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Rarity's invisible adventure

by DryvernX

Chapter 10: Some mysteries revealed(edited)

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Night has fallen, and everything was getting dark. Rarity was in her house, in her undergarments, reading a book, while laying on her bed, with a table lamp on.

"What a day I’ve had today." Rarity thought to herself, while reading her book. She had quite a day today. She had been invisible once again this afternoon, and was almost exposed to some students. Fortunately her friends were there, and they gave Rarity her clothes back. But in the end, it was all worth it, since she taught Blueblood a little lesson, by pushing him down a pile of mud. And he will hopefully never know, that his ex-crush was the one who pushed him down there, not to mention doing it stark naked.

"But in the end, it was actually worth it." Rarity thought. Her door was then opened by Sweetie Belle, who was wearing her pajamas.

"Goodnight Rarity." Sweetie Belle said to her older sister, while waving her goodnight.

"Goodnight darling Sweetie Belle." Rarity replied. Sweetie Belle then closed the door, and was probably going to bed now. Rarity then returned to reading her book. She had worked quite a bit today, since she had also worked on a few dresses today. They have just been finished today, and they are currently in her boutique, which was only a little nearby her house.

“Better, get to bed. I don’t want to meet Sassy Saddles with bags under my eyes. I just hope Coco Pommel will be alright there, she insisted on staying behind at the moment, and it's getting very dark." Rarity said, who can't wait to show her new dresses to Sassy Saddles tomorrow, but was also a little worried on her assistant.. Rarity then puts her book aside, and begins to turn her table lamp off. She then slowly closed her eyes, slowly beginning to fall asleep.


Meanwhile, in an alley nearby Rarity's boutique, a mysterious figure, was glaring over to the boutique. Said figure stepped out of the alley and was revealed to be a woman Rarity’s age. She had light pink skin, purple curly hair, a yellow shirt, a blue skirt with three buttons on it, a two-tone blue scarf around her neck, along with some purple boots.

"Now’s the perfect time to give Rarity’s place and little “renovation” and teach her a lesson in crossing Suri Polomare! Doubt she’ll be getting business much longer." Suri said. She then took out the water bottle Rarity threw out the day before.

Suri Polomare with an evil smirk drank out of the bottle, and threw it into her bag. Then her body and hair disappeared, thus making her invisible. But was still wearing her clothes.

"Just need to get out of these clothes and I’ll be free to carry out my plans" Suri Polomare laughed as she pulled off her scarf, took off her shirt, then her skirt and boots. Then she unhooked her bra, and yanked down her panties, she put everything in her bag and tossed into to the alley where no one would see them. Now Suri was nude and invisible.
"Perfect. Now those pathetic cameras won't see me come in." Suri said. She begins to walk toward the boutique. She saw it had cameras in the front and grinned at how unless they were, and then walked over to the locked door.

"Piece of cake." Suri said sticking her fingers in her pussy, and pulled out a paperclip. She then begins to pick the locked door until it opened with a click.

"Great, now let’s start with phase one." Suri said.

She then begins to walk into Rarity's boutique and turned to the security controls on the side of the door and turned it off. She then turned her focus on the store.

It was quite fancy inside, and had three newly made dresses in the center. The first one was orange and had glimmer all over it. The second was blue and had fake gems on it. The last one was black and had pink butterflies on it. Suri wasn't really that impressed on her opinion.

"So that's Rarity's new dresses? I could've made it much better." Suri insulted the newly made dresses. Suri has planned on ripping all those dresses apart, one by one. But then saw a few paint buckets in the counter. That gave Suri Polomare an even better idea.

"I think they could use a little more color." Suri thought. She took the paint buckets up, and poured it all over the dresses. The dresses were now a mess. Suri smirked wickedly at her masterpiece.

"Now that's just a perfect for Rarity." Suri thought, but she wasn't done there, she still had a few more things to do.

"And now for phase two." Suri thought. She then walked over to the undergarment place. She saw some of Rarity's self made undergarments.

"They should just burn to hell." Suri thought. She then took all the undergarments, and threw them into a nearby trashcan,, Suri then took an open lighter out of her pussy, earning a moan in the process and flicked it. "Now they can burn." Suri thought wickedly. She threw the lighter down in the trash can, burning them down to crisp

Now Suri needed one last thing to do. She quickly stepped out, back into the alley she and dug into her bag, pulling out and smaller bottle she put a bit of the potion in, a cloth and a bottle of chloroform.

"And now for phase three." Suri thought. She walked back into the boutique, where she found the working room, and saw a sleeping girl, with off-white skin, light blue hair, a light lavender shirt, light blue skirt, and purple shoes, her name is Coco Pommel, Suri Polomare's ex-assistant, and Rarity's current.

Suri began to approach her when she accidentally kicked and an energy drink can, waking Coco.

"I'm awake Rarity, I wasn't trying to..." Coco said, before noticing it was dark, she realized that she has been sleeping for quite a long time, since she has insisted Rarity that she would work here a little more today.

"Oh... It's late. I guess i must have focused too much on my work." Coco said. She then decided to go home, and begins packing her things.

"I hope Rarity will forgive me for oversleeping a bit." Coco pommel said, while she was beginning to leave. But just as she was about to go out of the door, she was pulled back from behind.

"What the? What's going on?" Coco thought in a panic. She was pulled back to the working room. Then a cloth surrounded her mouth. Coco tried her best to fight back, but was soon getting weaker and weaker, until she fell unconscious.

Suri smirked at her. "You think you can rat me out, quit on me, and get away with it? Think again Coco." Suri said. She then opened up the very small bottle. She opened Coco's mouth and poured a few drops of water down her mouth. Soon Coco's body turned invisible, but her clothes was still on her.

"Now, let's take out those horrible clothes away from you." Suri wickedly said. She then pulled down her skirt, then took off her shirt, taking off her shoes, then pulling down her panties, and then unhooked Coco's bra. Now Coco was both invisible, naked, and unconscious.

"But before I leave. I need to make sure Rarity knows that something has happened to her." Suri said. She then took all of Coco's clothes and found an unused model doll. She then put all of Coco's clothes on it, and then left the doll inside the working room. She went over to the desk where Rarity did her paperwork and a wrote a note, she then placed down Coco’s shirt.

"Good. Now let's get out of this pathetic boutique." Suri said, while beginning to lift up the unconscious invisible Coco. Suri turned the security back on, closed the door, and began to walk through the streets, grabbing her bag in the process.

Then, both Suri's and Coco's invisibility came undone, and both of them were now naked. But Suri didn't really seem to mind.

"It hardly matters now. As long as I can go invisible. I could actually care less if I don't wear any clothes.." Suri thought. She had better things to think about, than her modesty.


"You’re next Rarity. Just you wait." Suri said while both giving an evil smirk and holding the unconscious naked Coco as she continued walking through the streets.

Author's Notes:

Now we know who the mysterious girl is. Tune up for next time.

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