Have you ever been reading a story, really starting to get into it, when all of a sudden the author makes some horrible flub or tosses in some asinine, lazy thing that completely pulls you out? What's that? More times than you care to mention? Well now's your chance to vent.

Be it a horrible typo, a fourth-wall break, a jarring perspective shift, a terrible scene transition, instructions to play background music, or some other thing, if you have the misfortune of running into something that absolutely kills your immersion, feel free to share it here and let us feel your pain. Like the other thread, do not attribute the work. That means no mentioning of titles, authors, and be careful what you link. Also, please limit yourself to no more than three images/videos per post (including reaction images).

Here are two examples:

Sweetie Belle looked a lot more mature in the clothes, almost appearing to be simply a small pony instead of actually being a filly.

You're not even going to bother with describing what that looks like, story? Nope! All we get is a hyper-lazy-link.

“Hey Spike, what are you doing?” Twilight asked calmly.

“Oh… Errr nothing… You know, I craved for some chems and came here for some before going with the crusaders” Responded Spike.

That's supposed to say 'gems,' not 'chems.' The worst part is that the author admitted to spotting this error, but decided to leave it in because (s)he thought it was funny.