OMG GUYS STUP W/UR NONSEMCE!1 THIA IS NPT A JOKE IM REALY SERIOS ABIUT MY WRITING AN IF U DONT TAK IT SERIOIUSLY THEN THATS UR PROBLEM NIT MINE SO FU!11111 IM SOSOSOSOSOSO PISSED AT ALL OF U 4 NUT TAKIN THIS THING NA SERIOUS MANER!1111

ALSO IM RELLY MAD BECUZ SOME1 REPURTED ME 4 A STORIE & IT GOT DELETED OMG IM SO MAD RIGHT NPW!1111111111

but the storie must go on & i wnat some gud revoiews so lets move on 2 were we left of.

ps. dis chatpa is dedecated 2 my bff loren luv u gurl!111

i wuz walkin with amber doen 2 da hit air balon & we wer floatin don 2 ponyvile. Ass ew were decendign, i gut nervos beacuz i wuz woried tat evertypony (LOL PONY) wud not wnat 2 be my frend nd han out wit me.

Growing ip, i has a hard tim makin freinds becuz when i wad litle, everypiny would tese me & call me names becuz unlik the otha young ponys i had ma cutie mark b4 everpony else & i wuz riyal & pople though i wuz stuk-up butt i wuz not. also in da castle theyr werent manu ponys 2 talk too si it wuz deprezin, so i had 2 kep ma tue self insdie. i wud cry evety nite wisjing 4 a frend butt i didnt hav 1 besdies amber so it wuz sadd. (an: true storie isnt tat sad? D:)

Anyway we arrivd in ponville wen da ballon landed.

"OMG!" i squeled wit glee. "WE MAD IT!1"

i gotz dresed up 4 this ocasion becuz i wuz realy excite & wnated 2 leave a gud 1st impresion. i wuz wearin a par of skiny jean shits wit holes on tha knes & black leging that wnet downto mu ankels. i wuz also wearin red converses wit harts on them & a grey norvvana t shit that has curt cobain's face on it. (AN: OMG HES SO SEXY EEEEEEE) it wuz turn up on the sids 2 show a red bob tube 2 shiw of ma chest. I wnated 2 dres casual 2 show how col i wuz wit the otha lower clas ponys 2 mak dem fel bettr abot themselvs.

da nex thin i knew... (do u lik '..."? it maks susspens & ma teachr tiaght us that 2day.)

"OMG HI!" a pony sqeualed. it wuz...loren! (HEY LOREN DIS IS U)

she wuz wearin a par of pink skiny jeans wit a white tantop dat haz a triferce on eit, & she wuz a blu pony who wore a red viser & had a ling brown maen 2 match her eye. she wuz also wearin hipsta glases.

"HAI LOREN!" i sez bac. "OMG ITZ BEN SO LUNG!111"

we huged. tha last tim i sew her wuz bac at the castel. she wuz ma only freind beside amber. UR AWSOME LOREN I LUV U

"OMG NUCE SHIRT GURL!" she sed.

"THANK U INOW, RITE?" i repled. (dis is god dilog, rite?)

"OMG BUTERFLY," she laffed "I NEED 2 INTRODOCE U 2 MY FREINDS!1"

"OK!11" I follewed her arund Ponyvile, wich wuz brite & colorfull. it haf lits off ponys in da town, & they al seeemed happy to see me. but them...

"NUT SO FAST!1" a poni bomed, standin in frunt of us. the others starred to see it wuz...

WE gaped.

It wuz...

OMG guyz a clif-hanger!1 OoO wuts gonna hapen? red mor 2 find out & dont forget 2 revew the storie thanx see ya nect time!111 :DDD