A tale following Copper Feather as he tries his best to retire, but things aren't as simple as he'd like. He may be done with his job, but his job isn't done with him. Copper is put in a situation where he can either do a lot of good, or a lot of damage. More damage than he has already. Now he has a chance to fix things, to set things right.
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((Story editing assistance by Amneiger))
((Last Updated: March 25th, 2017))
Author Note: When I had originally started writing this I had been a bit hesitant to post it anywhere, not sure why. I'm not afraid of any sort of negative feedback, it's just I wasn't sure it was really...up to snuff, ya know? I tried to sort of get the characters right, and I feel I hit close enough.
Oh well. Shameless oc forcement into an alternate version of Equestria? I dunno. I rather enjoy steampunk, which is what I tried to hint at a bit... Though in the world that I've sort of set up, Equestria is more dependent on magic, rather than technology.
The story mostly takes place mostly in Ponyville in the beginning, with sort of flash backs to places that Copper has been, and things that he's done. Then it goes places, and gets rather crazy.
18 Chapters:
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1: A Home [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Mar 25th, 2017
6,852
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2: Questions [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Mar 25th, 2017
6,679
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3: The Party [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Mar 25th, 2017
6,570
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4: Star Dreams [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Mar 25th, 2017
6,647
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5: Feathers of Cloth [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Mar 25th, 2017
7,077
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6: Letters [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Mar 16th, 2017
1,377
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7: The Feeling [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Mar 16th, 2017
4,188
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8: Flight [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Mar 22nd, 2017
4,547
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9: Technically [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Mar 22nd, 2017
5,999
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10: Nightmare [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Mar 25th, 2017
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11: Arguing [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Apr 3rd, 2017
6,101
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12: Under Sea [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Apr 1st, 2017
6,066
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13: Reuniting [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Mar 23rd, 2017
6,655
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14: Assassination [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Mar 25th, 2017
5,897
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15: Pop Pot [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Mar 24th, 2017
6,166
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16: Back in the Badlands [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Mar 25th, 2017
5,519
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17: Revelation [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Mar 24th, 2017
5,457
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18: Good Intentions [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Mar 25th, 2017
5,207
Other Titles in this Series:
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Copper Feather is a pony who's lived a rough life, and has finally gotten a reprieve and the retirement he deserves. But like the rest of his life, nothing goes according to plan. He may be done with his job, but it's not done with him. (Co
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Copper is back, to finish what he had started. But with only one lead, he must go to the Crystal Empire, in hopes of finding clues to fix what he helped break. But with crazy magic around, he's skeptical things will go smoothly. (Complete)
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Just like that he was gone. Then just as quickly as he had vanished, he came back. Just in time to crash one of the most prestigious occasions of the year. Now his most difficult task will be explaining everything to a little filly.
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With the connection to the worlds severed, Copper is able to focus more on fixing the things in this world. But as time goes on he finds that his new body is not entirely thrilled about him being in control.