Rarity's invisible adventure
Chapter 12: Invisible rescue Part 2
Previous Chapter Next ChapterThe Mane 7 has arrived to the docks, to rescue Coco Pommel, from Suri Polomare. There were many containers around the place, it was very foggy, and no was people was there. The girls looked around the docks, but couldn't see much, due to the fog. The Mane 7 monitored the surroundings, for an abandoned building.
"Girls. Can anyone of you, see a building around here?" Sci-twi asked her friends, who stands beside her. They however shook their heads.
"Nope." Rainbow Dash replied.
"Not yet Twi." Sunset Shimmer said.
"Nopie lokie." Pinkie Pie said.
"Haven't seen anything yet darling." Rarity responded. She was the most worried, out of them.
"Not really." Fluttershy responded, while whispering.
"We will find her sugarcube." Applejack replied. They continued their search, until they finally saw something, from the fog. A large abandoned building, near the docks. Which may be Suri Polomare's hiding place.
"This must be it." Sci-twi said, while pointing at the large green building. Rainbow Dash then begins to crack her knuckles, and is more than ready to fight her way in.
"Then what are we waiting for? Let's kick some Suri butt!" Rainbow Dash said. She was about to run in recklessly, but was stopped by Applejack, who held her shirt from behind. "Hey, what the heck Applejack?"
"Rainbow! We can't just go on a full assault." Applejack said.
"Why not?" Rainbow Dash asked curiously.
"Because Suri is holding Coco hostage. Not only could she be hurt, but we don't know where she is yet." Applejack explained. The others agreed to Applejack's explanation. A full assault will no doubt, get them nowhere.
"Fine, then let's sneak in. Find and rescue Coco. And then kick some Suri butt!" Rainbow Dash said, with her newly made plan. The others sighed, and rolled their eyes. They needed a plan. A plan not coming from Rainbow Dash.
"Do any of you, have a plan, that's not from Rainbow Dash?" Sunset Shimmer asked her friends.
"Hey!"
"Sneak attack?"
"Kidnap Suri?"
"I don't know. It may be a trap." Sunset said.
"Then how about the invisibility potion?" Pinkie Pie suggested. The others looked at Pinkie Pie, and smiled at her idea.
"That's a great idea Pinkie. Girls, do you have some invisibility potion on you?" Sci-twi asked. The others responded, by taking out a small bottle of the potion, from their backpacks.
"Great. Then we can use the potion, to sneak in undetected, find and rescue Coco, and get out of here." Sci-twi said. The others except Fluttershy was very confident in the plan.
"Uhm, may i say something?" Fluttershy timidly asked her friends.
"Sure Fluttershy." Sci-twi responded. They looked at Fluttershy, waiting for what she wants to say.
"Maybe we should save the potion, for when we're inside the building." Fluttershy said. The others gave Fluttershy a confused look.
"Why? Our plan is perfect." Sci-twi said.
"But it may also be too reckless to use the potion right now. Who knows, maybe Suri will see it coming. And by the way, i don't have much potion left." Fluttershy said, while showing she doesn't have much of the potion left.
"That's a good point Fluttershy. And we don't have time to make more now." Rarity said. She hasn't taken much of the potion with her, and was only having a bit more than Fluttershy.
"But if we get caught. Suri will no doubt confiscate our things. How can we have our invisibility potion, around us all the time, without Suri noticing?" Sci-twi said, while trying to figure out a plan. But Sunset smiled, having already made one.
"Girls. I may have a suggestion." Sunset said. The others looked at her.
"What is it Sunset?" Pinkie Pie asked. Sunset smiled a little embarrassingly.
"Let's just say, it's something i learned from yesterday." Sunset Shimmer said, while explaining to her friends.
Meanwhile, Suri was inside the room, Coco Pommel was held captive, while still chained up. Suri held a whip, a tampon, and a few other things, that was sitting on a table.
"Turn around Coco. And then bend down." Suri commanded her. Coco reluctantly obeyed, she turned around, and then bended down, exposing her butt to Suri.
"What... What are you gonna do?" Coco asked, while shaking in fear. Suri then raised her whip...
"Whip!"
