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Shining Chitin Redux

by Damaged

Chapter 56: Epilogue 1 - Cloptional Extra

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The filly was tiny. Shining Armor, in all her queenly glory, was glowing with happiness beside Cadance. The mother of the filly, her mane looking a little flat and drained, was grinning from ear to ear.

Tiny compared to the Empress and Queen, Princess Flurry Heart was a perfect little blend of her parents' looks. Soft pink fur already covered her tiny body, and she sported a tuft of cerulean hair on her head, and a matching one on her tiny tail. The little princess already had a straight unicorn horn, but even the old picture showed little pits in it. Piercing, opal eyes looked tiredly at the camera, and the little tiny filly had spread her large, insectile wings.

Star Gaze, a young, yellow furred and blue maned unicorn stallion, held up the baby picture in his magic. "You were pretty cute even then." His complement was as open and from his heart as it was predictable and campy. "Shame you grew up to be so ug—" He didn't get any further; a large stuffed pony was launched at him.

"You are the worst, sometimes." Flurry, nearly twenty full years older than the picture her coltfriend was looking at, was already reaching for another stuffed animal from her bed. Light green magic wrapped around the stuffed dragon, and she was already lining up on Star's head as he recovered from the first, stealth attack.

Thrusting his magic into the stuffed pony, Star Gaze animated it and made it charge towards Flurry. "Only sometimes? I need to step up my game!"

The plush pony was joined in battle by the dragon, and the fight was on. A tiny spear appeared in the little pony's magic—an extension of Star's—but despite being armed, they had to dodge and dive away from the mighty, plush toy dragon.

Flurry was having a ball. Moments like this one made her appreciate how much Star "got" her. She wasn't just "the first hybrid" or "the next great ruler of the Crystal Empire." She was Flurry Heart. She was just a young mare trying to walk in the shadow of two of the greatest parents in Equestria, an aunt who was literally the nicest pony on all Equus, and two aunts who were immortal and had powers beyond her ability to fathom.

Yet here she was, playing foal games with her coltfriend, and just being Flurry Heart. Distracted from the combat by her thoughts, she didn't notice the brave pony knight race past the dragon's defenses and, to her shock, grab up her toy, turn it sideways and tilted the wyrm backwards in a classic, amorous pose. "You are such a romantic!"

Star noticed that despite her outrage, Flurry wasn't having her dragon fight free of the embrace. The pony leaned down, and the knight's snout brushed the dragon's. He shot Flurry a wink, but was shocked when the dragon turned the tables, rolling her big body and pinning the pony knight under her. "Well. A very forward dragoness, are we?"

Green light flared in the large room, and Flurry grinned a fang-filled mouth at her coltfriend. "Maybe she… Maybe I am." Her tongue snaked out and she gave a little hiss. "What would our brave knight do— Urk!"

Pressing himself against Flurry's scaled body, Star Gaze pushed a little until she was off balance. Rather than a show of strength, his advance had far more sinister intentions.

Flurry's heart beat fast as Star twisted, turned her to her back and bent her down slowly so that his face was above her own. His snout pressed down and their lips touched. The power of their kiss melted all her resistance, and she reached up to curl her arms and leathery wings around Star's shoulders. He was warm beyond belief, and at that moment he was everything she wanted in life.

Green fire licked upwards from Flurry's draconic body, leaving the halfling gazing up at him along her small, dainty snout. Her lips were much softer, but Star found himself enjoying kissing her in either form; it was the same Flurry Heart after all.

Moments passed, and the mare and stallion stared into each other's eyes until both wanted to move things along. Kissing they had done plenty of times. Star broke the kiss, but followed up with a little nuzzle to make sure Flurry knew he would have liked it to last longer. "You know I love you to bits, Flurry of my Heart?"

Of course Flurry knew, but she liked to be told all the same. She lightly tasted Star Gaze's love, and gave a happy sigh. "Me too. Let me show you how much."

If Star's words had made Flurry's heart beat faster, hearing her reply was all kinds of stunning. anticipation and trepidation filled him to near bursting. Using his magic, he righted Flurry from her reclined position and eased her gently onto her hooves. "Show me?"

