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Hater in Equestria

by MrLongSurname

Chapter 10: Chapter 10: A Mare in Denial

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Chapter 10: A mare in Denial

A/N: I've decided to continue. This chapter will randomly switch between his mare personality and normal personality. When he is in his mare personality, the words will be in bold. His thoughts will always be in his normal personality.

Celestia walked off smiling to herself and chuckling before I could regain control and ask her to make me into a stallion. Well fuck, I can't even control my own mind anymore. What is my life?

"You can stay with me Lasting Light," said the psychiatrist, who is the cause of my double personality,

"Okay," I said happily and she said,

"My name is Shimmering Skies by the way, you can just call me Sky,"

"Okay Sky," I said, "what do you wanna do?"

"Let's go to find your friends, they'll want to see the new you,"

"Let's go then," I said and we left for Ponyville. In the middle of the train ride I subtly regained control and I sighed in relief. Sky was reading a newspaper. She looked up at me and I smiled at her. I had to convince her the mare was still in control. We arrived in Ponyville and she went off to the market whilst I wondered to the library. I opened the door and shouted,

"Twilight you gotta help me!"

She rushed to the door and saw it was me,

"Oh there you are George, what's wrong?"

"What's wrong is that the psychiatrist that Celestia made me see convinced me for a bit to embrace my mare personality and now it keeps fighting me for control over this body,"

"Just let it take over for a second, I want to see what happens,"

"Urgh fine but it's gonna be hard for me to regain control,"

I let it take over and I was pushed back into the depths of my split mind. I said,

"Hi Twilight, it sure is a nice day today, isn't it?"

"It is, how's life?" Twilight asked,

"It's amazing. Being a mare is making me so happy,"

'This isn't so bad, I like him like this,' Twilight thought to herself,

"That's great to hear, made any new friends,"

"yep, the kind mare who helped me become a true mare and showed me how to style my hair and what type of dresses suit me. Her name's Shimmering Skies and she's in the market," I said happily. Inside though, I felt as if the more I let the mare take control, the weaker I get until she takes over completely. If that happens, I'll never get back. I push against the mare and succeed,

"Ya see what I mean?" I said, "it's the complete opposite of my personality, you need to get rid of her before she takes over completely,"

"I dunno George, she seems really nice. You're on your own for this one, sorry,"

"OH FUCK YOU!" I yelled as the mare took over again.

"Hey, Lasting Light, do you wanna go to Rarity's to get some more clothes?"

"Yeah sure, all I have is this one dress,"

We walked to the boutique and Twilight knocked on the door. Rarity opened it and said,

"Oh hello Twilight, hello George," she said and I replied,

"Rarity, call me Lasting Light, I'm a mare now and it's so much better,"

"Oh okay," she said, surprised at my female personality,

"Well come on in, I suppose you want some clothes to suit you now, I have to say, what you're wearing now is divine, where did you get it?"

"The psychiatrist who helped me realise I'm now a mare and should act like it. She's in the market and I'm staying with her until I settle down completely. Her name's Shimmering Skies,"

"Come on in and let's get your new measurements done," she said. I followed her in and my normal personality kicked in.

"Rarity you have to help me," I hissed,

"What's the matter, Lasting Light?" She asked,

"For a start, don't call me that. And for a second, Shimmering Skies is the problem, she's messing with my mind and making me believe I'm a mare. I don't have much time with this personality left, then I'll have to live with a mare's personality forever!"

"I'm sorry George but my magic isn't strong enough. If Celestia wants you like that, then I wouldn't dare go against her wishes, even for a friend. Your best shot is to ask Princess Luna, her magic might just be strong enough to fix this. That is. If she wants to,"

"Rarity you're a genius!" I cried then Lasting Light took over again.

"Okay then, let's get on with this," I said cheerfully. Rarity grinned and took me through to the room.

1 HOUR LATER (still in mare personality)

I trotted out, cheerfully whistling. Rarity was working on my new dresses and I was going to find Sky. I found her talking to Twilight,

"Hi Sky, hi Twilight," I said,

"hi Light," Twilight said,

"Hey Light," said Sky, "wanna go get some lunch with Twilight?"

"Yeah sure," I said then my normal personality finally one a battle against the mare in me. I forced a smile, when she was not listening, I muttered to Twilight

"Twilight, you better goddamn help me, I can't hold on much longer,"

"I'm sorry George but you know I can't disobey the princess or she'll drop me as her student or even worse, send me back to magic kindergarten!"

"Twilight she wouldn't do that but anyway, Rarity told me Luna might be able to help, how can I reach her without Celestia knowing?"

"Try contacting her in your dreams, she should hear you call,"

"Thanks, I'm gonna try to stop Lasting Light from regaining this body over lunch,"

"okay, if she notices, I want to see how she gets you to embrace your inner mare,"

"Urgh fine," I agreed and Sky said,

"we're here,"

"Great I'm starving," I said cheerfully.

Throughout my salad meal, Sky kept giving me strange looks, as if she knew I was faking. I then blew it one one sentence,

"Oh I'm so full, my stomach feels like shit,"

"Light," Sky scolded, "I already told you, mares don't use that language. You must need some more embracement of your inner mare, let's go home and sort this out,"

"Wait, may I come with you to watch this process and take notes, being student of Princess Celestia herself, they could come in handy,"

"Of course,"

We caught a train and I groaned, knowing that Twilight would watch Sky style my hair and do my makeup, which somehow encouraged my female side to come out. We arrived in Canterlot at her house and Sky beckoned Twilight and I into her room and she blindfolded me. I groaned, knowing what was coming. She washed my hair first this time, it had been getting rather greasy. Then she started styling it. "I don't know exactly how it works," she said, "but doing his hair and makeup and getting her a dress causes her female side to manifest more," she finished and then did my makeup. I heard Twilight stifle a laugh. Then Sky levitated me up and put a dress on me. I grunted as it tightened around my waist and then she took off my blindfold. Lasting Light completely took over, pushing me back to the last area I hold before I fail completely.

"I look gorgeous," I said.

A/N

This story arc will last 6 more chapters and will have him switching randomly between him and Light. Please review and fav and follow. Tell me what you want to happen, what you think will happen and if you want anything specific, tell me in the reviews, I read all of them.

Have a good day/night

MichaelTheBoss

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