Because I am already done with this story, let's get to the next and last chapter.

Ladies and germs, enjoy Part 2 of my commentary! Let's get this over with!

rianbo dahs ran ot off da rom The action was so nice, she did it twice. Also, you're in a stadium since it's a concert. You lose. an cryed som beacuz graze whipd out hi thnig in frnot off aanotha pony. Say these last few words out loud, and your life may never be the same again.

"OMG GRAEZ Y DI U BERATY ME LIK DIS?/" RAINBO DAHS CRYED. "IM LIK UR BIGEST FANN I LISNT 2 ALL UR ALBIMS!111" I listened to all of Seal's albums, but I definitely don't expect him to be faithful to me. *holds up hand* Up top! b4 WHAT DID WE JUST TALK ABOUT WITH THE NUMBERS. raze cuold relpy she rann out da room. For the third time. Damn, RD. What great thighs you have.

graz he lokd awau fromhis you ko an from da bassssist You do realize that one word is separating you from the M rating right? an cryed out "OMG RD WAT" I already pointed out RD's supreme dedication to pumping up her heart-rate. It's not that special anymore. he dodnt even stip 2 zop up hiss pnats an he rna out da dor witout zipin it up. Pro Tip: Don't read this while drinking hot coffee and with your seven-year-old brother in the room, because you WILL read this last sentence out loud to yourself to see if you literally just read that right, and when you do get a mental picture in your head, your throat will hurt like a thousand hells in Death Valley.

so graze flet badd an he rnaa after rd Flet badd? Someone needs to work out more [on their spelling]. he mett up whit her in frint of panrea bred It took you forever to say who performed at a concert, but it took you just a sentence to say which place in this nameless, unknown area with no description Graze and RD met in front of? Get your grammar and priorities straight! an they tlkaed som. in da end, it tuned outt dat dave was bi an it wuz da het of da momnet so dats y he an da otha gyu had sexx. So...no describing what was going on in Graze/dave's head? No explanations? Just gonna say it was "da het of da momnet"? I...well...al-freaking-right.

"im sory rd i stil luv ya i jstu luv gyus 2 butt ill stay fatful 2 u from no on." In other words, "Hey baby. Sorry I cheated on you and did it with my bandmate no one knows the name of. I do like me some men, though...b-but I'll be faithful to you and whatever. Just forget about this, okay? Yeah. Heheh..."There is NO WAY RD will buy that.

"UM OK I FROGIVE U!11 :D" GODDAMN IT. graez an rd thye were supre hapy an they gott som dinner at paerna bred an while thye did thye did it on thier tabel cuz thye were soooo in luv. :DDDD BOY, THAT ESCALATED QUICKLY. Let me just lay out this chapter for the skimmers at home, because this story needs Sparknotes like you don't even know:

1. RD ran out of the Neon Trees concert three times because she saw he boyfriend Graze do it with another male pony, whom I shall Kris Neighvoselic because why not.

2. Graze ran out of the concert as well, and met up with RD in front of Panera Bread.

3. He said that he felt bad, and it was only the heat of the moment and his sudden infatuation for male ponies, but his attraction for female ponies was still there. He asks for forgiveness, and RD complies.

4. They make out on their table at Panera Bread.

You missed nothing. Honest.

wee werr al sososososososo Seven "so"s. She must mean it, guys. hapy 4 them makin up and out dat me an colt an stantiaog Again with the butcher. I don't even wow. stated 2 mak out as well cuz we wree all sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo I won't count those. Seriously, though. What's with them? in luv and wee wnated da world 2 see cuz we thuoght we weeere adorbs 2getha. First of all..."adorbs?!" Second of all, the world would probably find this repulsive if it wasn't in a porno. And finally, THIS IS ALL IN A PANERA BREAD WITH NO DESCRIPTION. Just tossing that out there and hoping it hits your skull and gives you a coma, Camille.

butt ten somthing hapened!11 Ooooh, I love this game! Let's see...I'm gonna guess that...Morgan Freeman and Tommy Wisseau will come out from the cash register and start dancing the Charleston while Pikachu plays a toy piano and Captain America stabs Butterfly with the edge of his shield! That would literally make my life if that happened.

da bassist cam outand sad 2 dave...

"Morgan Freeman and Tommy Wisseau will come out from the cash register and start dancing the Charleston while Pikachu plays a toy piano and Captain America stabs Butterfly with the edge of his shield!"

COME ON, CAMILLE. MAKE IT CANON.

"OMG GRAEZ IM PREGO WIT UR BABY!11111111"

...I give up.

But really, though. That's the end of this chapter, and that's the end of my sanity. There was NO WAY I was going to edit this, and after reading through this and seeing the true side of Camille, I've realized that there's no hope for her. Camille, you really do suck. Your writing and everything. Just...wow. You need to get some serious shit together. But right now, this story is literally displaying how much of an idiot you are, and the best part about this is that you don't even know how bad your writing is, even though people left and right, including me, have told you constantly.

And it's sad. And hilarious.

But mostly hilarious.

Farewell, my lovelies. I may comment every now and again, but...eh. Who knows? Let's just see how far this story sinks...

-madelyn

P.S. I actually just remembered something. I think Camille told me she was going to end this story on the last day of school, which is exactly a month from now. She was planning this huge finale with a "big reveal" and everything.

Discuss.