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"When They Come for Me..."

by OmegaZilo

Chapter 4: Pleasing the Princess

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Pleasing the Princess

Author's Note: This is going to be a long one. I was thinking 2000+ words before I wrote it.
PS: There is a 'spicier' version of the events of the chapter at the bottom of the chapter.
Enjoy!

Celestia was in an almost shock. Her own student kidnapped in mid day! It was unbelievable! Tears formed in the Princess's eye at the thought of some horrible pony slitting Twilight's throat. Bronze said he had a 'plan'. In the back of Celestia's mind she felt that he didn't care about her student. He just didn't. But wait why would he allow the person who he trusted, who TRUSTED HIM? To die?

Celestia's mind was cluttered with thoughts good and bad, mostly bad. Bronze's however was clouded with thoughts of "who, why, and where?". He did worry about Twilight's safety, but she was a strong one, wasn't she? He could not worry about that now. Where they could have taken her he didn't know. There was nothing he could do any way.


Twilight was afraid. With TRUE fear. Not just a little scared, she was fearing her own demise. Again the sack they had placed over her head was removed she saw a stone roof like a cave of some kind. They had her head pointing nose-straight-up. In other words they tied her head back so she couldn't fire off any spells. Well unless she wanted to blast the roof. Twilight heard a male voice.
"Where is she Twilight?"
"WHO!?" Twilight shouted
"Your mentor of course, Princess Celestia." The male voice was calm almost comforting. No! That was a subliminal trick. A comforting voice is much easier to trust than and non comforting one!
"I will not tell you where she is!"
"Do it"
"What?" As Twilight said that she felt two small bracelet being put on her hooves. Then she felt pure unimaginable pain. Electricity. They gave her 3, 20 second jolts of pain. Then spoke again.
"Where is she?"
"Shove....it....up...your..."
"Do it again" the voice spoke
More pain. Twilight screamed.

Bronze wasn't and expert at how unicorns and Alicorns performed magic, he assumed their horns felt more like and extra body part. Capable of doing almost anything, unlike an extra leg, head , or anything else. His breakfast, lunch, and dinner were usually brought to him. He had predicted that in a week or so he would be powerful enough to revive all his limbs and rid his body of all his illnesses. Every day he concentrated purely on putting adsorbing energy and storing it in his gem. For hours on end he would do this. Bone regeneration and illness riddance were two very complicated spells. He wanted to be walking by tomorrow. Running by mid-day tomorrow. He was naturally fit. Most of his life he had spent lifting heavy amounts of bronze from a mine that had been established in future Ponyvile. That had kept him in shape.Every month he was able to carry a little bit more. It had been like a lifetime of weight lifting. Again he hoped to be walking Friday, it was Thursday.

Celestia walked calmly through the castle keeping her composure in front of the guards and staff. When she arrived at Bronze's room she opened the door. Inside it was dark except the glowing of his gem. He wore it around his neck as he slept. The curtains over the windows were closed. "I guess he wanted a nap" Celestia said to herself "I'll just come back later".

"There is no need to leave" Bronze said as she turned to leave.

"I can sit up for a moment." Bronze spoke as he sat up in bed.

"I need you" Celestia said.

"To do what?" Bronze questioned the Princess

"To find my student" Celestia spoke loudly "Please! You must have some feelings for her!?"

"I've told you, I have a plan."

"Yes, and I have believed you up until now! So tell me of this 'plan'!"

"Celestia calm yourself." Bronze said calmly

"How?! How can I be calm when I don't even know if I can trust you to rescue my student? The very pony who sent you to protect me!"

"Celestia..."

"No! No more 'Celestia,I have a plan'!" She mimicked "Come on you must have some idea of who took her!"

"Celestia.."

"Shut it!" Celestia shouted, she took a deep breath. She walked over to Bronze's bedside. Then put her right hoof down on Bronze's right front leg. He had his head up away from his pillow, but he was still on his back. Celestia brushed over his leg with her hoof very soothingly.

