The Dragons of Metal, Sun, and Thunder
Chapter 24: The Goddess of Chaos Returns Part Two
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"Okay Gilda your almost there." Justice said as Gilda started to concentrate magic on a small boulder.
As Gilda was about to grab a water bottle. A flash of light appeared and bottle gained sentience along with legs and arms. It scattered about before flipping us off.
"Well that happened." Keshaun said dumbfounded.
Justice, Caleb and Keshaun used Gaster's monster magic to summon 7 bony hands.
"Princesses, we came as fast as we could!" Twilight said as we run in the throne room to see all of the princesses
"Thank you all for coming as fast you could." Celestia said.
"Any idea on what's going on?" Justice asked.
"Follow me. I've called you here for a matter of great importance. It seems an old foe of mine, someone I thought I had defeated long ago has returned. Her name.... is Eris." Celestia said as Fluttershy shrieked in fear from looking at the stained glass picture.
"Eris is the mischievous spirit of disharmony. Before my sisters and I stood up to her, she ruled Equestria in an eternal state of unrest and unhappiness. Luna, Nightmare Moon, Daybreak, and I saw how miserable life was for Earth ponies, Pegasi, and unicorns alike, so after discovering the Elements of Harmony, we combined our powers and rose up against her, turning her to stone." Celestia said as we saw the story of it through the stained glass.
"But from what is happening. It seems like it went up in flames." Keith said
"Dad." Justice said mad about his behavior.
"No Justice. He has a point. Since Luna, Daybreak, Nightmare Moon, and I are no longer connected to the Elements, the spell has been broken." Celestia said as Keshaun was looking at a stained glass picture of the four sisters defeating Eris but he saw what looked like tears in all of their eyes.
"Wait what do you mean you're not connected?" Alice asked.
"Twilight, Pinkie, Fluttershy, Rainbow, Rarity, and Applejack are the new holders of the elements." Caleb said still walking
"Be careful everyone. Eris is an expert manipulator. Don't trust her illusions." Celestia said as Keshaun, Caleb, Justice, Spike, and the mane six started to head to the labyrinth.
"Give us our horns, wings, and the elements." Twilight said.
"You'll get them back in good time. I simply took them to ensure there's no cheating. You see, this is the first rule of our game: no flying, no magic, and no weapons. That also includes these little trinkets." Eris said holding the D-GEARS.
"The second rule is everyone has to play or the game is over, and I win. Good luck, everyone! [laughing]" Eris added before teleporting again.
"Applejack! Thank goodness! I thought I heard voices over here. Who were you talking to?" Twilight said as she got closer
Spike, Justice, Caleb and Keshaun saw that Applejack's fur color became an ash grey.
"I was talking to... uh... nopony! Nopony whatsoever!" Applejack said lying.
"Oh you are, huh? Why? Need a good laugh?" Pinkie said sounding mad.
"What do you mean, "boulder"? This big beautiful bedazzling rock is a diamond! And it's all mine. Keep your envious little eyes off it! I found it and it's mine fair and square!" Rarity said pushing a 'diamond'.
"Aw, boo-hoo-hoo! Why don't you wave your magic little horn and make everything all right? Oh, that's right, you can't. You don't have one." Fluttershy said flicking her tail as the tip slapped Twilight and Keshaun had a extensional crisis.
Everyone looked to see a cyan blur fly through the sky.
"Aw the Fuck, Shit, God-damned, Son of a Shitweasel on a Fucking waterboard! Are you actually fucking kidding me right now with this shit!?" Keshaun said as his rage exploded.
"Well, well, well. Somepony broke the "no wings; no magic" rule. Game's over, my little ponies. You didn't find your precious elements. Looks like we might be due for a big old storm of chaos. [laughter]" Eris said laughing as lighting crashed through the sky also giving us our items.

(Intro sequence)
Pov: Justice
Eris continued to laugh at the fact we lost.
"And what are you laughing at!?" Pinkie asked getting in Eris' face.
"Oh, you all are just the most fun I've had in eons." Eris said wiping a tear from her eye.
"Well, quit it! You'd better think before you laugh at the Pink...ie Pie!" Pinkie said threateningly.
"Oh really? Well ha, ha." Fluttershy said sarcastically.