... And whipped her, right in her left butt cheek. Coco felt pain in one of her cheeks, and got tears in her eyes.
"That... Hurts." Coco said weakly, but then got whipped on her other butt cheek.
"Whip!"
"Silence Coco. I'm in charge here. And i order you to shut up." Suri harshly said. Then she took out her tampon, and walked closer to Coco.
"Now sit still." Suri commanded. Coco holded still, and then felt something behind her.
"I can feel something in my ass." Coco said, she turned her head around, and saw Suri putting a tampon, right in her ass. Suri smiled wickedly.
"And there will happen much more than that." Suri said. She was about to whip Coco again... Until she heard the door opening up, revealing a large grey man, coming in.
"Mistress Suri. The girls you told us about, has just arrived." The grey man said, who is revealed to be one of the diamond dogs, a gang of grey men, who can make a lot of trouble. Suri smiled wickedly, and begins to leave the room.
"I guess a little break, could do you some good. Besides, you will have some playmates soon." Suri said, while laughing wickedly. She exited the door, closed it, along with locking the door, leaving Coco alone again. Coco had many tears in her eyes.
"Please... Help me." Coco said weakly, while hoping help will come soon.
Later, the Mane 7 were walking towards the building. They saw broken windows around it, and many cracks on the walls.
"You know, for a fashionista Suri is, she hasn't really cleaned up her own hiding places." Rarity said, complimenting the building. They walked further into the building, and saw an entrance.
"There is an entrance right there." Pinkie Pie said, while pointing at the entrance. The other Mane 7 looked at it, and saw the entrance was made for cars and trucks.
"Keep your guard up girls. As i said, it may be a trap." Sci-twi said, while holding her guard up. The others also let their guard up. The girls slowly walked into the building. They were now in a huge container hall, with only a few containers in it. When all of them were inside, the entrance suddenly closed. They turned around, and saw Suri behind them, standing in front of the closed entrance.
"Well, look what the cat dragged in." Suri said, while giving an evil smirk towards them. The Mane 7, especially Rarity glared at her.
"Suri. I knew it was you, who took the potion, i threw out." Rarity said, but was interrupted by Pinkie Pie.
"You knew? I don't remember the writer wrote that part." Pinkie Pie said, while the other Mane 7 gave her a confused look.
"Sorry. Continue." Pinkie Pie said, while giving an innocent smile. Suri then smiled wickedly at them.
"You are correct Rarity. I stalked you, and was surprised that you had some invisibility potion. And once you threw it out, i thought it could be useful to me." Suri Polomare said. She remembered the part, where she not only took Rarity's water bottle from the trash can. And then took Rarity's abandoned clothes, just to spite her. "And i can see that you've taken your friends with you. That'll just make it more fun."
"Enough Suri! Where is Coco? You had better not, landed a mean finger on her." Rarity threatened.
"Oh, you will see her soon enough." Suri said, with an evil smile on her face. She then snapped her fingers, and the Mane 7 was getting held back, by 8 Diamond Dogs.
"Unhand us you ruffians!" Rarity yelled out, but to no avail. The Mane 7 tried to fight back, but the Diamond Dogs were too strong, even for Applejack, who was held by two of them.
"Strip them." Suri commanded her henchmen. The Mane 7 gave a shocked look, as Suri wanted them to be stripped. "They could be hiding something."
"Shall we take off everything Mistress Suri?" A diamond dog, who holded Fluttershy and Twilight asked. The other Diamond Dogs gave a twisted smile, at the suggestion.
"No. Just all except their undergarments." Suri said, while the Diamond Dogs sighed in disappointment. "But when i'm going to play with them, you can join in." Suri said, which helped the Diamond Dogs mood, as they gave a new twisted smile. The Diamond Dogs then begins to both hold them, and rip off their shirts and skirts.
"Hey! Watch my clothes!" Rarity yelled out. But to no avail, as Suri's henchmen continued to rip their clothes apart. Fluttershy almost cried in embarrassment. Once they were down to their bra and panties, and all their destroyed clothes and boots, on the ground, the dogs threw the Mane 7's backpacks over to Suri. Suri Polomare searched the bags, and found their water bottles.
