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Twilight sees a vision after casting a spell to see the future and ends up saving a mysterious colt.
39 Dislikes, 15,660 Views

Magic is supposed to be controlled, released when the caster wants it to be and in the form dictated by the spell. To Twilight's glee, she succeeds in creating a spell to see a short distance into the future after many hours of research. The test doesn't exactly go as planned, but it works just in time to save a stallion's life. As she tries to reach out to a pony who she finds has nearly given up on life, she finds to her surprise, wonder, and concern that not all facets of magic are explainable, nor the workings of the heart - especially one that has been broken.

First story in my series. Currently undergoing a massive edit, as there were a lot of errors. Chapters 1-16 completed on the edit thus far. The endings are slightly un-canon, and that will be fixed by the edit, but until I get that up, take comfort in the fact that the shift has no bearing on the rest in the series, which currently follows the alternate path. Chapters 21-24 will likely be edited the most, as they were, admittedly, kind of rushed.

Oh, on a side note, I wrote this whole thing releasing a chapter a day as a personal challenge. Not my best piece, but the one that started them all. Ending one is blatant gary stu, I'll say it now. Art by askheroichamburger of DeviantArt

Teen
Complete
Romance
Slice of Life

82,999 words: Estimated 5 Hours, 32 Minutes to read: [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]

25 Chapters:

  1. Premonition [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Apr 22nd, 2012
    3,060
  2. Cerulean [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Apr 22nd, 2012
    3,047
  3. Talk of the Town [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Apr 22nd, 2012
    3,469
  4. Prelude [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Apr 22nd, 2012
    3,187
  5. Ponypile! [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Apr 22nd, 2012
    3,002
  6. Warmth [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Apr 22nd, 2012
    3,136
  7. The Race [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Apr 22nd, 2012
    3,218
  8. Promises [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Apr 22nd, 2012
    3,293
  9. Flashback [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Apr 22nd, 2012
    3,022
  10. Home [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Apr 22nd, 2012
    3,040
  11. Trial by Orchard [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] May 12th, 2012
    3,140
  12. Scent of Apples [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] May 12th, 2012
    3,304
  13. The Rift [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] May 12th, 2012
    3,214
  14. Driving the Nails Deeper [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] May 12th, 2012
    2,987
  15. Soul Song [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] May 12th, 2012
    3,090
  16. To a Glorious Future [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] May 14th, 2012
    3,314
  17. The Anti-Checklist [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Mar 26th, 2012
    3,321
  18. Bake Sale [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Mar 26th, 2012
    2,914
  19. We Are Not Amused [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Mar 26th, 2012
    2,972
  20. Winter Comes Early [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Mar 26th, 2012
    3,283
  21. Accursed [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Mar 26th, 2012
    3,323
  22. Healing the Scars [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Mar 26th, 2012
    3,113
  23. Codex of Strife [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Mar 26th, 2012
    2,993
  24. The Seventh Element [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Mar 26th, 2012
    5,747
  25. alt: The End of Tears [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Mar 12th, 2012
    4,810
Published Feb 15th, 2012
Last Update Mar 12th, 2012

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