"Quit it!" Pinkie said menacingly.
"No. Ha, ha." Fluttershy said continuing her fake laughter.
"Quit it!" Pinkie said getting in Fluttershy's face.
"No. Ha ha-ha ha ha." Fluttershy said pusher her.
Then I saw Rarity kick Applejack in the gut.
"HI-YAH! Try it, punk. He's mine. All mine! Ya! Ya! Ya!" Rarity said with a crazed look in her eyes.
"You bitch! I'm making sure you're going to hell!" I said rushing at her.
"Justice don't!" Keshaun yelled warning me but I didn't listen. I leaped into the air and pulled back for a punch.
All of a sudden Eris snapped her fingers then a flash of light blinded me. As soon as my vision came back I was over a few hundred feet in the air. I fell down to the ground at a very fast speed.
"Should've seen that coming. Oh wait you're the one who doesn't think." Fluttershy said.
As soon as I got up Eris teleported away. Meanwhile the girls were being assholes. I saw that Keshaun was getting more and more angrier.
"Everyone shut the fuck up or I'm going to slap someone so hard they end up on the other side of Terra!" Keshaun yelled in fury.
Everyone then got in line mainly in fear.
"How about we go home?" Caleb asked giving Twilight the hint she needed.
"The Elements must be in Ponyville! Come on, everyone. I'm certain this is what Eris' riddle really meant. If we get back to the library, I have a book that I just know can give us a clue. Ah!" Twilight said before being trampled.
"Good boy, Angel. Mama's so proud." Fluttershy said.
After heading back to the castle and getting everyone. We made another mad dash to Ragnarok. Only to see the airship fly off like it was in autopilot.
"Data what happened?" Keshaun asked communicating with the A.I by the D-GEAR.
"I'm sorry Keshaun. The magic is messing with the controls. Good news though. Ragnarok is heading to the launch gate." Data said.
"Well at least something good is coming from the magic." Michael said trying to be positive.
"I guess so." Gilda said shrugging.
"Well let's get to walking. I don't trust chaos magic enough to make a gate." Keshaun said as we started to walk.
All of a sudden it became night.
"Wow, I can see so much better now. Whoa! I meant to do that." Applejack said as the ground became soap and slipped.
"What the, soap?" Gilda said slipping a little.
I saw Eris sliding on soapy ground like she was ice-skating.
"Beautiful, isn't it? This is the new and improved Ponyville, and these are only my first of changes." Eris said as she teleported us to Ponyvile and we saw that the ground in the town was like a chest board only with blue and pink, multiple buildings are floating.
"Well at least we're home." Keshaun said as we started to ice-skate or soap-skate.
We made it to the library in a few minutes. Mostly trying to deal with the reversed girls.
"[sigh] Okay, we're here. Everyone please, please, please just go inside, please?" Twilight asked getting angry.
"I absolutely refuse." Applejack said lying.
"With pleasure." Fluttershy said stomping on the flowers in front of the library.
"I hate libraries!" Pinkie said walking in.
"Are you coming in or what?" Caleb asked Rarity.
"Forget it, Caleb. I know what you're up to. The second I go in, you'll have your minions Justice, Spike, and Keshaun to come and take Tom!" Rarity said.
"The diamond." Keshaun said answering Twilight's question before she asked it.
"You won't go in unless he comes too?" Caleb asked as Rarity nodded.
I picked up the boulder and brought it inside.
"Watch it you barbarian. You'll ruin his beautiful finish." Rarity said rubbing the boulder.
"Oh for the love of Christ." Keshaun said pinching the bridge of his nose.
"Let's just get this book." Twilight said as we started looking for it.
"Got it." Spike said as Fluttershy took it.
"Fluttershy give me that book!" Twilight and Keshaun yelled trying to grab it.
"Keep away!" Fluttershy said in a sing-song way throwing the book.
Applejack catched it then threw it as Keshaun tried to get it.
Pinkie got it as Michael tried to get a hold of the book then threw it back to Fluttershy.
Only for Rarity to tackle Fluttershy and taking the book.
"Give the freaking book Rarity!" Keshaun not wanting to swear in front of Ash, Flare, and Tora.
"No, but if you want it, I want it!" Rarity said leaping in the air as Keshaun crashed into Tom.