Flurry's wings chirped, a deep note from such large appendages, but she kept her excitement under wraps. Stepping as slowly as she could—while her heart told her to run—she tried to make her plot sway as she climbed up onto her bed. "Yes. Show you. Brave knight, you have defeated the dragon in combat…"

Things back and low in Star's body stirred, but being a gentlecolt, he would never draw attention to them. Something poked at his thoughts: pride. Lifting his chin, Star Gaze gave a little shake and turned to the side. He watched Flurry's eyes drawn to him, then along his body and down a little.

"Wow…" Flurry hadn't seen a stallion in so intimate a moment before. She had been to sexual education classes—classes for both ponies and changelings—but to see a stallion's penis up close was entirely new. It certainly looked like the slides of the penises she had seen in her classes, but there was more; the only reason Star was so worked up was because of her.

The word combined with that look was everything a stallion could ever want. Confidence built in him that he had done the right thing, and with confidence came more hardness. By the time Star was by Flurry's bed he was aching. "Wow?" He lifted his forelegs up to the covers, bent so that he was simply kneeling on them, and started easing his weight up. "All I get is a 'wow'?"

Flurry wasn't content to sit back. She crawled towards Star on her belly, eyes locked on his. "On your back." A surge of self-assurance projected in her voice, and she could see by Star's hungry look that he liked it too.

Climbing fully onto the bed and rolling to his back, Star felt Flurry's lips touch his mouth again. He looked up at his own special princess, and melted under her gaze. But her lips drew back and down, kissing down his neck and to his chest. Down further they reached just between his forelegs and he had to fight not to groan. Tossing his head back, his horn pierced the covers of the bed.

Ignoring the ripping sound, Flurry kept nuzzling and kissing the front of Star's barrel. He squirmed and started to moan at last, just how she wanted him. She continued a moment longer, just enough time that she was satisfied everything would be ready for her further along his body. Kissing along his barrel, she gave away her target as her attention got closer and closer to Star's shaft.

It was every bit as big as Flurry had first seen, and more. She muttered another, "Wow," under her breath and kissed his tip. Flurry's barrel was grabbed by Star's forelegs. He pulled her closer and to her side so he could return the favor.

The angle was not just wrong, but Star couldn't reach Flurry's vulva at all. He gave a soft whine as more kisses came, and a slow lick. Trembling in bliss, he pushed his snout forward and by luck found somewhere sensitive.

Flurry gasped at the touch to her teats. She squirmed a little at first, but when Star nuzzled and then licked along one little bud, she arched her spine and chirped loudly. Egged on by the attention, she opened her mouth and wrapped her lips around the end of Star's shaft. Heat and intense, musky flavor assaulted her senses. Flurry Heart closed her eyes and focused on Star's body, running her tongue along the base and edging forward, slowly, to take more of him.

Too blinded by pleasure to keep focused on Flurry's body, Star trembled and shook. Snapping his eyes open, he realized that he had been a little over-eager. His body pumped once, twice, and then bliss overwhelmed him.

With little warning, Flurry almost laughed around Star's shaft. She gulped down what he did release to keep cleaning easier, and found the flavor to be strange, but not unappealing. When his issue reduced to nothing, she pulled her mouth from him. "Little quick on the trigger, Star."

"Yeah? Well, you deal with that for the first time then!" Star, being a rather typical stallion, was already getting ready for more.

"Is that an offer?" Flurry chirped her wings and looked down her body, seeing Star look down his at her.

Star's thought's flickered a moment, before settling in on wanting Flurry for herself. "No, but give me a moment and I will see if I can return the favor another way." His shaft was already hard again, but Star scooted along the bed a bit further, pulling at Flurry's hips with his forehooves until he could reach her properly.

"Star!" Flurry's gasp and shout of surprise dissolved into a sigh. The second lick along her folds made her eyes cross. The third just started her chirping again. She wrapped her forelegs around Star's croup and pulled him against her. There was no room to get down to his shaft, but there were two delicate things before her snout.

Aroused beyond belief, Star had his shaft sandwiched between their bodies, and was doing a good job of licking Flurry into bliss. When her mouth closed around one of his testicles, he gave a bass moan into her. He saw her first wink, then another, and on her third, Star captured the nub of supersensitive flesh carefully in his lips.

Flurry tried to deny her pleasure. She wanted to hold back and prove to Star that she had more staying power, but his slow suckling of her clitoris was just too much. Squirming, she arched her neck back and gave a high-pitched squeal as lightning raced through her. Trapped by her body's responses, she drank love from her lover and clung to him as tight as she could.

Both ponies lay still, Flurry coming down from her climax, Star glowing in a job well done. Some moments passed as each took in the new level they had taken their relationship to.

