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A Better Life

by Happy_McDull

Chapter 1: Going up.

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Going up.

"Come on Kyle, don't be a wimp! Just do it! Pull the damn trigger!" Kyle's life has been nothing but shit. He never had a girlfriend, in all of school, he was bullied, and after college, nobody talks or cares he's even there. He's had a harsh life. When he was 8, he almost fell off a building during a field trip and only the teachers where scared to death. Some kids said nothing. Some, under there breath said, 'Darn it. If only the teacher didn't get to him in time'. One kid cheered when he was starting to look like he was loosing his grip on the edge.

No body cared at all. So, he's emo, suicidal, and lonely. And now, he's going to be lonely until the end of time when heaven is gone. If it even will be able to be destroyed in the future, but that's highly doubted. So, after much though, he decided to tighten his grip on the trigger. He only heard the first millisecond sound it makes when the gun is fired. After that, black. Nothing but black.

"Finally, I ended my shitty self. time to be hated no more," said Kyle, thinking out loud. Then, as he feels himself floating up, he sighs in relieve.

"Good. I'm not going down. Why would I think that, anyway?" said Kyle. Then, he sees a pearl gate in the clouds, then he see's an angel waiting at the door, but this angel has a very displeased look.

"Your not supposed to be here for another 60 years, Kyle. Why here so soon?" asked the angle.

"Oh, don't play dumb. You know why. You know everything when your up here," Kyle shot back.

"True, but still, you were not really supposed to do that," said the angel.

"Eh, so what. Better here now then wait another 60 years in that place I call home, or, called home," said Kyle.

"Actually, there is one thing I can do to have you change your mind. I could give you a second chance," A second chance? Reincarnation?

"You mean like reincarnation?"

"No, I mean try again in a different world. Your dead, so you cant be there again. So, a new world for you. Your gonna have to change your form though," said the angel. Then, he waved his hand over Kyle, and he felt his body change shape. An obvious notice was he was becoming shorter.

"What, I'm gonna be a kid again?" asked Kyle.

"No, that is the tallest size for where your going," then, he felt him have hair grow all over, but short, and in a color.

"What the? Why am I grey?" Asked Kyle.

"You'll see soon enough," then, he felt a pain in his head.

"Ow! Head ache!" Then, he felt something long grow where his tailbone is.

"I'm guessing I now have a tail?" asked Kyle. The angel nodded.

"Great, I'm going to be a monkey. Thanks." then, he felt his hands melt and turn flat.

"O.k, not monkey. Tiny horse?" asked Kyle.

"Its called a pony," said the angle. Then, he say his hair was changing red.

"Nice choice of colors. Now I look like I'm emo," said Kyle.

"You already are, smart one," said the angle. "Done. Now, time to try again, Kyle. I hope I don't see you until it's time, Kyle," said the angle.

"Yeah, whatever," Then, he see's he's falling of a cloud. But, when he falls through it, instead of a three dimentional world, he's in a pastel world.

"What the buck? Wait... why did I just say buck instead of- aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhh! Nonononono! Falling! Falling! Falling!" Screamed Kyle. He cant stop himself, so this is going to be an automatic death. He didn't even get to be here for a solid minute. The angel should have thought about that.

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"And then she said, ' I don't want to have this giant muffin go bye-bye.' Then I said, 'Its a cloud, Ditzy. That's not a muffin.' Then she said, huh? Whats that?" said Rainbow Dash. Fluttershy looks at Dash, confused.

"I don't get it. Do you mean she doesn't know what a cloud is or-" No, I mean look!" Said Dash, as she moves Fluttershy's head to see what she's talking about. She squints, but then see's what it is. A pony? Well, if its in the air, it can fly. But, it wasn't. This was worrying Fluttershy.

"Ahh! That's not good! That pony is falling! We have to save him!" Screamed Fluttershy as she zoomed towards the falling pony.

"Uhhh... wait. Huh? Oh, yeah!" Rainbow Dash was a bit surprised she flew to it quick. She followed, and saw this pony was falling. This pony couldn't even fly! How did a Unicorn get in the air?! These thoughts where going through her head, but she didn't have time to stop. She had a pony to save!

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"Crap, crap, crap, crap, crap! Uhhh... float! Uhh... halt! Ohh... I hope I have a soft landing!" Said a worried to death Kyle! Then, he fells he something take hold of his, what he thinks are upper, legs? He looks up, and see's a yellow winged pony. Then, he see's a cyan one with a Rainbow mane. "What the buck is going on?" thought Kyle. Then, he thought, "Why do I keep saying buck?" What was weird to the two ponies is right when he looked at them, he was getting woozy, then fainted. Time for the hospital. Next Chapter: On the ground, again Estimated time remaining: 6 Minutes

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