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Cornholio4's This day should have been just perfect...

by cornholio4
Story has been removed from Fimfiction.net
Twilight has a different reaction to the ending of the Changeling Invasion...
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After the Changeling are successfully defeated, all seems to be well once more for all of Equestria. However, for the one pony who knew all along that there was trouble afoot, she feels that this was more than a failed attempt at an outside force attempting to take over the land, she feels this was an act of all out betrayal and broken promises by her friends, mentor and family. The wedding has now been called off, the wielders of Harmony are under scrutiny as is the Princess and Captain Armour is facing trial for his actions which led to the attack all the while a heart broken bride has to come to terms with the treatment of her favourite mare she once sat for long ago. Will this day be perfect for them after all?

The original version has been cancelled but the author Duragan has let me continue it! The first two chapters will stay the same but the rest of the story will be mine!

Enjoy! =D

MLP;FIM (C) to Hasbro and Lauren Faust.

Story of the first two chapters (C) to Duragan.

Rest of the story (C) to Cornholio4

Everyone
Incomplete
Adventure
Sad

11,361 words: Estimated 46 Minutes to read: [Cache]

5 Chapters:

  1. This day should have been just perfect... part 1 [Cache] Oct 9th, 2013
    4,101
  2. This day should have been just perfect... part 2 [Cache] Oct 9th, 2013
    3,419
  3. This day should have been just perfect... part 3 [Cache] Oct 10th, 2013
    1,426
  4. This day should have been just perfect... part 4 [Cache] Oct 13th, 2013
    1,123
  5. This day should have been just perfect... part 5 [Cache] Oct 30th, 2013
    1,292
Published Oct 29th, 2013

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