"More?" Both asked at exactly the same time, and each giggled at being so equally matched.

"If you want, Flurry. I don't want to push you." Star wanted to be talking to his fillyfriend, and not her dock, so he eased back, rose up on his knees and hocks, and turned.

Flurry's heart sped as she felt Star move on the bed. She rolled a little towards him. On her belly, she looked back and up at Star and, as if making the point of him "pushing" her, she tilted her tail to the side and drew her long wings away from her back. When her coltfriend seemed to freeze, Flurry decided to give him a push. "If you don't 'push' me soon, I might have to do the pushing myself."

Part of Star wanted to test her word, and wanted to see if she would take charge like that. Thankfully, that part was not in full control, and instead he moved towards her, shaking like a leaf. "Just… Just tell me if I hurt you."

"If you hurt me, you will know about it." Flurry looked back over her shoulder and found the terrified, excited look on Star's face to be adorable. She wiggled her rear, and he lowered himself to her waiting back. The feel of a stallion on her was amazing, and Flurry wanted to snuggle and stay just like this.

Star was so nervous about the big event. He pulled himself backwards, sliding his shaft along Flurry's back until it fell free behind her. Excitement overwhelmed him and he bucked forwards.

Flurry's head jerked up in surprise. "Ow! Hey, do I need to tell you that isn't a hole? To the left, stud."

"Sorry!" Star wanted to say more, but he felt magic wrap around his hardness. This time he couldn't stop, he bucked, and speared into Flurry's clutching, fiery-hot depths, guided by her magic.

He was in Flurry, and despite any misgivings she might have had it did hurt just a little. She bit her lip, remembering the talks she had been given; this was how it was meant to be. There was a brief moment when the pressure and fullness was uncomfortable, and suddenly it wasn't. A switch flicked in Flurry's head and she opened her mouth and sang.

Hearing Flurry's moans—in time with his thrusts—Star felt the nervousness eaten away by the pleasure they were both experiencing. Each thrust took him deeper, and in no time at all he felt his barrel fully connect with her croup. Completely in control physically, but lacking it mentally, Star was guided and encouraged by the raised voice of his fillyfriend.

The word "intense" did nothing to describe how Flurry felt. "Sex" was such a small word, and "love making" too seemed inadequate. She and Star Gaze were connected on a physical and emotional level that defied belief, and as he bucked into her again and again, she felt her magic build along with her arousal.

His earlier release had granted Star a little extra stamina, but it had also raised the bar on the use of his delicate shaft. Trying to hold back his release as best he could, he knew he was fighting a battle that he would lose. Gloriously, happily lose.

When Star lost his fight for the second time, Flurry groaned in frustration. Even the hot rush of wet fire inside her body wasn't enough to push her past the edge. She whimpered and looked back at Star. Her changeling side latched onto her stallion just as she laid eyes upon him. His pleasure, his release fed into her through her feeding and it was enough.

The bond suddenly forged with Flurry shoved Star from coming down right back into full arousal and more. He climaxed hard a third time, and reveled in the clutching tightness milking at his body. He gave everything he could to Flurry, both emotionally and physically, and regretted doing neither.

With Star slumped down on her back, Flurry finally had some time to get comfortable with having his size inside her, and it felt great. Pleasure came not just in the echoes of their lovemaking, but also in the knowledge that it was something very special for both of them.

"Sis! Mom said to—" Chirp didn't knock, he just threw Flurry's door open and froze. The remnants of green fire circled a shape on the bed. "Oh. Hi, Star!" He took in Flurry's coltfriend, straddling a huge stuffed toy on the bed. "Have you seen Flurry?"

"N-N-No!" Star looked from Chirp to the "stuffed toy" under him. "Have you tried the guest rooms the yaks are in?" It was all the way across the castle, and would give them time to get decent before Chirp came back.

"Huh, don't know why she would be there. Thanks, Star!" Chirp closed the door and took off at a run, his wings buzzing.

Flurry released herself from her soft and snugly shape. "I am going to—" Her promise of revenge was cut short by Star's lips. She melted, as did her anger.

"She isn't there!" Chirp poked his head back in, blinked at the position his sister and Star were in, and slowly closed the door. Taking off at a gallop, only Chirp's hoof-beats could be heard.

"Murder…" Flurry mumbled the word through Star's lips. "Brothers… Need a… Lock..."

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