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Blaze Blue Fire mane

by HurricanePigeon

Chapter 2

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Chapter 2

Chapter 2

“Okay here is the plan and I’m not repeating it you got that” snapped a green unicorn with a dark green mane In a military tone.

“Yes mother” giggled a golden Pegasus with A pure White mane

“Very funny” snarled the green unicorn “AS I was saying, Thunderous and Tornadus will fly up and sneak in through the skylight. Once there they will open side where Blaze and Psy-psy will enter. Then me, smasher and the boss will enter the front to collect our earnings. You got that?” They all nodded.

“Let’s go” said confidently as the Pegasus twins fly to the roof.

“Carefully bro” whispered Thundurus.

“Don’t tell me what to do. I’m older then you” replied Tornadus.

 “By what, two minutes?” argued the youngest Pegasus.

“Anyway be quiet, this is a stealth robbery.” as they snuck in through the skylight closing it as gently as possible

“Okay, lets get the keys” they whispered.

Outside: “Remember blaze, low flame” whispered  gray unicorn with a coal black mane.

“Right” nodded blaze as his mane decreased in size.

Then door creek open. “Let’s go” blaze said as they snuck through the house.

“Whoa! this family must be loaded. A Crystal Neck-less and oh a safe! Smasher is gonna love this” Psy-psy whispered with glee as the colts continued scavenging around the house, when a young voice spoke out.

“Who- who are you and w-what are you doing in house” but before any pony could react she screamed.

 “MOM ,DAD HELP” psy-psy quickly silenced the young unicorn with his hoof but it was to late.

“Whats the matter darling” said the mother.

“Yes what the problem” the father asked as they rushed in to see his daughter.

The young unicorn pushed psy-psy away and sprinted to her parents.

“Oh no! not you lot-” but before the mother could finish her sentence blaze Yelled as mane grew back to it’s proper size.

“Boss we been compromised”

“Oh for goodness sake smasher open this door now” Snapped the boss.

“Yes sir” he said as he smashed the door right off it hinges, nearly taking out Thunderous.

“Watch it you big lug” Thunderous yelled angrily, Smasher only smiled and chuckled to himself.

Silence fell as both the unicorn family and the colts stared at each other when the young unicorn asked,

“Who are people mommy?”

“They are an elite group of thieves some say there best in all of Equestria” replied the mother.

“But your not getting away now” the farther yelled as he charged towards smasher who simply knock him away like it was nothing. A sinister laugh came form the boss  

“I have three things to say one. Psy disable there magic”

“Yes sir” psy-psy replied as his disable the unicorn family’s horn’s

“Two, Commandos seal all the exits apart form the front door” Commandos nodded  as he barricaded all the Windows and doors.

“Three, blaze burn down this house” the boss said as he laughed.

“What you must be joking sir?” blaze asked in shock out of his bosses extreme actions.

“Blaze. Think of it this way all, seven of us rotten in prison or the three lose there life” the boss argued confidently The unicorn family was now huddled together, looking at blaze with tearful eyes waiting for his choice.

“I'm so sorry” blaze muttered as lunched  fire balls at the walls and floor

“Good now if you don’t mind, we will be leaving now” the boss laughed as he walked out of the burning building with rest off the colts

“You monster” screamed the mother holding her family tight as Commandos sealed the front door, trapping the family with in as the colts were walking away, head hung up high. In their good night finding, blaze stopped and looked at the building which by now is engulfed by flames. He gritted is teeth and turn around and ran toward the flaming building as parts of house collapsed around the family as they hugged tougher and prayed. When suddenly they heard a loud thud and again when the block-aid fell.

Blaze yelled. “Get out now” as he started to absorb the flames as the unicorns walked out. The building began to collapse as the family looked as blaze collapsed. The young unicorn in shock asked “Whats wrong mister?”  

Blaze replied in pain “A fire-mane is only able to absorb so much before it the power is too much to handle. Stand back” blaze continued. Then when the family was a safe distance blaze releast the excess power skyward which woke the whole town up. As blaze stared to leave, the mother asked “Where are you going?”

Blaze replied, “I’m turning my self in” and walked away in to the night

End of chapter      

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