Ok so here's chapter 10 sooner than i thought well here we go Mistakes Suggestions Ideas Reviews MSIR Please

I was ready for the maze Discord had setup. It's not that I knew it was coming but I was ready for anything and I love a good challenge. Was he right about us not being able to effect each other though? Well it doesn't matter right now though. I decided to take the right path out of the three. It was straight forward from there. Until I came to a wall with 2 paths to my right and left. I took the one on the left this time and proceeded. About 10 minutes of going through twists and turns went by until I got to a center part.

"Congratulations Nathan you made it through the first maze but before you proceed to the next mazes you must pass a test." Discord said.

"Bring it on." I replied confidently.

"I seem to have lost my pet dog his name is Sweety can you yet him for me?" He said as two animals came out. One was a giant wolf with 2 heads and razor sharp teeth while the other was a small cute beagle puppy. Of course the beagle puppy has to be Sweety. I started calling Sweety out but the beagle wouldn't come here but the wolf is trying to chase me down. Eventually Sweety started running too and I chased him. He crawled through a hole in the maze and I turned around to face the beast when it rolled over on its belly. It was like it was telling me to scratch his belly and I did. I quickly realized Sweety was the wolf.

"Now for the second maze." Discord said laughing. It was the same concept for the paths, just in a different way. It took me only 7 minutes this time and now there's a different test. There are 3 rings on 3 different stands made of marvel from ancient Greek and I have to find the difference with them. I looked at each ring for a brief amount of time. But there were no differences between them. I got confused about the difference but then I noticed there were the stands just standing there. One of them had a chip in the marvel unlike the others.

"Hey Discord I found it." I said pointing at the difference.

"Excellent now for the final maze." Discord said laughing menacingly. "Here's some of what you would consider armor for the next maze." Suddenly a set of football pads appeared on me and I was transported to another maze only it didn't look really complicated. It was a straight forward path with a circular room all the way at the end. It was about 100 yards away and a voice boomed in my head saying that this is the final test and to pass I have to make it to the circular room. Only problem is that a bunch of evil looking ponies blocked my path. There were about a million of them and they started running towards me. There's no real way to fight them all so I braced up and charged at them full speed. I hit through a ton of them consecutively. I'm almost through I just gotta get through the rest. Suddenly a giant one appeared and started running at me. It jumped at me which gave me time to duck so it'd go over me.

I quickly ran into the room and all the evil ponies disappeared.

"Good job, I thought you'd never make it through." Said Discord. "Now give me your bag of light and the scroll."

"No!" I shouted pulling them out and holding them close.

"You made it too easy." He said pulling me up with his magic as he ripped the items out of my head. We then appeared by the garden.

"Now sleep." He said putting a sleep spell on me. I went out fast.

Third Person POV-Location: Small Building

"Okay so Nathan is out and I'm about to cause chaos in Ponyville. Aha so much fun and I know just what to do!" Discord said happily.

"Good now get me out of here so I can kill them already!" Said Htaed.

"Aw but what fun would that be?" Said Discord.

"It's not supposed to be fun until they're dead. I brought you back now get me out!"

"I don't like your tone. You're staying there now."

"You can't do this to me!"

"Yes I can now if you'll excuse me I'm heading to Mirror Pond I have an idea."

Nathan POV-3 hours later

I woke up suddenly forgetting what happened but a couple minutes later I remembered. I started flying towards Ponyville when I saw a bunch of Discords everywhere. What happened while I was out? I then saw Twilight gallop quickly into her house. I decided I'd follow her and just when I got to the door I bounced off. There was a protective barrier around it then I saw a little slot on the door. Eyes came through it and looked me up. Then I heard what sounded like Spike's voice.

"Who goes here?" Spike asked.

"It's me Nathan." I replied.

"I don't believe you...prove it."

"Spike let me in!"

