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The problems between the three tribes didn't end with the founding of Equestria. As the nation faces race riots, assassinations, and the threat of a civil war, it will take everything Commander Hurricane has just to see it survive the years.
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AUTHOR'S NOTE: This story has been cancelled because I wasn't happy with how things were going. The largest problem came from trying to jam what should have been two books of material into one. So, for the time being at least, the original Summer Lands will remain on my user page, at least until I eventually get around to writing the two stories to conclude Hurricane's tale, as it should have been from the start. Do not consider any material contained within to be canon to the Price of Loyalty universe.


By writing these words, we hope that we can honor the spirit of our father, and remember him in the way that he truly was, not in the way that Celeste and Lūn wish for him to be. Long after we die and the world moves on, what really happened will have been forgotten to time, but as long as this last piece of evidence remains, then the truth can still be separated from history’s truth.

May our father, Commander Hurricane, rest in peace, knowing that we remember him and, through us, others may as well.
Ante Legionem nihil erat, et nihil erit post Legionem.

Commander Typhoon and Commander Cyclone.

After the founding of Equestria, Commander Hurricane, Queen Platinum, and Chancellor Puddinghead laid down the framework for the fledgling nation and migrated their respective ponies to new lands to escape the eternal blizzard. But the problems and tensions didn't end there; no, in just a few short years, Equestria faces race riots, mysterious assassinations, and the looming threat of a civil war. With no end in sight and the paradise he had worked so hard to attain splitting apart at the seams, Commander Hurricane desperately searches for some way to save it. What he found was nothing short of divine.

Officially part of "The Price of Loyalty" storyverse, in collaboration with LoyalLiar

Coverart provided by Ruirik
Editing provided by LoyalLiar, Ruirik, Solidfire, Pega-Ace, and Dusk Watch

Dubious
Cancelled
Adventure
Romance
Tragedy
Dark
Gore

251,245 words: Estimated 1 Day, 3 Hours to read: [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]

25 Chapters:

  1. Prologue: The Journal [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jan 12th, 2014
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  2. Chapter 1: Turmoil [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jan 12th, 2014
    11,022
  3. Chapter 2: Whispers [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jan 12th, 2014
    12,219
  4. Chapter 3: Red Knives [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jan 12th, 2014
    9,320
  5. Chapter 4: Sun and Stars [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jan 12th, 2014
    13,422
  6. Chapter 5: Sisters [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jan 12th, 2014
    15,587
  7. Chapter 6: Bring Them Home [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jan 12th, 2014
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  8. Chapter 7: The Knife that Cuts Deepest [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jan 12th, 2014
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  9. Chapter 8: Turn Not Thy Face from Me [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jan 12th, 2014
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  10. Chapter 9: The Rising Sun [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jan 12th, 2014
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  11. Chapter 10: Mortality [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jan 12th, 2014
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  12. Chapter 11: Ponies of Glass [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jan 12th, 2014
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  13. Chapter 12: A Feast for Ponies [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jan 12th, 2014
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  14. Chapter 13: The Brink [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jan 12th, 2014
    11,504
  15. Chapter 14: The Breaking of the Storm [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jan 12th, 2014
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  16. Chapter 15: Ice Cage [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jan 12th, 2014
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  17. Chapter 16: Si Vis Pacem... [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jan 12th, 2014
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  18. Chapter 17: ...Para Bellum [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jan 12th, 2014
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  19. Interlude I [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jan 12th, 2014
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  20. Interlude II [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jan 12th, 2014
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  21. Interlude III [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jan 12th, 2014
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  22. Interlude IV [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jan 12th, 2014
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  23. Chapter 18: Crimson Fangs [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jan 12th, 2014
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  24. Chapter 19: Fear and Loathing in Everfree [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jan 12th, 2014
    5,161
  25. Chapter 20: Cherish the Thought [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jan 12th, 2014
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Published Jan 12th, 2014
Last Update Apr 15th, 2016

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