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Ponytropolis II

by Pinkamena666

Chapter 22: The First Victim

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With editing tips by TheOnlyOneWhoCared

Twilight let out a yawn as she woke up, being greeted by the morning sun. She tried to stretch but found both arms being weighed down. Looking to her left she saw Midnight cuddling up to her, a peaceful smile on her face. Twi smiled and looked to her right to see Aqua cuddling with her, the same peaceful smile on her face.

Twilight leaned in and kissed Aqua on the forehead just as they heard faint, frantic banging from the main door. Both mares groaned and yawned as they stretched, giving Twilight room to pull her arms free and get out of bed.

"What's going on?" Asked Midnight.

"Not sure," the unicorn replied, pulling on her panties and slipping into a shirt. "But, it sounds important." She then pulled on a pair shorts and ran over to the bed, giving Midnight a kiss on the lips. She then ran around to the other side and gave Aqua a kiss on the lips. "Bye, girls," she said quickly, running out of the bedroom door.

Midnight watched her leave before looking at Aqua and smiling. "Just us, now..."

"Yeah..." Aqua replied. "Just us..."

Midnight bit her lip and scooted closer to the blue mare. "I probably should get to know you better, so... on your back, Aqua," she said, pulling the mare underneath her.

Dash led Twilight down the hallway once the unicorn left her room.

"So, what's up, Dashie?" she asked.

"There's been a killing," the cyan mare explained as they began heading down the stairs.

"A killing?" asked Twilight. "I thought we brought back the police."

Dash smirked and eyed her. "An unusual killing."

There was something about the way Dash said that that made Twi feel a little nervous.


Dash parked her car besides the local game shop and parked her car. There were a couple police cars parked beside the building as well, one even having a tire up on the sidewalk. As Twi and Dash left their car, Spitfire came walking out of the blood-splattered door.

"The hell?" Asked Twilight, noticing the blood all over the glass door.

"Well well well... If it isn't the Elementals..." Spitfire said with a spiteful tone as she approached them. "The city's heroes."

Dash sighed and walked up to her. "What's going on?"

The yellow mare hesitated before turning and walking towards the bloody door. "There's been a killing. A brutal one," she said, opening the door.

"What's so unusual about this one?" Asked Twilight, still wondering why they were called in.

Spitfire eyed her and held the door open for them. "See for yourself."

Twi tilted her head and looked at Dash, who gave her a light nod. Twi then approached the entrance and looked inside, her eyes going wide in fright. Feeling like she was about to throw-up, she quickly turned away and coughed. "H-Holy shit..."

It was then Dash's turn to take a look, letting out a long whistle. "Damn... What the hell caused this?"

"We're not sure," said Spitfire. "But, this is about as crazy as the shit you deal with, right?"

"Maybe even crazier," Dash replied, entering the shop and looking down at the mutilated body. "I've never seen anything like this."

Twilight finally manage to calm herself a little and looked at the body again, noticing something. "Not to point out the obvious, but... why is he naked?"

Dash simply shrugged. "Last minute screw?"

"He had sex... and then he was killed?" The unicorn asked, trying to solve this mystery, but coming up with nothing.

"Magic was supposed to be a myth, right?" Dash asked. "Changelings are pretty rare, too... Couldd this be another... rare thing?"

"What, like another real life myth?" Twi asked, crossing her arms in thought. "It's possible... I mean, I'd have to read up on every myth relating to this murder..."

Dash let out a chuckle. "I guess you'd better get started, then..."


Octavia walked down the sidewalk with a smile on her face. After having just quit the strip club she was ready to begin her musical journey. As she passed by an alley, a couple colts approached her; one black and one blue.

"Hey, baby," the blue one cooed, stepping up to her. "You're that mare from the Wet Mare, aren't you?"

Octavia gasped softly and stepped to the side. "I... I am very sorry, but... I don't do that anymore," she said as she started to move around him. The black colt then grabbed her by the waist, forcefully walking her into the alley. "H-Hey! What are you doing?!"

The colt then held her against the side of the building, looking into her eyes. "We just want a free ride, is all... You know, we saw you at the strip joint."

"I told you, I don't do that anymore!" The mare cried out.

The black colt then put a hand over her mouth to shut her up. "Just keep quiet and let us have our fun," he said as the other colt unzipped his pants.

Octavia closed her eyes and whimpered as tears ran from her eyes. She began struggling and began to beat on the black colt's chest. He simply grabbed her left fist with his right hand and held it against the side of the building.

The blue colt smiled and pulled out his cock. "Get her ready," he cooed, stepping closer.

The black colt quickly grabbed the mare's pants and gave them a downwards yank, revealing her panties. Octavia squealed into the colt's hand and tried to bite it. He just let her do her thing as he grabbed her shirt, giving it a yank and tearing it open, revealing her bra. The blue chuckled and grabbed her panties, pulling them down.

"Get ready, bitch," he said darkly, gripping his cock.

Octavia prepared for the worst and clenched her eyes shut. She soon heard a grunt before a sickening squish noise.

"What the fuck?!" The black colt yelled, letting go of her wrist and mouth.

Octavia then dropped to her knees and cried, wondering what was happing but was also very upset and slightly traumatized. She then pulled her knees to her chest as she sat on her butt, hearing the sound of a sickening tear and liquid splattering. At the same time as she heard the noise, she felt a couple drops of something hit her in the face.

Once the trauma wore off she slowly opened her eyes, whimpering and sniffling. She then went wide-eyed as she saw the blue colt with a hole where his heart should be. The black colt lay by her feet, his head a few feet from his shoulders in a pool of blood. She then covered her mouth quickly before hearing something above her. Looking up, she found herself face to face with a red mare, who was covered in blood and somehow clinging to the side of the building like a spider. Octavia yelled into her hand before fainting, collapsing to the ground as everything went black.

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