"Okay okay jeez." Spike said letting me in. I saw the mane six talking about something while looking for a book. I asked them why there were a bunch of Discords running around. And they said that Discord had made a bunch of clones from Mirror Pond and using some sort of spell switched everypony's body in Ponyville with his clones but luckily they didn't get the same fate exactly. Instead it only switched them with each other. It became weird quick because of how confused I got. I finally figured it out though. It's Twilight became Applejack, Applejack became Rarity, Rarity became Rainbow Dash, Rainbow Dash became Fluttershy, Fluttershy became Pinkie Pie, and Pinkie Pie became Twilight. Good thing their voices went with them or I'd never figure it out. Now they're trying to find the book. Discord now has an army of ponies with the town of confused ponies who look like Discord. I told them the only way to get back to normal is to get the scroll from him. He has the bag of light too so he could just blind us. It seems impossible.

"Come to my small building with your pony friends but don't come in." A voice echoed in my head. It was probably Htaed. I decided to take the mane 6 there, there's nothing left to lose. I didn't want to be spotted by Discord so I teleported outside the building.

"Glad you came now before we start let me do this." He said standing at the door putting out the palm of his hand. I saw lights go through the ponies when they started cheering. Apparently Htaed switched them back. I also saw something strange, it was a cute red bird perched on his shoulders.

"Now listen up. I know Discord is causing havoc and I set him free but I freed him to free me except that he didn't. He defied me and I don't want him alive anymore, he's useless to me. I know you want him gone but you must help me to help you. I'm going to give you these 2 items, it shoots a claw to grab anything and these badges will prevent you from being affected by his magic. Grab the scroll and bring it to me and I'll be able to get rid of him effectively since his magic is linked to the scroll if I destroy it completely it should dispel everything he did then kill him. Your energy attacks won't affect him unfortunately so be careful with what you do. But you must hurry and for the hell of it I'll grant you a permanent power of your choice to get it." Said Htaed with desperation in his words. He must be serious if he's asking us.

"Okay we'll help and give me the power of a changeling I have an idea." I said confidently. I felt the power start to course through me then I turned myself into the form of Htaed. I proceeded to teleport to the real Discord.

"Hello Discord." I said sounding menacing.

"Yo-You're free!" He said scared.

"Yes and if you value your life you should switch everyone or everypony here back to normal. NOW!"

"Okay...there done."

"Now give me the scroll and light."

"Okay here. Now please let me live."

"No." I said teleporting back to the small building. I turned back to normal and saw Discord come too. He was laughing for some reason though. I went to hand Htaed the scroll but Rarity took it and threw it to Discord! I could tell Htaed didn't even see this coming as well as me.

"Hahahaaaa oh oh haha I-I can't believe you thought it'd be that easy!" Said Discord laughing his ass off. "That's not even Rarity!" He was right it was Queen Chrysalis! Rarity fell from what looked like a catipiller pod. Somehow no one noticed.

"Listen Nathan release me. This needs to be dealt with." Said Htaed in a calm voice.

"No and even if I'd consider it why should I?" I replied.

"I don't want to harm anyone innocent anymore." He said calmly. I pinched myself making sure I was awake.

"What?"

"Let me tell you why."

*Flashback* Time:After releasing Discord

A while after I released Discord he told me he'd make sure I stayed here for eternity. I was raging mad at him when a bird flew in the building and onto the palm of my hand. I killed it without hesitation and layed it down. But a whole bunch of animals came by and it looked like they were mourning in someway. I realized they were friends and family of the bird. It made me sad seeing they cared about it. It then made sense, I'm immortal and they aren't. They value everything about life especially friends and family because they don't know if they'll ever get a second chance to see them again. I brought the bird back to life and let it go but it wanted to stay here with me and be my friend. It finally made me see the good of being alive. I decided to be its friend as well and he's been here ever since.

*Out of Flashback

"Wow you really have changed I guess I can." I said walking to the door.

"No you don't because I have another maze for you ahaha!" Discord said using his magic to put us all in a new maze. "Now time to play, you all should know the rules."

there you go ch 10 and almost the end of the story and this is now the longest ch. PLEASE FAV AND FOLLOW ME AND THE STORY AND PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE MSIR IT KEEPS ME GOING CH11 coming soon.