"Bronze..oh sweet sweet Bronze." Celestia spoke soothingly in a near whisper. "If you give me any ideas you may have as to where my student is...I will give you the ride of your life. The...best...night...ever." she spoke seductively bringing her head close to his.

"Celestia I have a.."

"Bronze...remember...best...night...ever. My...'royal goods' have never really been 'pleasured'."

"I have a plan." Bronze spoke quickly.

Celestia's eye twitched slightly. "Okay Bronze, I believe you" she said with an unnatural calm.
As she left the room Celestia looked back her right eye twitched again as she said "I trust you Bronze".
Bronze was beginning to worry about her.

The next day Bronze woke at the crack of the dawn. He first opened his eyes. Then sat up. He thought a moment about a shade of orange he had seen on someone's coat on the way to Canterlot Castle. Then he thought about oranges the fruit, after thinking this he had a quick moment of remembering what he was suppose to do today. He remembered yesterday, Thursday. He remembered Celestia's words she had said that day.
"...best...night...ever" popped into his mind. He had a quick second to think about what Celestia could have done to him if he had accepted her " ' Best night ever' ". He almost wished he had. Then he remembered what he was suppose to do today. Revive his broken limbs and rid himself of his illnesses!

The room was at first dark then there was a slight spark from his necklace. Next it began to glow. Now the amount of magic he was about to use was beyond amazing, it was probably overkill for just ridding himself of illness and injury, but what was left could make him even stronger. Small snakes of energy erupted from his gem. They weren't quite snakes maybe just lines. There was a blue one, a purple, one and a large golden yellow one. The blue one wrapped itself around Bronze's rear legs and stomach. The purple his chest and front legs. The large gold one wrapped itself around his neck and head. In a blinding show of mesmerizing color and blinding light, one by one they exploded into small puffs of a transparent dust like particles. Each one colored like its original form. As they hit Bronze's skin he seemed to absorb them. He began to get movement and feeling back into his limbs. As the last particles got absorbed, he got out of bed. Stretched and said "Oh yeah, it feels soooo good to get out bed.".

He heard hoof steps outside his door. He climbed back into bed in the hopes to surprise Celestia with his self-limb-revival. Just as he pulled to the covers back to his neck, the door opened. Celestia walked in calmly the hallway outside dark. Bronze couldn't see her face through the darkness. She didn't speak a word. Just came over to his bed side. Bronze pretended to be asleep. Celestia brought her head in close to his. "Oh...Bronze...if you won't even help me get my Twilight back then I will have to make you help by means I have accrued in my own mind at night before going to sleep, oh how I have wanted to do this for so long".

Celestia's horn glowed and the covers to Bronze's right rose for her. She climbed into his bed, lowered the covers then rolled on top of him. "Bronnzie..oh Mr.Bronze wakey wakey...". Bronze slowly opened his eyes.

"Celestia. What are you doing,dear?" Bronze asked even though he knew perfectly well what she was going to do to him

"Something I have wanted to do for a good amount of time"

Bronze quickly brought up his front hooves. Celestia pinned them with her own. Her strength was beyond the guards from future Ponyvile.

"I saw you revive your limbs from the door keyhole. I just made the fake hoof steps to make you believe I was coming. Now lets do this" Celestia said grinning seductively.

"Celestia...please...I realize that Twilight's kidnapping was emotionally traumatizing to you but please mmhp....! while Bronze was speaking out panic Celestia had been licking her lips then she went straight for his lips.

Bronze shook his head violently.

"Stop squirming Bronzie!"

"Princess please stop, you don't want to do this!"

"I already told you didn't I? I really REALLY do."

Celestia came in for another deep kiss. Then she used one of her rear legs to separate Bronze's legs. Bronze tried to bring his legs back together to shield his groin from Celestia's, but it was in vain. Celestia began to bring down her body onto Bronze's. The sensation Bronze felt was absolute pleasure. There was no decision on his side of the intimacy.