"Mom, Dad, Gilda cover the kids ears." Keshaun said with killing intent.
They did that exact thing as Keshaun took a deep breath and the rage of a thousand sun's was smoldered by Keshaun's.
"YOU SONS OF BITCHES BETTER GIVE ME THE FUCKING BOOK OR I'M GONNA MAKE SURE TO KILL YOU SLOWLY, BRING YOU BACK TO LIFE, AND DO IT AGAIN FOR ETERNITY WITH A DIFFERENT ONE EACH TIME!!!!" Keshaun yelled causing an earthquake.
Rarity gave him the book slightly pissing herself. Then the girls got in line.
"Good now put your element on and take care of Eris!" Keshaun yelled.
"But what about Rainbow?" Gilda asked as the element of loyalty was put on her neck.
"You're the new Rainbow Dash Gilda. Congratulations." Keshaun said done with today as we went outside.
Rarity still trying to push Tom out.
"This.....bitch's....EMPTY! YEET!" Keshaun said picking the boulder up and throwing it outside destroying a window in the process.
"Well, well, well, I see you've found the Elements of Harmony. How terrifying!" Eris said sarcastically.
"Caleb figured your lame riddle Eris. You're done now." Twilight said as the girls got in a line.
"I certainly am. You've clearly out-dueled me, and now it's time to meet my fate. I'm prepared to be defeated now, ladies. Fire when ready." Eris said sarcastically making a target on her torso.
The girls elements began to flash actually surprising Eris. Then when they were about to attack it stopped.
"What the?" Twilight asked.
"Mine's workin'. There must be somethin' wrong with yours." Applejack said pointing at Twilight.
"I HATE the Elements of Harmony!" Pinkie said.
"Garbage." Fluttershy said throwing her's away.
Rarity just grabbed them and scurried away.
"Bravo, ponies, bravo! [clapping, random noises] Harmony in Equestria is officially dead. Eris rules, Celestia drools. [laughter]" Eris said laughing in victory.
"I'm outta here!" Pinkie said head to sugarcube corner.
"I better go, too. I've got new better friends waiting for me at the farm." Applejack said heading to Sweet apple acres.
"Yeah! I'm sick of you losers." Fluttershy said flying away.
"Fine be that way! Who needs someone like you as girlfriend?" Keshaun said going inside and punching a wall turning grey.
"Yeah! See if I care! I don't need you guys either! With friends like you, who needs...enemies...?" Twilight said turning grey as well as a tear fell.
"Twilight. No." I said as tears fell. I collapsed on to the ground.
"I couldn't stop it from happening to her. DAMNIT!" I yelled slamming my fist on the ground in anger.
I got up and started to get everything that was mine in defeat.
"Are you three really going to give up?" Caleb asked as we stopped.
"I said are you three really gonna give up?" Caleb asked again.
"You can't just give up!" Ash, Flare and Tora yelled.
"Keshaun you made armor that would make a blacksmith's wet dream come true. You took on a bear made of stars the size of a mountain. And Justice you took on multiple dragons and Minotaurs. And the three of us took on a literal goddess before. So we can do it again. Now stop acting depressed and we can do this." Caleb said giving a great speech meanwhile Spike was barfing up scrolls that Twilight made in the past.
"Let's get the real mane six back. Oh right." Keshaun said giving Spike some stomach medicine.
"Celestia really needs a better way to send these." I said.
At Sweet apple acres.
"Applejack, I'm here to fight for our friendship." Twilight said dramatically before being licked by Big Mac acting like a dog.
"Oh, now you want to fight. Where you went when I was battlin' Eris?" Applejack asked as Keshaun, and I tackled her.
"You're not a liar AJ. Snap out of it. You have to remember." Twilight said using a memory spell.
"Wh-what happened? Twilight! Guys! [sigh] I saw a vision of us feudin' and fightin'. I couldn't face the truth, so I started tellin' lies. Can you ever forgive me?" Applejack asked as Caleb just kissed her on the lips.
"Damn. About time." I said as Keshaun punched me in the stomach.
"Let's get the others." Keshaun said as Twilight helped me up.
At Fluttershy's cottage.
Twilight used the memory spell after Keshaun pinned her to a wall.
