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A Sign of Good Luck or Danger?

by Make A Sequel To Space Jam

Chapter 11: 11. Chapter 11:It's Over

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Here is ch11 a lot faster now and yes I changed the story at ch 10. It leaves more oppourtunety and yes another maze extremely cliche Well you know the drill Mistakes Suggestions Ideas Reviews MSIR and I would also like to say we're at the last actual chapter of the story and there will be 2 short ch12s it will have two different endings which all of you can vote once on for one of the endings being canon or non-canon so here we go Ch11

"Another maze! Really!" I said.

"Yes but difference is now all of you participate." Replied Discord. "Also you can use your flying and powers but if you try to escape using them or cheat a lot with them, you will be severely electrocuted."

"Bring it on. I'm not intimidated!" Said Rainbow Dash.

"Me neither!" Said everypony else.

"Good now begin." Said Discord once again putting us in a maze. Now it was a challenge for me but I could handle it. I got through a bunch when I came to a circular room similar to the one from earlier. The only thing different was it wasn't the same challenge. No it was completely different, it was a physical challenge. Something I'm amazing at. It was completely fucked up though. I have to race Rainbow Dash (a fake one) and if I lose she gets to cut me with a large knife wherever she wants. She had cuts all over her and her eyes were a very frightening light blue that was unnatural and evil looking. We raced from one end of the room to the other and I lost. She took out the sharp knife and cut me on my left arm leading to the back of my hand. The blood flowed out of my arm and over my underarmour shirt. It doesn't sicken me though, I've experienced my painful blood loses on Earth as well as fatal ones there. The next race I lost again and she cut my right leg down the middle. The pain was too excruciating to run or fly fast and I can't use my powers to cheat. But I don't have to use my powers to cheat. He never said anything about cheating without powers.

The race started and as soon as it did I grabbed onto one of her front legs. She tried to shake me off but she couldn't and right before we hit the finish I threw myself ahead of her to get the win. I was congratulated then teleported to the next maze. That one was easier than the rest along with a new challenge. Discord told me that this challenge is not to get consumed. So I assume lions or some carnivore is going to try and eat me. I then felt a burst of energy go into me and it felt amazing then I heard Discord's voice saying he gave me a portion of his power. I started laughing insanely from how good it felt. A black aura surrounded me while my eyes turned a demonic yellow and I grew a bit taller due to the power. I started blasting explosions everywhere and I saw the damage it did to this maze and it was a spectacle. Stone was everywhere in giant holes that appeared within the ground from the impact of the power. I then snapped out of it. All of the terrible destruction reminded me why I needed to stop him.

"Hmm congratulations I didn't think you'd do it. And I will admit you had the hardest tests. Then again that isn't too hard." Said Discord. "Now instead of another maze here's your final challenge." I was then teleported to a completely white void. In the distance I saw Twilight and I ran up to her.

"Twilight I was worried." I said happy to see her again.

"Oh it's you." She said sounding uninterested.

"Is there something wrong?"

"Oh nothing just...WHAT THE FUCK WERE YOU THINKING ABOUT TO RELEASE HTAED!"

"He's changed. I'm not kidding."

"OH SURE SAY THAT ALL YOU WANT BUT DISCORD TOLD ME EVERYTHING ABOUT YOU WANTING THE WORLD TO END!"

"And you actually listened to him. He's the enemy not me and besides that I love this world."

"HE TOLD ME YOU'D SAY THAT!"

"Fine if you believe him instead of the person who loves you then I have no business here. I'll just leave." I said walking into the whiteness not caring anymore.

"Nathan where are you going" She asked with no received answer. "Nathan." "NATHAN! PLEASE DON'T LEAVE ME!" She said crying. I looked back and walked up to her and hugged her.

"We're getting out of here." I said as I pulled out my small ear communicator. "Hey this is Nathan. Find my coordinates along with the rest of the mane six and teleport us back to the small building and outside of it." I said into the mic.

"You got it hold tight." Said the scientists in my lab. Suddenly we all appeared outside of the small building. And nearby was Queen Chrysalis and Discord grinning confidently. I looked around and saw no little changelings though which surprised me. The queen then told me she killed them all. She said they were too annoying. Quickly the mane six attacked the queen not even announcing it to me. Discord than reacted to them and I realized that they were giving me time to release Htaed. I did so swiftly and everypony noticed as well. The was a great black light released as he left the building. It was created from a surge of power he gained being released. He instantly killed the queen without hesitation. Discord found it hilarious and started doing an insane laugh. Htaed slowly walked over to him and lifted Discord off the ground and broke his defensiveness.

"Now Nathan, please help me do the honor of killing him and ending this once and for all." Said Htaed holding him up for me to blast.

"Gladly." I said turning Super Saiyan 4. "Ka-me-Ha-me-HAA!" I said releasing every single drop of energy I have into that blast. Htaed quickly jumped behind Discord after the blast hit him and hit him with a blast too. Discord could handle 1 of us but not both at the same time.

"I accept my death here but my chaos will live on. BUT I'LL ALWAYS BE AROUND!" Said Discord laughing again. The blasts dissipated and Discord was finally dead. I could no longer feel his energy.

1 DAY LATER

"Thank you all for freeing me. I want every world to have peace now that I know it is a good thing. I will miss you all. Maybe some day we will meet again. But until then...Farewell." Htaed said casting a dimension spell and leaving. I never knew it'd be over so quickly. I had fun though and I love it here and I love Twilight as well. But I have a great life on Earth. Princess Celestia and Luna came up to the mane six and I in the castle in Canterlot. They gave me a choice to either let me go back to Earth or stay here.

Wow It's over. I had fun writing this and there have been little amounts of people reading it but I thank you all. Review or PM your choice. Here it is: Nathan decides to go back to Earth. Canon or non-Canon and i might use it if I don't know what to do which is a very high possibility. I shall be making more side stories now and I MIGHT make a sequel. So PLEASE MSIR AND FAV AND FOLLOW I shall have the 2 ch12s later

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