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The Coltalition

by thecoltalition

Chapter 1: Part One

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Part One


Introduction

The once bright white lime stone that covered the walls of Canterlot, now loom with grey and a touch of red. Our story begins with our mare with no name. A mare with no name and no real home. A mare with no name, no real home, and no real friends. The world of Equestria will rely on the actions of this pony. It is she that brings the last horizon of peace. And maybe the avoidance of a cataclysmic event the eyes of ponies will melt if seen. It is she that we follow and understand the story of this mare and others.

Chapter One

"I've noticed a lot over the time here, just a trot away from the no trot zone of the palace. There has been some activity in the square I presume. A lot of light and sound. But a wingless colt as my self can't see past those walls. Im kind of glad I can't fly because of the royal guards have the right to torture, kill, or imprison anyone who comes near the capital. If I could only see what has changed from the last known layout of the city."

The capital city of Equestria, Canterlot, has been on lock down for years now. The threat of a revolution is quite a fact in the cities below the crowns fortress. The princess may be immortal, but the pony-folk will make her wish she could die. For decades, the extreme use of magic and it's studies have been made known to all. A unique pony made a book that she herself wish she had been able to read as a filly.  She studied magic and made a book about the study of magic. She also made plenty of bits selling books, quick magic tip magazines, and how-to seminars.

"I pledge from this day forward I will enter those walls and make my self known."

Our mare then returns to a den outside Ponyville remaining vigilant on the city of any movement. He is always in fear of being caught. Due to his mysterious ways. He does not come out until night. The ponyfolk never see him at the COLTALITION meetings in the water hole. And the guards often see him around staring at the monolithic grey walls. Being between to factions is never a safe place to be. He has shown no alliance so he is an enemy. To all.

"I swear there has to be a way in side. There must be a way to get to her."

Years before the conflict the young pony magician by the name of Twinight or Trixter or something like that came to this very town doing magic for the pony-folk. She enterprised on her knowledge of magic and made billions of bits to all to her books. Of course, the princess didn't like the "giveaways" of something that must be learned at the academy. The princess warned the pony to stop enterprising her books immediately, but the pony felt that she had the right as a free pony to sell them just like apples. The princess saw that she refused and sent an elite group of guards to stop her. But a summit of sheer magic of elements stop them before a battle could start. Once the word got out of the attack, the local ponies though badly of the princess of censoring the pony to do the right to do as she pleases. Of course this is good gossip for those to talk about a on long train rides to ye olde Appleloosa. Then flights to Fillydelphia and Manehattan. Eventually to Coltafornia.

"My night will come and the day is here, so I must hide for THEY draw near."

The Royal Border Defense (RBD) monitors all of the land. Looking for those who plot against the highness. They dress in some high-tech armor that has some unknown equipment strap to them. Their uniform is quite out of the this world. Flying units that have no wings. Magical units with no horns. In short, it intimidates all who look at them. The COLTALITION has been making some strides with technology but nothing as close to this. The Great and All Powerful pony of the revolution can only buys so much outside the borders of Equestria. Special Op trained Equestrians have been dispersed throughout the land by order of the leader of the COLTALITION. They must live among the normal ponies of Ponyville. They also must live among the RBD. It's especially difficult for these ponies to be this close to the capital city. Though, the closer you are to your enemy, the safer you are.  You can imagine the tension and horror that could strike the streets of Ponyville if just one rebel or Specop pony were found. The RBD is just the normal military. The true horror of the princess is the PP. They would burn homes, kill ponies and interrogate for information. The silent death squads of the night capture all those who rebel. This is why our mare hides.

"Log entry 31:

      As I lay awake here I can sense of danger lurking above my head. My den can't hide me for long and many would want me for themselves. I mean who wouldn't. I'm that irresistible. Besides that I'm quite the leverage piece for the future of what will be Equestria. I can save a reputation or kill others. My power just hasn't been fully come to grasp."

Our story continues through the slumber of our mare...


Chapter Two

The Pegasus Ponies are quite in control in the sky of what happens. Well that was before the RBD showed up. They had control over light, water, and life. Now that power is in control of a pony that did this for a living. She has control over the world. No light, no food. No water, no hydration. That all equals death. But the RBD have never been a threat until recently when they stop guarding the borders of Equestria. They now occupy peace-loving communities. They are just there for the ponyfolk protection. Well that was what we were all told.

"A fake attack on the train hub in Omareo was a plot by the princess to give reason to occupy towns and keep watch over the ponies."

"And how could we forget how the RBDs actually carry weapons that were never issued by the general United Pony Senate."