"So this must be your invisibility potion huh?" Suri asked, the Mane 7 gave a shocked look.
"Yes. Now give them back!" Rainbow Dash yelled to her.
"Rainbow shush." Sci-twi said, trying to silence Rainbow. But Suri smiled wickedly at them, seeing that Rainbow has now spoiled to them, that it was indeed the potion.
"If you want them, come and get them." Suri said. She then opened a sewer hole, and threw all the water bottles down there. The Mane 7 was very shocked.
"Well that's no biggie. We got plenty of more of these, in our backpacks." Pinkie Pie said, while unintentionally spoiling, that they have more.
"Pinkie!" The other Mane 7 yelled at her. Suri however smiled wickedly at them.
"Why thanks for telling me." Suri said, while taking all their backpacks, and threw them down the sewer hole. The others except the dogs glared at Pinkie Pie, who smiled innocently. Now Suri Polomare looked back at them.
"Before i will play with you seven, i need to find some more gear. So in the meantime, you can see Coco Pommel." Suri said, while beginning to walk over to a door. "Dogs! Take all 7 of them, to Coco."
"Yes Mistress Suri!" One of the D.D said. They took the Mane 7, and led them to Coco's cell. Suri was searching her stuff, and found other things to use, like anal plugs, vibrators, and red candles.
"Oh Rarity. Soon you will wish, that you never became a fashionista." Suri wickedly said, while smirking.
The Mane 7 were led to a room, with cell bars on them. One of the D.D opened the door.
"Okay Coco, you have company." The man said, while showing the Mane 7, Coco Pommel naked. They were shocked, and saw that Coco has been whipped on her butt cheeks, has a tampon up her ass, and was softly crying. The D.D pushed all 7 of them in, and locked the door.
"Coco darling. Are you alright." Rarity said in concern, while walking
"Ra... Rarity?" Coco said weakly and afraid. She looked up, and saw both Rarity, and her friends along with her. That made Coco smile a little.
"Yes it's me, Rarity. What happened to you? How can Suri, do all those horrid things to you?"
"Suri... Whipped me, played with my butt, and will do even more worse soon..." Coco said. "And by the way. What are you doing here? Are you trying to rescue me?"
"Of course we are. That's what friends do." Rarity said, while smiling warmly to her.
"But how will we escape?" Coco asked Rarity.
"Simple darling. We will use our invisibility potion."
"Invisibility potion?"
Yes darling, a potion our friend Twilight made. And something Suri got her hands in." Rarity explained to her. Coco's eyes widened, now seeing what Suri meant before.
"So that's how, she could easily kidnap me. I hate to admit it, but that was very smart." Coco said.
"That's right darling. And we can go invisible, so we all can escape." Rarity said. "But Suri ripped all our other clothes apart, so we're down to only our bra and panties." Rarity sadly stated. Coco looked up, and saw all the Mane 7, were only in their undergarments. But then she saw that they don't have any bottles with them.
"But i must ask you. Where is your potion? You said you needed it to become invisible." Coco asked. Rainbow Dash and Pinkie Pie simply smiled, while Rarity, Twilight, Applejack, and Fluttershy blushed a little.
"About that. We anticipated that Suri wanted to search us, so we hided our invisibility potion somewhere else." Sci-twi said. Then the Mane 7 each sticked their hand, in their panties, and took out a small bottle.
"And just so you know viewers. The water bottles Suri threw out, were just ordinary tap water." Pinkie Pie whispered to the viewer, much to the others confusion. But they let it slide, not only because that's just how Pinkie is, but also because that they don't have time to think about it.
"Anyway, girls. Let's go invisible." Sunset said, while drinking from her bottle. The others did the same, and all the Mane 7's bodies disappeared, while their bra and panties are moving around. Coco was surprised that it worked.
"Now let's give both the Diamond Dogs, and Suri a little surprise." Rainbow Dash said, while the others nodded in agreement(even through it couldn't be seen).
Suri has just exited the room, and was standing in front of the D.D.
"Diamond Dogs. Get all the girls here. I'm ready to play with them." Suri commanded.
"Yes Mistress Suri!" The D.D saluted. The Diamond Dogs walked over to the cell. And was starting to unlock the door.
