Knew what?" Pinkie Pie whispered to Fluttershy.

“Rarity, have you seen Coco wear this type of underwear?” Sunset

“I have seen her in those before, yes.” Rarity answered with a nod.

"Then they didn’t just leave Coco’s clothes to send a message. Whoever did this needed Coco to be naked when they kidnapped her. And you can already guess how it's possible." Sunset Shimmer said.

Pinkie let out a huge gasp. “She was abducted by aliens! They needed her naked so they could put in tube filled with alien goo for whatever they have planned for her, like putting her mind in a simulation when she’s forced to live her worst nightmare on an endless loop until it breaks her mind!” Pinkie looked and no one seemed to being thinking the same thing she was, save for a now scared Fluttershy.

“No Pinkie, my invisibility potion.” Twilight said.

“Ooooooohhhhhh! Yeah that makes sense.” Pinkie

“Rarity, you said you couldn’t find the bottle of potion you took or your clothes when you left them behind. Looks like someone was following you when all that happened and took them all.” Sunset said.

“In that case we need to figure out who has any kind of grudge against Rarity.” Twilight pondered.

“We don’t need to figure it out. I know someone who harbors a hatred for me and Coco: Suri Polomare!” Rarity replied.

“Wait, you mean one of my former classmates from Crystal Prep?”

“You weren’t there when it happened Twilight, sometime before the Friendship Games Suri and I were in a fashion competition. She set things up to try sabotaging me and making me look like a joke. However, Coco tell me and the judges beforehand. So I won and Suri was put on prohibition. She said she would get her revenge someday. And now she’s making good on the threat.”

"I say we get that varmint." Applejack said, while cracking her knuckles.

"Sounds good to me." Rainbow Dash said, while doing the same.

"But we still don't know where they are." Fluttershy said. But then Pinkie Pie appears from behind the doll.
"I know where they are. Suri is hiding in a building near the docks." Pinkie Pie said confusing looks from the others.

"How do you know?" Sunset asked her.

Pinkie Pie responded by taking out a paper, which says the green building near the docks.

"Where did you find it?" Sci-twi asked.

“It fell out of Coco’s shirt.” Pinkie Pie replied.

But now, enough of the chit chat, they needed to save an assistant.

"Okay girls. Let's go to the docks." Rarity said, while pointing out of the door.

The Mane 7 then left out from the door, leaving Sassy Saddles behind, to clean up the mess.

"I hope Coco's alright." Sassy said with concern.

Author's Notes:

What will happen next? Find out next time.

Next Chapter: Invisible rescue Part 2 Estimated time remaining: 1 Hour, 5 Minutes
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