Celestia's mind was clouded with only thoughts of Bronze, on his back, giving her his all from the bottom. Then she had a devilish idea. She released her deep kiss on Bronze and instead began licking his neck and face, only going as low as the base of the neck. The going to the base of his neck put her horn in direct contact with his magical gem. The sensation she got from that was incredible. The second time her horn touched it she put a nasty controlling spell on him. This gave her control over his every movement. In her mind she laughed an evil laugh at this.

Bronze didn't know what happened one minute Celestia was licking his neck and he was still trying to force her off him the next. He had lost control and was returning the licking and beginning a pulse between their lower bodies. Celestia released her pressure on his front hooves. Instead of forcing her off him with his now free hooves, he wrapped them around her and began to use them to assist in the pulsing of their lower bodies.

"Ohhhh...ohhhhhh Bronzzzzze!" Celestia moaned with each strong pulse.

Outside the bedroom.

Princess Luna was indeed excited for breakfast the cooks downstairs had made and excellent buffet of breakfast foods. However with Celestia no where to be found it was up to her to bring Bronze his share of the incredible food. She hadn't had much contact with Bronze in his time there. Mostly just and introduction when he entered the castle and a few days where she brought him a meal. When Luna arrived at Bronze's bedroom with a plate of eggs,bacon,toast, and a small cup of orange juice floating by her side. She pulled up one hoof and knocked on the door. She heard someone get off the bed and then she heard hoof steps. Wait. Bronze couldn't walk, he had 2 broken legs. Maybe Celestia or a guard was interviewing him that and was sitting on the bed since the room lacked any chairs.

The door unlocked and opened. Celestia's being appeared beside the door. Luna smiled know figuring she had been in a early morning conversation with Bronze.

"Oh, hi Celestia!"

"Hello Luna"

"Watcha doin'?" Luna asked with an odd accent. That sounded very 'Country'.

"Having a talk with Bronze" Celestia said with a slight emphasis on " ' talk ' "

"I see, well here is his breakfast. Do you want me to bring you something too? I can make another run back to the kitchen and make you a plate."

"That would be wonderful, thank you very much Lu-Lu," Celestia said with a very cutesy voice on " ' Lu-Lu' "

"Okay then I'll be back in about 5 minutes. The guards could be hogging the lines."

"Oh no hurry, thanks again Luna"

Celestia took levitated the plate and cup to Bronze's bedside, and closed the door.

"You'd better eat up Bronzie. You'll need all the energy you can get for what I have planned for you."

The force that had been controlling Bronze ceased its hold on him. He still felt a the force though. Just...not Celestia?

"You are very 'blessed' Bronze."

"Excuse me?"

"I enjoy you very much"

"In my mind I say the exact opposite but my heart says the same about you, oh and so does my groin" Bronze said jokingly, as he thought over his options for this situation.
Celestia found it hard to tell if he was trying to play Subliminal chess with her mind or if he was actually telling the truth. Either way he was hers after breakfast.

Minutes later when Luna came back with Celestia's breakfast plate. Celestia sat on Bronze's bed her horn glowing as she lifted the fork with bacon to her mouth. When ever Bronze looked at her she would look him in the eyes and lick her lips. As Bronze ate he hummed a nice tune to himself. "Ba dum ba dum dee dum dow".
Celestia picked up the next part the song since it was on a higher note Bronze's deep voice couldn't do very well
"Hum see um ba de dum"
Bronze continued
"Hum see um ba de dum dow dum dow dum"
Celestia went on
"Faw see dum da de dum dum see lum"
Bronze again
"fa lum do dum dum doo dum doo dum dee dee"
They finished the short song in unison
"hum de dum de dummmmmmmmmm!"
They both laughed then sighed in unison. Bronze's plate was clear. Celestia noticed this and moved it to the bedside table. Celestia put her focus on the two remaining pieces of bacon on her plate. She took one on her fork and bit it whole, chewed a moment then swallowed. And then the same with the last piece. Her plate moved to bed side table on top of Bronze's. She then licked her lips to clean them of an stray bacon grease that might have gotten on them. She moved over to Bronze and then on top of him.