This is the normal speech in the watering hole. Trying to rally those to help the COLTALITION. The speaker known only by Diamonds, was a great companion of the powerful COLTALITION leader.

"Diamonds, how can you expect to get us ready for what is to come. We only talk and never do anything to stop anyone." exclaimed a random pony in the back of the room.

"We simply cannot get our selves dirty my...... Mmm..... Could it be." Diamonds stuttered in disbelief.

"As I recall you like getting a little messy." replied the pony in the back

"Well, if you hadn't pushed me I wouldn't have to be cautious around cake anymore."

There was an awkward pause in the room. Nopony knew what they were talking about. Three RBD soilders trotted by the window of the watering hole.

"Well, Arent you going to introduce me to your followers... Diamonds.... I presume your name was...."


Chapter Three

"Well all of you do not seem to know my name, that's good because it will keep me safe. But if you payed attention to the night, you may recognize my astonishing mane." said our mare.

The crowd stood there with simply dumbstruck faces for they do not know this mare. But one pony in the room knows more than anyone else than the pony named Diamonds, for they had an encounter that will be relevant throughout this test of will and trust in this chapter.

"Why are you here Bl uh.. White coward." said Diamonds

"For the same reason you are, we all want the devil out of the throne." said our mare.

"Please I'd rather have HER in the throne than you, faker."

Of course oblivious to the fact they carried out there conversation in from of the whole crowd, the ponies and listen to what they had to say.

"Diamonds, I plead with you we all are here for the good of Equestria. I am only looking for an alliance with you."

"You really did hurt me that night, and what is stopping you from....."

"AHHH! I'M ON FIRE, PLEASE!!" said a pony, then suddenly,  BANG!

The room went dark and silent. Shadowy figures are outlined over what appears to be a Bon fire. But who in the right mind would light this one this late. Then the figures left and the scouting ponies left the watering hole in search of this mysterious event. Not a sound was made. It was so silent that it was like being in the blackness of space. A what seemed to be days, only a few minutes went by before the scouting ponies returned.

"My goodness, there's no word to explain the horrors of what's out there." the scouting pony said.

The crowd left the watering hole and went to the site. Burnt down Sugarcube Corner. Melted sugar glued itself to the structure to what was a beloved store. A chard remnants of an apron was eerily placed in the middle of the kitchen.  Then a few trots to the west will reveal a body, still smoldering. The putred smell of burnt fur could be smelled. A pony's corpse lays lifeless with it's eyeballs plucked out it's socket. And the brain matter melting out of the skull. But the burns weren't enough to cause death. Further inspection showed a hole the size a hoofball has been penetrated the skull and left an exit wound. The gruesome brutality of the pony made many ponies vomit, adding to the odor of the area. Few of the scouting ponies flipped the body to find a cutiemark resembling diamonds.

"So, have we come to an agreement?" said our mare.

"....." said Diamonds

Chapter Four

A report was under way by head detective of The Barn Yard. It seemed to him that the kitchen caught fire while one of the cakes were being cooked and it was a typical house fire.

'Well that can't explain the pony's death.' Everypony thought to themselves

Naturally no one dares question the head detective of The Barn Yard. Especially when nine RBDs around the detective. Well, no pony could explain it for themselves because they weren't there so they couldn't say anything that wasn't pure speculation.

'There must be some form of coverup' our mare thought to herself

"Hey Diamond you wannaaaaaaa....... Where did she go?"

"ATTENTION ALL CIVILIANS, PLEASE LEAVE THE CRIME SCENE! THIS IS NOT A SHOW, PONIES MOVE ALONG!"

The loud speakers of town hall and a few select buildings echoed through out Ponyville. Then a pony came up to our colt

"I have info on that night, partner."

"WAIT, who are you?"

"A monster." replied the pony

Our mare follows her to a factory looking prison that had the name A.P.P.L.E A.C.R.E.S

A

PROTECTIVE

PLACEMENT

LABORATORY

ENCAMPMENT

AND

CORRECTIONAL

REBEL

EDUCATION

STATION

"What's this place?" said our mare.

"It's where you and Diamond will end up, You see, I'm an officer here and it ain't purdy. This is just one of many camps in Equestria and this is why you need to stop IT before it stops YOU."

A crackle over the intercom 'Captain App*static*ck, please report to chambers'.

"So what's your name?"

"Call me Apple Buck"

So that earth pony walked in to a cloud of smog and disappeared. It gave our mare a creep up of her mane. She wanted to follow Apple buck through the smog, but she knew what will happen if she did. So on her way back to the village of ponies,she saw a color streak across the sky. Quite remarkable on how the colors refracted in something so lovely.

"Oh my.... that is just charming!"

Chapter Five

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