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The wishing star.

by IAmThaMastar312
Story has been removed from Fimfiction.net
This is a story that a couple of friends and I worked on together as a project. Enjoy :).
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It was almost noon as the boy awoke. He opened his crusty blue eyes and looked around. Chris Statcher was 13 years old. He wore a Short sleve red shirt with Jeans that had purposly torn holes at the knees. He brushed down his long black air as he looked at the endless ocean of green grass that surrounded him. He had not the slightest Idea of how he got there. He tried to stand up, but his ankle collapsed beneath him. He looked down and cursed for he remembered that he had broken his ankle. He looked into the air for any sign of a helicopter, a plane, anything that could take him home. "HELP!" He said as he cringed hearing his own voice. He was on the ridge of De-Hydration. His mouth had been gaping open letting the sun evaporate most of the moisture in his throat. He continued to look toward the sky for any sign of cicilization.

Derpy was flying by when she saw a white speck in the green grass. "what is that?" she said as she flew down to investigate.

Chris was looking into the clear blue sky as his eyes slowly started to close. He was going to die. He looked into the sky as he saw it. A light grey pegasus was flying toward him. He disregarded it as a halucination until it touched him in the arm. He spoke to her in his croaking un-usual voice. "Help... me..."

She gasped at how pale He looked. "that doesn't matter now, hon. we need to get you some medical attention fast!" she throws you onto her back, taking off, flying faster than she ever had.

Chris woke up in a hospital room. He looked around at the room and sighed. something wasn't the same with this hospital. He looked over to his left and then he saw her again. He remembered what happened and smiled. "Thank you." He said in a normal and nice voice. "My name is Chris, and you are?" He knew that the pegasus could talk and that was the only reason he talked to it.

she smiled warmly, looking into his newly revitalized eyes. "my name is Derpy Hooves! mail carrier and the derpiest pegasus in all of ponyville! nice to meet ya, chris! " she extends her hoof in gratitude.

Chris took her hoof with joy. He shook it carefully for he didn't know if he were ready to be released yet. And he was right, he had to stay in the bed for another day for the enchanted "Quick Heal" Bandages to complete their job. He spent most of his time talking with Derpy about things. But soon he had to rest. He quietly fell assleep with his hend resting on Derpy's hoof.

she smiled, watching him fall asleep. "ohhhh.... you're so cute, chris..." she stroked his long black hair and she too soon fell asleep.

Chris awoke later on in the morning to find out that he was free to go. He quietly awoke Derpy from her nap and they walked out of the building. He walked alongside Derpy careful not to loose her for he didn't want to get lost. He smiled as he was toured around the town. He was looking into the sky until he bumped into a Brown Maned pony. "Oops." He said helping the pony pick up his things. He looked into his eyes to see that they strongly resembled an old friend of his eyes.

the pony looked that the boy and tilted his head as he picked up his things....he seemed familiar "Chris....?"

Derpy watched the whole time. she asked "do you know him, chris?"

Chris looked strange at the pony. He recodnized the voice immediately. "MICHAEL!" He shook his hoof and looked up. "How did you become a pony, and how did you get here..." He bombarded him with questions like crazy. He then looked back at Derpy. "Know him? He was my best friend until he went missing." He looked back at the pony and kept talking to him about how things were in the human world.

He laughed and hugged his best friend tightly "oh my gosh it's so good to meet you again!" he smiled as he watched him give him a lot of questions. "well....it's kind of a long story"

A purple unicorn suddenly ran up to Derpy, whispered something in her ear, and gave her a note. she smiled. "oh, chris, this note is for you!"

Chris looked over to Derpy again. "Oh, Thanks Derpy." He took the note and carefully unrolled it. He read it silently in his head:

"Dear Christian Statcher.

Welcome to the town of Ponyville. We have recieved your wish and almost disregu...See More

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Rainbow Dash Chris looked at Derpy. He remembered her telling him something about Canterlot. He asked her politely. "Uh, Derpy, do you think you could take me to Canterlot Mane Castle. The Princesses want to speak to me."

she smiles excitedly. "oh my gosh! the princesses want to see you!!!! AHHHHH!!! thats amazing!" she hugs you.

Chris gasped as he was suddenly squeezed. He smiled and patted her blonde mane. "is that a yes?" He asked smiling.

Mike's eyes widened and he smiled big "whoa, that's huge honor getting a letter from the princess herself."

she looks confused. "i didn't hear ya, but yes, i will! you wanna come too, michael?" she asked.

he smiled and nodded "I'd be more then happy to"

Chris got onto Derpy's back and they were off. They soon arrived at the sparkling Halls of the beautiful castle in Canterlot. "Wow, quite incredible." Chris said to himself before he heard a voice from behind him. "Yes, it is something isn't it Christian."

derpy instantly notices the voice. "your highness..." she bows suddenly, motioning for you to bow as well.

Rainbow Dash Chris gasped. He bowed low to the Dark Blue Mare. He never met anyone in fame, or Royal. He stayed bowed with the others until a gentle hoof touched his shoulder. "Rise, all of you. I must ask you two ponies to stay out here. I must talk to Chris in Private with my sister. Chris obeyed and said goodbye to his new friends.

‎"anything you say, your highness..." Derpy remained outside as Chris entered the room.

Chris walked beside Luna. He entered a room to see the White coated mare with waving Blue, purple, and green hair. He bowed to her for he knew that She must have been Princess Celestia.

Celestia smiled as he bowed. "rise, christian. you were right sister, he is of a pure heart."

Chris rose as he was told. He looked at the two mares and asked in a polite tone. "I was wondering, how exactly did I get here?"

"well" said Celestia, "when you wished upon that rainbowish star, we recieved it, and we detected pain and suffering in your heart. we then proceeded to have an agent of ours take you from there to here. does that answer your question?" she smiled.

He suddenly remembered his abusive father. He remembered how he was pushed off the roof shortly after star gazing for being up too late. He landed on his ankle and then was transported to ponyville while unconscious. He nodded slowly. He bid a formal farewell and walked outside with his friends. "I guess, I will see you later, your magesty."

"wait" called celestia. "get back here! I have one more thing to say!"

Chris turned around. "Yes your Highness?"

She flies down to Chris' eye level. "take this" she lightly tapped Chris you with her horn on his shoulder, a mark that looks like the sun and moon combined is formed. "when the time comes, you'll know how to use it...."

Chris took the looked at the sign on his shoulder. He nodded and left. His friends followed behind. "I remember everything now." He said as he walked back. He was about to tell them but then a sudden mob of Frightened ponies ran into them. "WHAT THE!!" Chris said as he was separated from his friends. "DERPY, MICHAEL, MEET ME...... AT THAT CORN MAZE!" He managed to say before the mob continued to push him away. He eventually got out and headed for the maze. as he waited for his friends, he looked at the statues. He noticed instantly that one was missing from it's pedestal.

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2,787 words: Estimated 12 Minutes to read: [Cache]

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  1. Chapter 1, and chapter 2. [Cache] Feb 2nd, 2012
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