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Shining Chitin Redux

by Damaged
Shining Armor had a little extra something done to him by Chrysalis during the lead-in for the wedding/invasion. Now things are getting completely out of hoof.
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Note: While this is listed as a sequel, the first story does not need to be read to enjoy this. The prequel was a short comedy piece, that everypony (myself included) liked so much that they wanted to see a serious version. This is that version.

Beginning at the start, this is following the same plot-points as the Prequel story, but unlike that, this is a mature retelling of all the things that happened, with only a small fraction of the silly jokes.

Shining Armor is beset by an odd malady, originally a curse by the Queen of the Changelings. He doesn't know it, but he is destined to walk on holey hooves himself, if he can avoid going crazy first.

Yes, there is sex in the first chapter. No, this is not indicative of the series and will not be common.

Art thanks to the wonderful Raven (Little bit of blood/violence art on their tumblr, be warned.)

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Mature
Complete
Romance
Sex
Drama

131,407 words: Estimated 8 Hours, 46 Minutes to read: [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]

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56 Chapters:

  1. 1 - Beginnings [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Oct 2nd, 2021
    2,456
  2. 2 - Infiltrating the System [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Oct 2nd, 2021
    2,236
  3. 3 - Advanced Interrogation Techniques [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Oct 2nd, 2021
    2,477
  4. 4 - A hole in the plan [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Oct 2nd, 2021
    2,098
  5. 5 - Straightening up [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Oct 2nd, 2021
    2,074
  6. 6 - New Game in Town [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Oct 2nd, 2021
    2,160
  7. 7 - Confession [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Oct 2nd, 2021
    2,069
  8. 8 - Renewal [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Oct 2nd, 2021
    2,072
  9. 9 - Breakfast [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Oct 2nd, 2021
    2,080
  10. 10 - Perception [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Oct 2nd, 2021
    2,441
  11. 11 - Enlightening [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Oct 2nd, 2021
    2,444
  12. 12 - Release [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Oct 2nd, 2021
    2,339
  13. 13 - Facing Mistakes [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Oct 2nd, 2021
    2,334
  14. 14 - Final Move [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Oct 2nd, 2021
    2,332
  15. 15 - A New Game [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Oct 2nd, 2021
    2,464
  16. 16 - Letting Go [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Oct 2nd, 2021
    2,446
  17. 17 - Joining [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Oct 2nd, 2021
    2,147
  18. 18 - Family [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Oct 2nd, 2021
    2,240
  19. 19 - More Family [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Oct 2nd, 2021
    2,192
  20. 20 - Meal Time [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Oct 2nd, 2021
    2,159
  21. 21 - Almost Found-out [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Oct 2nd, 2021
    2,099
  22. 22 - Home is Where the Hive is [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Oct 2nd, 2021
    1,999
  23. 23 - Including [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Oct 2nd, 2021
    2,251
  24. 24 - Trouble "Resolved"? [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Oct 2nd, 2021
    2,279
  25. 25 - Discovery [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Oct 2nd, 2021
    2,974
  26. 26 - New Order [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Oct 2nd, 2021
    2,462
  27. 27 - Second Breakfast [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Oct 2nd, 2021
    2,249
  28. 28 - Racing to the Finish [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Oct 2nd, 2021
    2,110
  29. 29 - Change [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Oct 2nd, 2021
    2,327
  30. 30 - Big Song and Dance [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Oct 2nd, 2021
    2,586
  31. 31 - Up into Third [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Oct 2nd, 2021
    2,365
  32. 32 - Spies and Counter-Spies [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Oct 2nd, 2021
    2,137
  33. 33 - Prelude to Change - pt1 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Oct 2nd, 2021
    2,584
  34. 34 - Prelude to Change - pt2 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Oct 2nd, 2021
    2,468
  35. 35 - Prelude to Change - pt3 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Oct 2nd, 2021
    2,800
  36. 36 - A Change of Heart [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Oct 2nd, 2021
    2,614
  37. 37 - Coming Clean [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Oct 2nd, 2021
    2,407
  38. 38 - Turning Point [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Oct 2nd, 2021
    2,563
  39. 39 - Gaining Speed and Slowing Down [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Oct 2nd, 2021
    2,461
  40. 40 - Promises [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Oct 2nd, 2021
    2,390
  41. 41 - Bonding [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Oct 2nd, 2021
    2,327
  42. 42 - Coming Together [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Oct 2nd, 2021
    2,257
  43. 43 - Return [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Oct 2nd, 2021
    2,197
  44. 44 - Revelations [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Oct 2nd, 2021
    2,435
  45. 45 - Complications [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Oct 2nd, 2021
    2,500
  46. 46 - Simplification [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Oct 2nd, 2021
    2,462
  47. 47 - Past Glory [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Oct 2nd, 2021
    2,026
  48. 48 - An Apple Through and Through [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Oct 2nd, 2021
    2,289
  49. 49 - Tried [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Oct 2nd, 2021
    2,561
  50. 50 - Eggcellent [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Oct 2nd, 2021
    2,272
  51. 51 - Eggcited [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Oct 2nd, 2021
    3,030
  52. 52 - Adjustments (bet you are glad it wasn't an egg pun, those crack me up though) [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Oct 2nd, 2021
    2,254
  53. 53 - Like a Flat Stone On a Calm Lake [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Oct 2nd, 2021
    2,430
  54. 54 - Investigation and Discovery [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Oct 2nd, 2021
    2,246
  55. 55 - Full Disclosure [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Oct 2nd, 2021
    2,011
  56. Epilogue 1 - Cloptional Extra [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Oct 2nd, 2021
    2,725
Published Jul 23rd, 2016
Last Update Jul 18th, 2017
Shining Chitin Redux

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