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[Second Person Fic] You only wanted life to be simple, but one betrayal too many makes it impossible
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[2nd-Person Fic starring you and Fluttershy]

You wanted to live your life simply, make the best for yourself, and maybe make a few friends along the way. But with one backstab too many, you find that last point to be impossible. You make it a point to never put too much faith in your so-called "friends," and you wonder if you'll ever be able to trust again.

Will the kindness of a simple mare be able to turn you around?

Author's Note: I've read a few 2nd-Person fics around, both on here and elsewhere, so I thought "Why not give it a shot?" My first fanfiction, not only about ponies, but about ANY sort of material, so criticism is welcome. If you spot grammar issues or whatever, I'll try and get them all sorted out as well.

Why Fluttershy? Well, she's my favorite, of course. That, and I've yet to develop a story for any other character thus far.

As for content? It won't be incredibly saucy, and some foul language is about the worst I'll throw into this, so don't worry too much about that.

So sit back, and enjoy the ride! I hope you do, anyway....

Art by ~Lucia-Conchita on DeviantArt.

Dubious
Complete
Romance
Slice of Life

24,827 words: Estimated 1 Hour, 40 Minutes to read: [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]

8 Chapters:

  1. Prologue [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jan 16th, 2012
    110
  2. Chapter One: Collapse [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Mar 23rd, 2012
    2,358
  3. Chapter Two: Awaken [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Mar 23rd, 2012
    1,625
  4. Chapter Three: Greetings [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jan 19th, 2012
    4,208
  5. Chapter Four: Confrontations [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jan 26th, 2012
    6,096
  6. Chapter Five: Regret [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Feb 3rd, 2012
    3,536
  7. Chapter Six: Memory [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Feb 14th, 2012
    6,572
  8. Epilogue [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Feb 15th, 2012
    322
Published Jan 17th, 2012
Last Update Feb 14th, 2012

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