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The pegasi that founded Equestria have a dark past, a past Commander Hurricane played a key role in.
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How far will you go to save your family? Your friends? Your empire? Twenty years before the events of the Hearth's Warming Eve story, long before the pegasi had even met the other two races, Commander Hurricane was a simple farmer in the great Cirran Empire. When the neighboring griffon nation declares war on Cirra and everything it stands for, the young Hurricane finds himself thrown into the middle of a conflict with the fate of his very race put into question. Will he rise to be the pegasus Cirra needs him to be, or will the mighty empire fall to the claws of the griffons?

Officially part of "The Price of Loyalty" storyverse, in collaboration with LoyalLiar.

Now with a side story! Come check out my friend Ruirik's Wind and Stone and follow along with the journey of another legionnaire who struggled through the Red Cloud War at the same time as Hurricane. (*contains references to events in the sequel to OSLF, Snow and Shadows, so be wary*)

Cover art by Ruirik

Teen
Complete
Adventure
Tragedy
Dark
Gore

107,531 words: Estimated 7 Hours, 11 Minutes to read: [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]

18 Chapters:

  1. Prologue: Forecast [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jul 13th, 2014
    912
  2. Chapter 1: Breeze [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Aug 14th, 2018
    4,550
  3. Chapter 2: Gust [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jun 30th, 2016
    6,175
  4. Chapter 3: Draft [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jun 30th, 2016
    2,588
  5. Chapter 4: Gale [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jun 30th, 2016
    3,569
  6. Chapter 5: Turbulence [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jul 18th, 2016
    4,357
  7. Chapter 6: Squall [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jul 18th, 2016
    4,554
  8. Chapter 7: Mist [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jul 18th, 2016
    6,059
  9. Chapter 8: Tempest [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jul 19th, 2016
    5,660
  10. Chapter 9: Lightning [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Apr 24th, 2018
    5,307
  11. Chapter 10: Thunder [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jul 18th, 2018
    7,646
  12. Chapter 11: Fall [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jul 25th, 2018
    5,744
  13. Chapter 12: Cyclone [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Aug 13th, 2018
    14,458
  14. Chapter 13: Torrent [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Aug 13th, 2018
    5,988
  15. Chapter 14: Twister [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Aug 13th, 2018
    7,357
  16. Chapter 15: The Eye [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Aug 14th, 2018
    7,517
  17. Chapter 16: Hurricane [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Aug 14th, 2018
    13,623
  18. Epilogue: Clear Skies [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Aug 14th, 2018
    1,467
Published Oct 6th, 2012
Last Update Jul 13th, 2014

Other Titles in this Series:

  1. A Song of Storms: Of Skies Long Forgotten

    by The 24th Pegasus
    8 Dislikes, 7,084 Views

    The pegasi that founded Equestria have a dark past, a past Commander Hurricane played a key role in.

    Teen
    Complete
    Adventure
    Tragedy
    Dark
    Gore

    18 Chapters, 107,531 words: Estimated 7 Hours, 11 Minutes to read: Cached
    Published Oct 6th, 2012
    Last Update Jul 13th, 2014
  2. A Song of Storms: Snow and Shadows

    by The 24th Pegasus
    6 Dislikes, 3,674 Views

    With the onset of the windigo curse, Commander Hurricane and the other tribal leaders leave in search of new lands. They aren't the only ones to face challenges, as the tribes inch closer and closer to ripping each other apart with each day.

    Dubious
    Complete
    Adventure
    Tragedy
    Dark
    Gore

    22 Chapters, 229,687 words: Estimated 1 Day, 1 Hour to read: Cached
    Published Jan 12th, 2013
    Last Update Jan 12th, 2014
  3. A Song of Storms: The Summer Lands

    by The 24th Pegasus
    11 Dislikes, 1,349 Views

    The problems between the three tribes didn't end with the founding of Equestria. As the nation faces race riots, assassinations, and the threat of a civil war, it will take everything Commander Hurricane has just to see it survive the years.

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