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The Return to Darkness

by Princecometrider

Chapter 3: Honour is earned, not bought

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Authors notes: well I’m back again. There won’t be any clop for a while. I am going to have comet around more often now
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Disclaimer: I do not own MLP FIM. All characters in this story are all official characters. I only own comet and a few others.

Chapter 3

Honour Is Earned, Not Bought

Comet’s POV

*It was getting dark outside, we would be facing discord tomorrow and I was a little worried. My mother had been easy, but discord is a god. There would soon be a knock at the door and I would tell the others on the outside to come in*

*Walking into the room were my brother and sister Star Shower and Emerald Shine. Star was a black Alicorn that looked a little like me, though she was a female and she had a long green mane with light blue highlights in it. Her eyes had a yellow glow to them and her cutie mark was a book due to her love of reading. Emerald Shine was a male Alicorn with a green coat, blue eyes like mine, a black mane that covered one eye and a cutie mark shaped like a glowing unicorn horn due to his fascination with magic and his skill in it, some called him the genius of the family*

Hey guys, what’s up? *I would smile warmly to them, aside from the mane six, Emerald and Star were the only ones I could trust with my innermost feelings and my thoughts*

*Emerald looked at me with a worried look and would say* Comet, is it true that Discord is back? It isn’t just an old mare’s tale?

*I would sigh and shake my head and would then say* I’m afraid not Em, Discord is really back and I don’t think he wants to chat

*I would chuckle a bit to lighten the mood*

*Star smiled at me gently and would giggle a bit* oh comet, your such a silly filly *even though you arnt a filly

*I would raise an eyebrow to that and shrugs* Well this will be easy I bet, I mean me, Twi and the others have the elements on our side *I would smile and think back to that day where me and Twi first met and how I got my cutie mark*

12 years ago

Young comet’s POV

Everypony, we have a new student here today, he is our princesses’ nephew, please welcome Prince Comet Rider *I would then walk into the room a bit shy, my tail covering my blank flank* um h-hello everypony

*Some of the students would laugh and insult me, calling me a blank flank. One however didn’t insult me, it was a violet unicorn filly with a dark violet mane with pink highlights. Like me she was a blank flank*

*The teacher would look over at her* Twilight Sparkle, would you please look after Comet while he is here? *Twilight would groan a bit and sigh, nodding*

*I would trot over to her and sit by her; she was reading a book on magic and wasn’t paying much attention to anyone in the class* um h-hello, T-twilight is it? *I would rub one of my hooves a bit*

*she would nod, not moving her head up to even look at me as she keeps reading, some of the other foals insulting her, calling her a bookworm. I would look at them and shake my head a bit*

3 Hours Later

Twilight’s POV

*Showing this new kid around sure was a bit boring, I wanted to just go to the library and read my books. As we reached a tree he would sit with me as i took out a book where I received a big surprise, he liked books like I did! Finally somepony that could relate to me in this place.*

What are your faviorite books then Comet? *I would smile a bit as I was starting to like this colt. He would look up at me and then say* Um w-well I love the Daring Do books and I love to read about magic

*I would smile wider, he was like me, we would discuss different types of magic and I was actually having some trouble countering some of the points he made. As we spoke, some bullys came over and stole my book putting it above me* Hey give that back!

*The bullys would laugh then look at Comet* Hey prince, don’t hang out with this loser, hang with us. *I would look down as I felt like I was going to lose the one possible friend I had here*

NO!

*That one simple word caused me to jolt my head up, Comet would stand in front of me and charge a spell up* I will never abandon Twilight, she has been so nice to me and I will never turn back on her. You are bad ponies and you shouldn’t do this to her, think of the honour you will lose if you bully a filly!

*I would tilt my head a bit, it would seem that Comet took honour very seriously as he would then shoot a small shock spell at the bullies when they went to attack him and me, taking the book and handing it to me he would keep shocking them, causing them to run off scared of him*

C-comet…why? *he would look at me, a gentle smile on his face as he replys with* Because your my friend Twilight *I would then gasp as I looked at his flank, there was a sword shaped cutie mark there!* Comet you have your cutie mark!

*He would then look around and see it* Oh sweet Aunt Celestia! Your right Twilight, this is so cool, I finally got my cutie mark! *he would then tackle me to the ground hugging me, giggling I would back*

Thanks for everything Twilight *I would smile at him, deciding to give him the privilege of using my nickname*

Please, just call me Twi

Present day

Comet’s POV

*That day always made me happy, but the time for reminiscing is over, its time to get ready* Emerald, Star go get somewhere safe, it’s time for me to kick some flank!

Author's Notes:

Ok the element of honour will appear in the next chapter, when I finish it, it will be the first episode of the FIM series seeya all soon

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