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No humans. In Equestria's past, ponies exist only to serve their creators. One such pony is accidentally released from her mental chains, but how can one mare save herself and her people if she doesn't even know she's a slave?
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SF (canon species only; no humans) Ponies were magically and genetically engineered to be the perfect servitor race. They are powerful, adaptable, intelligent and completely under the control of their creators. A laboratory accident frees one such pony from her mental chains, but how can one mare save herself and the rest of her kind if she doesn't even know she's a slave?

This is not the Equestria you know and these are not your little ponies... not yet, anyway.

Tags: Adventure, Diamond Dogs, Gryphons, NO HUMANS (did I mention that already?)

Other tags: historical, mind control, Clarke's 3rd Law, excessive use of high energy physics, before they were famous.

Detailed review by PaulAsaran.

Cover art by endrome , used with permission.

Russian translation (partial -- 'unofficially' completed in the comments)

A Soot-Covered World, book 1.

Young Adult
Complete
Adventure
Dark
Sci-Fi

233,572 words: Estimated 1 Day, 2 Hours to read: [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]

33 Chapters:

  1. 01 - Pony in a Particle Accelerator [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Dec 21st, 2013
    4,373
  2. 02 - A Day in the Life of the Average Pony [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Nov 26th, 2013
    5,626
  3. 03 - Claws Inside the Velvet Glove [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Apr 5th, 2016
    6,291
  4. 04 - A Small Mercy [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Apr 5th, 2016
    5,620
  5. 05 - You can take the gryphon out of the raptor... [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Oct 17th, 2018
    5,475
  6. 06 - ...but you can't take the raptor out of the gryphon. [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Nov 27th, 2013
    5,894
  7. 07 - Unintended consequences [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Oct 17th, 2018
    7,684
  8. 08 - Breaking the Skinner Box [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Nov 27th, 2013
    4,347
  9. 09 - Revelations from the Belly of the Beast [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Nov 27th, 2013
    9,664
  10. 10 - Pony in a Particle Accelerator, Redux [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Oct 17th, 2018
    8,249
  11. 11 - Best Laid Plans [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Nov 27th, 2013
    8,761
  12. 12 - No Good Deed Goes Unpunished [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Nov 27th, 2013
    7,132
  13. 13 - Sun and Moon [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Oct 17th, 2018
    6,215
  14. 14 - A Little Knowledge... [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Feb 15th, 2014
    6,294
  15. 15 - ...is a dangerous thing (1) [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Nov 27th, 2013
    7,729
  16. 16 - ...is a dangerous thing (2) [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Oct 17th, 2018
    7,059
  17. 17 - No Good Choices (1) [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Nov 28th, 2013
    7,454
  18. 18 - No Good Choices (2) [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Apr 5th, 2016
    8,189
  19. 19 - When Gravity Fails [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Mar 8th, 2014
    9,607
  20. 20 - Knife Edge [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Apr 5th, 2016
    5,623
  21. 21 - A Useful Monster [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Dec 2nd, 2013
    6,683
  22. 22 - A Necessary Evil [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Oct 17th, 2018
    8,031
  23. 23 - Baptism of Fire [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jun 16th, 2013
    108
  24. 24 - A Dark and Angry Goddess Arises [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Dec 3rd, 2013
    7,234
  25. 25 - Locking the stable door... [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Dec 3rd, 2013
    8,576
  26. 26 - ...after the horse has barricaded itself inside [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jan 7th, 2014
    7,793
  27. 27 - Knocking on heaven’s door [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Dec 4th, 2013
    10,931
  28. 28 - Ask me for anything but time [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Dec 6th, 2013
    7,740
  29. 29 - A precautionary measure (1) [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Dec 6th, 2013
    8,401
  30. 30 - A precautionary measure (2) [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Dec 12th, 2013
    7,220
  31. 31 - Hard Lessons [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Dec 12th, 2013
    12,916
  32. 32 - Falling Free [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Dec 14th, 2013
    6,469
  33. 33 - Epilogue to part 1 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Dec 16th, 2013
    4,184
Published Jan 12th, 2012
Last Update Dec 15th, 2013

Other Titles in this Series:

  1. Days of Wasp and Spider

    by Luna-tic Scientist
    30 Dislikes, 17,209 Views

    No humans. In Equestria's past, ponies exist only to serve their creators. One such pony is accidentally released from her mental chains, but how can one mare save herself and her people if she doesn't even know she's a slave?

    Young Adult
    Complete
    Adventure
    Dark
    Sci-Fi

    33 Chapters, 233,572 words: Estimated 1 Day, 2 Hours to read: Cached
    Published Jan 12th, 2012
    Last Update Dec 15th, 2013
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    Direct sequel to Days of Wasp and Spider. SF/no humans: rebellion, mind control, pre-apocalypse.

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