"Oh no! Twilight, Applejack, I just had the worst dream!" Fluttershy said as Keshaun hugged her.
"Don't worry about it. It's over." Keshaun said crying a little.
At sugarcube corner.
After a small chase scene I got Pinkie and Twilight used the spell.
"[laughter] And I-I turned gray! [giggle] Can you believe it?!" Pinkie laughing a storm.
"It good to have you back." Keshaun said holding her.
"Now where's Rainbow?" Caleb asked as we all looked around.
"I don't see her." Spike said. He joined up with us when we got Rarity.
"Without Rainbow. We can't use the elements." Twilight said.
"She could be anywhere by now!" Applejack said looking around.
"Found her!" Keshaun and I said pointing at a small cloud.
"Rainbow we need your help to stop Eris." Twilight said as Rainbow didn't listen.
Rainbow just said "That's nice."
"Come on Rainbow. We need what you represent. Loyalty!" Keshaun said.
"Pfft. Loyalty, schmoyalty! Have you guys seen Ponyville? It's a disaster! I'm staying here in Cloudsdale where everything's awesome." Rainbow said.
"How in Equestria can she think that tiny patch of clouds is Cloudsdale?" Rarity said.
"Didn't you think a boulder was a diamond?" I asked.
"I thought we agreed never to speak of that again." Rarity said glaring at me.
"Anyway I got a plan. Fluttershy, you and Keshaun fly and hold her down. Applejack will lower me down from her rope so I can cast the memory spell on her." Twilight said.
Switch of Pov: Keshaun
"You can count on us." I said saluting.

After an hour or so Rainbow finally fell asleep. So we started the plan. I grew out my wings and flew about Rainbow as Fluttershy and I were about to grab her.
"Um...I'm just wondering if it's okay if I hold you down against your will for a little bit?" Fluttershy asked waking Rainbow up.
(This is what I said in my head⬇️)

"Nice try! Ponyville's your problem, not mine." Rainbow said before flying off.
"Oh I don't think so!" I said chasing after her while the girls followed in Twilight's hot air balloon pulled by Fluttershy.
I was getting closer and closer to her but every time she also got away at the last second.
"I can't get closer to her. Fluttershy you have to get closer." I said flying to the girls.
"[whimpering] I can't! I can't do it!" Fluttershy said crying a little.
"Fluttershy you can do this. I know you can. You stopped a cockatrice and a dragon. You can do this." I said encouraging her.
"You're right. I did that. So I can help my friends. And now is the very Same!" Fluttershy yelled as she gained a boost of speed.
The girls got closer and closer to Rainbow as Applejack used a rope and caught her.
After that we all landed to do the spell. Everyone was holding her down as Twilight preformed it.
"[Gasp]How's Ponyville? Where are the Elements?! Did we stop Eris?!" Rainbow asked as the girls gave her a group hug.
I fake coughed to remind them that the job wasn't finished.
"[laughter] Chaos is a wonderful, wonderful thing." Eris said in the middle of Ponyvile drinking a glass of chocolate milk.
"Not as much as the bonds between friends." I said heroically.
"Really?" Eris asked throwing the milk as it caused an explosion.
"You can't break us apart Eris. We're here to stop the chaos." Justice said.
"Ugh, gag. Fine, go ahead. Try and use your little Elements or other things. Friend me. Just make it quick. I'm missing some excellent chaos here. And if it doesn't work red boy is my boyfriend." Eris said.
"Fine then. Let's show her the power of bonds!" I said charging magic.

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The girls began to use the power of the Elements of Harmony. As each one began to float in the air their eyes became a blinding white. While that was happening the guys were charging our own version of the attack.
"Ready?!" I asked the everyone as they nodded.
"Okay! Time to end this chaotic day! CHAOS BUSTER QUARTET FIRE!!!!" I yelled as four beams from the guys and the beam from the girls combined in to one.
"Wait what's this? No. No! NO!!!" Eris screamed as the combined beam turned her to stone.
As soon as it did Eris' magic stopped and the world returned to normal.
"Phew. I need a nap after today." I said collapsing on the ground as everyone laughed.

(Outro sequence)
(Post credit scene:
Inside Eris' mind after the attack.
"Well time to wait until the author makes my redemption chapter." Eris said playing a game of chest with a male version of herself.)