"Okay girls. You can come out now, for Suri wants to..." One of the D.D said, before noticing that the girls except Coco are gone, along with their bra and panties laying on the ground.
"Guys! The girls have escaped! The girls have..." The D.D yelled out to the others, before getting hit by a metal pipe from behind, knocking him unconscious.
"Ya didn't have to hit him that hard Rainbow." Applejack while invisible said to Rainbow.
"No. But i just wanted to." Rainbow Dash invisible said, while giving a mischievous smile. Then Fluttershy(also invisible) took out the keys from the D.D, and walked over to Coco. She unlocked Coco's chains, and Coco was free.
"Oh thank you so much." Coco happily said, while trying to give Fluttershy a hug, except she don't know where Fluttershy is. Then they saw some more D.D arriving.
"You girls take care of them. I need to do something." Rarity said, while beginning to walk away.
"Where are you going Rarity?" Sci-twi asked.
"To settle a score with Suri." Rarity said, while her eyes were on fire. The other Mane 7, were invisibly fighting the D.D, while Fluttershy is secretly escorting Coco out of the building.
Suri Polomare still waited for the Diamond Dogs, to return with the Mane 7, and Coco Pommel. Suri was beginning to get more, and more impatient.
"Where are those morons? They better not play with them without me." Suri said impatiently. But then, she heard a voice behind her.
"You are not playing with anyone anymore today." A voice said, and Suri easily recognized that voice. She turned around, but couldn't see her anywhere.
"Rarity. So you managed to escape huh?" Suri said.
"Yes. Me and my friends escaped with the invisibility potion." Rarity said, which slightly confuses Suri.
"What?! But i threw it all away." Suri said, until Rarity smirked at her.
"Not exactly. It was just ordinary water bottles you threw out. Me and my friends hid the real ones in our panties." Rarity explained. Suri gritted her teeth, for not thinking about taking off their undergarments in the first place.
"I will remember that, the next time i kidnap you, and your friends." Suri wickedly said, she then took out her whip, and prepared to strike.
"We shall see. For now you will pay, for the horrible things you have done." Rarity said, while glaring at Suri Polomare.
"I may not be able to see you, but i can still hear you." Suri said, while whipping to her right, which almost hit Rarity.
"That was close." Rarity thought. "I need to stop her. Going too close to her is too dangerous, as long as she have that whip of her's." She thought. "I must get rid of it."
"Come on Rarity. Show me that butt of yours, for me to whip. Oh wait, you don't have one, since your invisible." Suri taunted her. Rarity gritted her teeth, but then saw an opening. Rarity quickly ran over, and bashes Suri away, who lost her whip, from her grip. Suri tried to get it back, but it was kicked away by the invisible Rarity.
"Well, two can play the game of invisibility." Suri wickedly said, while taking out some invisibility potion, from her pocket. She quickly drinked it, and her body became invisible. Suri then ran off, to the next door.
"Try and catch me Rarity." Suri said, while running into the door, and closes it.
"You are not going anywhere." Rarity said, while running after her. Rarity opened the door, and entered the next room. Rarity invisibly looked around, and saw all of Suri's clothes on the ground.
"Invisible against invisible? How are we gonna fight?" Rarity asked, but then her body became visible, now standing in the nude. Then she saw some small blocks get thrown at her, which Rarity dodges.
"I just had to ask, didn't i?" Rarity said, while covering herself. Now Suri had the invisibility advantage.
The other Mane 7, and Coco, were still fighting off the Diamond Dogs. The D.D were unable to touch the Mane 6, due to not being able to see them, while Coco is hiding behind a container. The D.D then begins to see no point in continuing the fight, and one of them now begins to take out some fire works.
"Boys. No point in continue the fight. We retreat, but not before creating a distraction." A D.D yelled out, while beginning to light up the fireworks, with long fuses. The Diamond Dog threw the fireworks at the cell room, and begins to run away.
"No! We must stop those fireworks. Our bra and panties are still in there." Rainbow Dash yelled out, and was about to run in there. But then their bodies became visible again, completely naked.
