hi geys so im cobaingurrl1988 an dis is ma 1st tim ritin fanficton. i decid 2 rite a mlp fic beacuz i lik it alot becuz th colors & its funy & ilike it evn tho im 15 yrs old & al my friens teas me becauz i dont watsh tht stuped shit lik dr. whoo & sopernatural & al that othr dum crap pn netflx like thm. (THEY SAU ITS ABOYS SHOW BUT ITS LIK SOOOOO FUKIN NOT!111) so irite dis fic cuz i lik mlp nd i wavjh lots eps (lik 10 of them1 :-O) & i lik dremin abot wut woold hapen if i wuz ther!1 so i writ this & its col beacuz i luv 2 write alot so ya!1 :D (ALSO I RITE THIS IN 1 HR SO IF U CN POINT OUT SOM PLACES I MISPELL THINGS THAT WULD E GRET CUZ I MESS UP WHEN I GO FAST BUT ITS TO KEP UP W/THE CREATIVE FLIW.)

so yeah leve a revew onc ur don but plz NO FLAMEZ OR I WEL REPURT U!111 ):((((

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Hi, my name is Butterfly Rose and Im a 15 yr old girl pony. I have white fur & rainbow hair, which i tie up in a sidrways PONY tail. (geddit its a pony pun! ;D) i live in Canterlut with princess Celestia in her castle cuz im her sis and im also a princses wit her in Equestrea. (an: Luna id nut the princess cuz shes a bitch and i dont like her and she also lives on da moon i think. ^^; ) Because im royal, i have a pretty cutey mark of a pretty rose with a crown on it becuz im of royal decent, and i gut it when i was 3.

One day, celestia told me to go to ponyvile to make freinds. I said, "OK!" and i wuz excied becuz in the castel, i didnt have much of an opp to mak freinds in the castl.e Not many peple were around besids celestia, an she was busy doin princess stuf lik papework an taxes an havin peopl wip off her crown. The only frend i had wuz my pet pheonix Amber, who is sisters with celestia's bird too. (an: guys wuts celestia's bird's name? I forgot. OoO)

"Remember 2 rite me everydat, OK?" she asked, and i sad, "OK!" and so me and amber wer abot to head off. Right before we did, howevr..

"Wait!" celestia proclaimed loudly, and we stopp in our tracks. she sayed, "Befor u go...take dis,"

Her white horn stated to glow and a book floted toards me. It wuz red and old. it had the woed, "PROFECES" on ot.

"Itz a bok of profecies." celestia noded.

"But... I said dramaticaly. Why u want me to have dis?"

"Becuz, rose..." wispered celestia quietly. "It say ur the chosen 1 to protect da wurld from evil, and only u can vanqwish thevil and unlpck the bok's secretsss"

I gaped. The rom was silent. Amber cooed at me. celestia pointed at the dor with her hoof as i rgabbed the bok midair.

"now go," she said sternlu. "make friends, buterfly rose. and unlock ur destiny and save ponyvile!111"

"OK!1" I sed with determinsatinn, as i ran out da dor with amber at my side. i wad on my way to ponyville, ready to make friends...and mayb save the UNIverse (geddit? cuz uni.) in the process...

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So...wut u guys think? Plz revew if u read it & tell mehow much u likd it and wut would mak it bettr!111 :D (AND PS NO FLAMEZ THANKU)