"Ready or not here I come!" Celestia spoke excitedly.
Celestia restarted the pulses, then threw lips onto Bronze's, her tongue nearly went down his throat at some points of their kiss. This time Bronze embraced Celestia's touch,willingly. Bronze had decided to just roll with what ever she did, it was going to happen whether he liked it or not anyway.

"Ohhhhhhhhh Bronze...thats.....ohhhhhhhhhhhh" Celestia moaned.

They continued a routine of pumping, kissing, and licking each other for about an hour. Then at the height of their passion Bronze didn't bother to hold it back he just released. The moistness that formed between their legs was welcomed by both Celestia and Bronze. Celestia moaned loudly as it came, she began blushing as she moaned.

Celestia rolled off him.

"That was wonderful" Bronze admitted

"In....Indeed" Celestia said panting

"Celestia?"

"Ye...Yes Bronze"

"Where is the land the first ponies came from. When they were run out by the blizzard. You know the ones who founded Equestria?"

Celestia was caught off guard by the question. "Wha...what, you mean the old lands?"
"Yes those ones"
"That's to directly North. I make a visit there every summer."
"What month is it oh and the day?"
"June 5th"
"When do you usually travel there?"
"July"
"Then this year we leave together."
"Okay,okay, but why?"
"I have an idea as to how we will find Twilight Sparkle"
"Your Princess is pleased...very pleased"
"Good"
"Not just with that but with what have already done together, now I am just more pleased, but why do you think Twilight is there?" She asked
"Sixty-six hinted it to me long ago"
"Who?"
"Never mind, just somepony told me" Bronze said as he panted

Author's end note: 4 hours of straight-up-non-stop writing complete.

WARNING MATURE CONTENT BELOW!
Celestia's horn glowed and the covers to Bronze's right rose for her. She climbed into his bed, lowered the covers then rolled on top of him. "Bronnzie..oh Mr.Bronze wakey wakey...". Bronze slowly opened his eyes.

"Celestia. What are you doing,dear?" Bronze asked even though he knew perfectly well what she was going to do to him

"Something I have wanted to do for a good amount of time"

Bronze quickly brought up his front hooves. Celestia pinned them with her own. Her strength was beyond the guards from future Ponyvile.

"I saw you revive your limbs from the door keyhole. I just made the fake hoof steps to make you believe I was coming. Now lets do this" Celestia said grinning seductively.

Bronze tried to move his head to avoid her incoming kiss, but she caught his lips with her's any how. Her body slowly lowered to his. In one quick unexpected motion, Bronze was able to bring up his rear legs. He forced Celestia off him all legs pushing her away. She was forced off him now. He rolled off the bed quickly and popped up to a form of fighting stance next to the bed.

"You might as well just get back into bed, Bronzie, that's not going to keep me away from you!" Celestia said as she pounced of the bed and back onto Bronze. Celestia forced his own fore hooves back to the sides of his head, cornering his lips. She used her tail to tickle his groin and her rear legs to keep his legs separated. Bronze could feel himself becoming aroused. He hated himself for letting the tickling from the tail arouse him.

Celestia began licking his neck and chest. On one pass near his necklace she let her horn touch it.

oooh. Whats this, oh my...I need get him burning red hot. That felt good. The Princess thought

She brought her horn to his necklace again. This time, she had control of his movements. She got off him and said "Bronzie, go ready a bath for us."

Bronze had no idea what had happened. It was as if the word 'Bronzie' was...a remote control. Controlling him!

He found himself turning on the hot bath water and watching the tub fill up. Soon the tub was near full. He shut off the water now and waited. Celestia came into the bathroom and closed the door behind her.

"Get into the bath tub Bronzie."

Bronze got in.

