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***This is only on hiatus while I work on my other stories. I'm working on other stories instead of this because my writing skills aren't good enough to write out all of the highly-symbolic plans I have for this story. Don't worry, though: this WILL BE FINISHED***
"My name is Golden Flame. Though I seem like a rather popular pegasis, I'm not, and after five years of solitude in my home of Cloudsdale, I've finally decided to move to Ponyville, where the only friends I've ever had currently reside. Once there, I hope to be able to live a new life, along side those who make me whole."
The structure of the story actually fits the cryptic and symbolic nature of my character: many questions asked near the beginning of the story aren't answered until later, and I plan to add symbolism as often as possible -- but not so often that it's obvious.
Note: I decided to change the rating of this from Teen to Mature JUST IN CASE. I don't know if I'll need it, but I'm using it as somewhat of a failsafe.
Thanks to MusicSlave and Johnfreemanwepon for helping me with this story in it's entirety, though moreso than not said help was through ways other than actual writing.
14 Chapters:
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Chapter I: A Cryptic Background of a Cryptic Pony [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Feb 10th, 2012
576
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Chapter II: A Rainbow Reunion [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Feb 4th, 2012
732
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Chapter III: Psychological Manipulation [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Feb 6th, 2012
1,063
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Chapter IV: Apple Pie [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Feb 6th, 2012
1,080
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Chapter V: A Place to Stay [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Feb 6th, 2012
1,480
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Chapter VI: The Core of the Idea [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Feb 5th, 2012
733
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Chapter VII: Derpy's Drawing [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Feb 5th, 2012
739
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Chapter VIII: Pinkie Pie's Party Cannon [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Feb 6th, 2012
1,302
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Chapter IX: Twilight's Lab [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Feb 7th, 2012
1,312
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Chapter X: The Conversation [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Feb 8th, 2012
1,895
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Chapter XI: Flight and Plight [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Feb 11th, 2012
678
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Chapter XII: From Flight to Fight [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Feb 11th, 2012
898
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Chapter XIII: Derpy's Wing [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Feb 11th, 2012
2,910
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Chapter XIV: Official [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Feb 12th, 2012
1,271