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Blaze Blue Fire mane

by HurricanePigeon

Chapter 4

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Chapter 4

Chapter 4

Location Outside canterlot

day of trial left 365

time 12:34

“Hmm... where is the nearest city?” blaze pondered to himself. “There Fillydelphia but that's a good 4 day walk and with winter approaching I might not have the supplies to survive. Well I will just have to get a job” Blaze rolled up the map and left on his journey. As he was walking along, blaze couldn't help but notice a small crowed around a makeshift stage.

“Come one come all to the greatest show in all the land as I, the Great And Powerful Trixie, has magic strong enough to vanquish an Ursa major!” the boastful unicorn spoke. The crowd was shocked until an earth pony spoke out, “Yeah right and I’m a super pony”

The crowed laughed then Trixie replied in over confident tone “You doubt me? Well then any-pony that wants to try to beat me, just stand on this stage”

Blaze look over a thought to himself “Well this might be fun. If this unicorn did really defeat an Ursa Major, then I have to see”

Many ponies tried but no-pony could beat Trixie’s magic.

“Just as I thought, none of you could beat me” she laughed. She spotted Blaze at the corner of her eye.

“You there, do you think you beat me?” she asked blaze.

“Well?” blaze replied, “Well if you asking for it” he said as he stepped on stage.

“Can your magic do this” blaze asked as he made an tornado of fire around him. Trixie looked stunned as the crowed was puzzled. Do they cheer for the fire mane or fear him.

As blaze walked away he said “I was hoping for more of a challenge but I guess your just a wannabe”

Trixie tired to argue but she just packed up her stage and left.

Hours past and blaze was getting hungry. That stunt he did used more energy than he thought and as darkness fell blaze noticed a large group of storm clouds were heading his way.

“Great if it rains it will take even more time to get to fillydelphia and I don't have time to waste”

As he walked on he noticed a cabin.

“I hope that they let me stay there until the rains stops”

As walked up to the house it started to rain heavily.

“Well I'm stuck hear then“

As blaze knocked on the door, he look around. He had never been in this part before. The door then opened.

“Can I help you?” asked the owner of the cabin.

Blaze turned and said “Yeah, I was wounder-” as he noticed who owned the cabin.

“Its you!” they both said both in a shocked manner.

“What are you doing here? Come to gloat some more” Trixie snapped.

“Well no I was hoping I could stay here until the rain stops?” blaze replied.

“Why should I do that? Your clearly more powerful then me” she ranted.

“Well you see water if deadly to me. If my mane and tail get extinguished, I die. So please, just until the rain stop” Blaze explained.

“Fine” Trixie groaned. “You can stay.”

Blaze smiled as he walked in to Trixie’s house. There were many photos and news paper articles scattered around the house with all one thing in common: They were all about her.

Blaze though to himself “Wow, ego much”

As he turned to Trixie, she look away in disgust

“Thanks by the way for letting me in” Blaze softly said.

“Well don’t get comfortable the rain will stop soon” Trixie snapped.

“Hay I was trying to be nice. Maybe if you stop thinking about yourself and respect others, you might have friends” Blaze yelled insultingly, being over whelmed by guilt as the blue unicorn burst into tears.

“Well you don’t know what it’s like being over shadow by your older brother. Even when I got my cutie mark my parents payed more attention to him” she sobbed.

“I... I'm sorry, I didn't know” Blaze tired to explain but then rain stopped.

“Good the rain stopped now you can get out and never come back” she screamed as she forced blaze out and slammed door on him. As blaze walk away he said

“Way to go, first day in and you all ready made some one hate you. Great start”

End of chapter

Next Chapter: Chapter 5 Estimated time remaining: 38 Minutes

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