"On your back, if you would Bronzie."

Bronze got on his back in the water. This insured only his head and neck stuck out of the water.

"Now I'll just get in. Ohhhh...thank you for the hot water Bronzie, it'll help us get things hotter."

Suddenly she was on top of him. Her face had a look of seduction on it. She brought her mouth next to his left ear and whispered "Bronzie...Lets make love".

Her body lowered itself fully into the water and on top of Bronze. His legs spread. Celestia's tail massages his groin in the water. Her mane tickled his neck. Her lips met his. Her groin lowered fully onto his. Bronze noticed her horn glowed as a bottle floated to the bathtub and clear liquid oozed out. Soon bubbles formed.
A bubble bath? Oh my she is going to make this as hot as she can. That word 'Bronzie' She is using that to control me!

Bronze couldn't fight it. As much as he wanted to. Celestia had control over him. As the tub filled with bubbles. Celestia became almost bored of the simple kissing and massaging and now her groin began to pump. As her's began his followed her lead. Soon her breathing became faster. Bronze's also became faster. Their pumping even faster. As they pumped Celestia moaned loudly.

"Oh my...How in Equestria can you be this big!"

Bronze was an average sized stallion. Yet even he could feel the size of his erection. He was running red hot. Almost as hot as the goddess of the sun. Celestia's pumping stopped and her body reversed. Her groin and flank came to Bronze's face, while her head went to his groin.

"Bronzie...pleasure me. Lets see if either one of us can run any hotter.." She said seductively moving her mouth over his stallionhood. Bronze let out a light moan, he had tried to silence it but Celestia's actions were too much.

"Oh Bronze...I thought you had swallowed your tongue." she joked "you were so quiet."

Bronze found himself putting his mouth into the Princess's groin as she had ordered. The pleasure to both of them from this was immense . Steam from the extremely hot water had fogged the bathroom. Bronze tried to concentrate on something other than where his mouth and tongue where and what they were doing. Instead he found himself thinking about what Celestia was doing to his groin. This made his arousal increase.

"How in Equestria is any stallion this good!? I think you are going to hold a world record Bronzie!" Celestia exclaimed as Bronze's erection became near full sized. Celestia levitated a small paper cup and mouth wash from the sink next to the door. She swirled the mouth wash in her mouth then spit it into the cup and levitated both items back to their original place. Then she moved her body around and put her lips to Bronze's lips again. A pumping started again. Celestia released the kiss and sent her nose skyward as she moaned and moaned

"Status check." Celestia said as she touched her horn to Bronze's wet necklace. He wasn't going full steam. He was able to hold back!? How! "Bronzie...I am such a naughty goddess maybe we should go get dry on the bed and think of a way to punish me.."

Celestia started draining the water. And as she and Bronze hopped out of the tub. She levitated a towel to Bronze. He dried himself off and as he looked down at his groin he saw lip marks? Was she wearing lip stick? The two of them dropped the towels and walked to the bed. Bronze got in on the left side. Celestia the right. The met in the middle and instantly began to get extremely hot again.

"Oh Bronzie...my flank is feeling left out." she said playfully laying on her stomach her flank going higher than the rest of her body.

"Well we cant have...that." Bronze said without thinking he had said that by his own will.

"Oh Bronze..." she chuckled

He brought his fore hooves onto her back. Then without encouragement from the 'Bronzie' control he began pumping. Celestia moaned loudly. Within minutes she collapsed onto her stomach fully. She had to catch her breath.

"Wow..." was all she could mutter

Suddenly there was a knock on the door.

Outside the bedroom.

Princess Luna was indeed excited for breakfast the cooks downstairs had made and excellent buffet of breakfast foods. However with Celestia no where to be found it was up to her to bring Bronze his share of the incredible food. She hadn't had much contact with Bronze in his time there. Mostly just and introduction when he entered the castle and a few days where she brought him a meal. When Luna arrived at Bronze's bedroom with a plate of eggs,bacon,toast, and a small cup of orange juice floating by her side. She pulled up one hoof and knocked on the door. She heard someone get off the bed and then she heard hoof steps. Wait. Bronze couldn't walk, he had 2 broken legs. Maybe Celestia or a guard was interviewing him that and was sitting on the bed since the room lacked any chairs.