"Oh no. There goes our invisibility." Sci-twi said. Rainbow Dash was about to run back to the cell, she was stopped by Applejack.
"Rainbow. It's too late to get them back." Applejack said, while holding Rainbow's shoulder. And just as Applejack predicted, the fireworks exploded, destroying their remaining clothes completely.
"Why do i feel, that when ever we have done something good with our invisibility, we always end up naked?" Rainbow said to herself.
"Because that's what the author wrote." Pinkie Pie said, while confusing the others again.
"But where is Rarity?" Fluttershy asked, while worrying about Rarity.
Back to Suri and Rarity. Suri was still throwing empty blocks at Rarity, which she manages to dodge. Rarity was hardly able to predict, where Suri was.
"Give up Rarity, as long as i'm invisible, you can't take me down!" Suri yelled out, while she's almost right, Rarity thought up something.
"Maybe i can't see her, but tends to stand beside the boxes." Rarity thought. And once Suri was about to lift some more blocks up, Rarity quickly tackled her to the ground.
"You... You can't beat me?!" Suri said, while Rarity looked victoriously at her.
"Guess i just did Suri." Rarity said. They then heard the other Mane 7, and Coco walking over to them.
"Rarity. You are alright." Fluttershy said in relief. "But where is Suri? I saw her clothes on the ground."
"She's invisible. And i got her right..." Rarity said, before feeling a leg, kicking her away.
"Rarity!" The others yelled out, while running over to Rarity.
"You may have won this time. But you will see me again, i can promise that." Suri said threateningly. They then saw the window getting smashed, which may indicating, that Suri jumped out of it.
"Drat. She got away." Rainbow Dash said, as she has hoped to pummel Suri a bit.
"Just let her, she won't be any trouble for us now." Rarity said, while calming down Rainbow. Coco then looked at the Mane 7, and hugged Rarity.
"Oh, thank you for rescuing me. I was so scared." Coco Pommel said, while hugging Rarity. But then looks at sympathy towards all of them. "But i'm so sorry for all of you, that you lost all your clothes." She said, while seeing that all of them were stark naked.
"It's alright Coco. I'm just happy right now, that you are safe." Rarity said, too happy to feel her modesty now, which the other Mane 7 agreed to.
"But just one question. How are we gonna get home?" Pinkie Pie asked, while the others saw Pinkie's meaning.
"Pinkie's right. We can't go home... Well, not like this." Rainbow Dash said, and due to their nudity, it's gonna be hard coming home, without getting noticed. But then Rarity saw something.
"Girls. I may have an idea." Rarity said, while giving a smile. She pointed at some empty barrels. The others looked at Rarity a little embarrassed by the idea, but they got along with it, since there was nothing else to use.
All of the Mane 7, along with Coco, were walking home, while only wearing barrels, which they needed to hold. They blushed a little in embarrassment, but fortunately not many didn't really bother to notice them. They eventually arrived back to Rarity's boutique, and sees Sassy Saddles, cleaning up the last mess. Sassy looked surprised at them.
"My my, what has happened to you?" Sassy Saddles said, full of confusion.
"It's... Kinda of a long story." Rarity said. "And i need to get my friends some new clothes." She said, while they all began to walk inside, to get some new clothes on.
Meanwhile, Suri has just arrived to an empty alley. Her invisibility is gone, and she stood there, completely naked. But Suri wasn't that worried.
"I may have lost this battle. But i still got more where they came from." Suri said, while sticking her fingers in her pussy, and took out a few extra bottles out.
"However, i've lost my clothes, i'm soon out of invisibility potion, and i need money. So i should just make some bank robberies, or something. And then plan my new revenge." Suri said, while trying to plan her next move. But then she heard a voice behind her.
"And maybe i can help you with that." The voice said, from behind her. Suri quickly covered herself, looked behind her, and saw a familiar man, with blonde hair, white uniform, and had white skin color.
"Blueblood?" Suri said confused.
Next Chapter: Blueblood's organization Estimated time remaining: 48 MinutesAuthor's Notes:
Just so you know. Sci-twi in my story, won't wear glasses. But anyway, Coco is saved, and Suri has been defeated, but we will see her again. See ya next time.