The door unlocked and opened. Celestia's being appeared beside the door. Luna smiled know figuring she had been in a early morning conversation with Bronze.

"Oh, hi Celestia!"

"Hello Luna"

"Watcha doin'?" Luna asked with an odd accent. That sounded very 'Country'.

"Having a talk with Bronze" Celestia said with a slight emphasis on " ' talk ' "

"I see, well here is his breakfast. Do you want me to bring you something too? I can make another run back to the kitchen and make you a plate."

"That would be wonderful, thank you very much Lu-Lu," Celestia said with a very cutesy voice on " ' Lu-Lu' "

"Okay then I'll be back in about 5 minutes. The guards could be hogging the lines."

"Oh no hurry, thanks again Luna"

Celestia took levitated the plate and cup to Bronze's bedside, and closed the door.

"You'd better eat up Bronzie. You'll need all the energy you can get for what I have planned for you."

The force that had been controlling Bronze ceased its hold on him. He still felt a the force though. Just...not Celestia?

"You are very 'blessed' Bronze."

"Excuse me?"

"I enjoy you very much"

"In my mind I say the exact opposite but my heart says the same about you, oh and so does my groin" Bronze said jokingly, as he thought over his options for this situation.
Celestia found it hard to tell if he was trying to play Subliminal chess with her mind or if he was actually telling the truth. Either way he was hers after breakfast.

Minutes later when Luna came back with Celestia's breakfast plate. Celestia sat on Bronze's bed her horn glowing as she lifted the fork with bacon to her mouth. When ever Bronze looked at her she would look him in the eyes and lick her lips. Bronze knew what would come so when he finished his breakfast he laid back. Ready. When Celestia finished her breakfast she moved the plate away and climbed on top of him.

"Willing now?" She was slightly confused

"Yes...ready,willing, and able"

"still?"

"Yes."

"ooh la la" Celestia purred as she brought her lips down to his.

They began pumping again on the bed now. Celestia was enjoying this. Her mane was in his eyes, but he knew she was sweating and panting hard. He could feel her moist breath through the rainbow colored hair on his face. Suddenly the hair was moved from his eyes and face as Celestia came down with another passionate kiss. She then playfully said "Status check!" and brought her horn down to his necklace again.

"Oh my...Bronze now you're running as hot as I am!"

It was sort of true. He was amused and aroused. He wrapped his fore legs around her head and brought her head to his for another kiss. Celestia liked this. Their bodies moved in sync with each other. Soon they were at a climax. Celestia's face went red as she reached hers and Bronze simply moaned in pleasure. They both noticed the amount of wetness on each of them. Not from the bath but instead from each other. Bodily fluid, saliva, and sweat all combining on them and the bed.

Celestia rolled off him.

"That was wonderful" Bronze admitted

"In....Indeed" Celestia said panting

"Celestia?"

"Ye...Yes Bronze"

"Where is the land the first ponies came from. When they were run out by the blizzard. You know the ones who founded Equestria?"

Celestia was caught off guard by the question. "Wha...what, you mean the old lands?"

"Yes those ones"

"That's to directly North. I make a visit there every summer."

"What month is it oh and the day?"

"June 5th"

"When do you usually travel there?"

"July"

"Then this year we leave together."

"Okay,okay, but why?"

"I have an idea as to how we will find Twilight Sparkle"

"Your Princess is pleased...very pleased"

"Good"

"Not just with that but with what have already done together, now I am just more pleased, but why do you think Twilight is there?" She asked

"Sixty-six hinted it to me long ago"

"Who?"

"Never mind, just somepony told me" Bronze said as he panted

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