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The Dragons of Metal, Sun, and Thunder

by Keshaunthesilverwolf

Chapter 23: The Goddess of Chaos Returns Part One

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The Goddess of Chaos Returns Part One

A few months have passed since the Grand Galloping Gala, Blueblood being a commoner, and the meeting against the monster attacks.

It is the beginning of a beautiful spring morning in Equestria and our heroes are relaxing or doing some light training.

Let's see what's going on shall we.

Pov: Justice
Time:March 17, 12:36 pm
Inside the HTC

"Okay Gilda your almost there." I said as Gilda started to concentrate on a small boulder.

As the Gilda's magic covered the boulder. It started to lift off the ground very slowly. Then it began to just drop on the ground.

Gilda panting said "Sorry about that. It just started to get heavier."

"Don't worry about it babe. The fact your lifting a small boulder inside the Hyperbolic Time Chamber means your magic is getting better." Keshaun said handing her a water bottle.

As Gilda was about to grab it a flash of light appeared and bottle gained sentience along with legs and arms. It scattered about before flipping us off.

"Well that happened." Keshaun said dumbfounded.

"That is not normal." Gilda said as Keshaun and I nodded.

"Hey guys you might want to come over here." Caleb said as we walked over to him.

"What's up?" I asked.

"Something is going on in Equestria and it's something not normal. It's small but if it can effect things in here." Caleb said.

"That sounds like a problem." Keshaun commented.

"It is a problem. Let's try to see if we can stop it." Caleb said opening a gate to the library.

(intro sequence but at the end a silhouette joined the group photo along with Rutherford, Ember, Zecora, Wukong, Iron Hoof, and the other kings.)

Switch of Pov:Keshaun

After exiting the portal. I saw that everyone was about to head somewhere.

"Hey Twilight. Where are we going?" I asked.

"We're heading to Sweet apple acres to try and stop the weird magic attacks." Twilight said grabbing a spell book.

After a bit of walking we made it to the acres and saw something very off. The apples in trees grow to the size of a large boulder. 7000 pink clouds pouring chocolate milk rain. Unshucked corn popping out like a machine gun. Woodland animals legs growing to length of a giraffe and disobeying Fluttershy.

"Don't worry. Twilight has a plan to stop this." Justice said.

Then Twilight began to charge magic from the spell book. Then a bright blinding light flashed as the things reversed. Except they didn't.

"Aw shit." Keith said.

"Got any other plans Twilight?" Marcus asked.

"Hmm, time for plan B. Rainbow, can you corral all those clouds in one corner of the sky?" Twilight asked as Rainbow began to catch as many clouds as she could.

"Ash, Tora. Try to help as well." I said as the two winged wyverns flew up and help.

"Applejack, Keshaun, Justice, Caleb, and Spike. I need you five to bring those high-strung storm clouds down to Earth." Twilight said as Applejack grabbed her lasso.

Justice, Caleb and I used Gaster's monster magic to summon 7 bony hands.

Then the hands flashed purple as purple tendrils appeared from the fingertips. Different tendrils caught the clouds as they were being corralled.

"Okay we got them. What next?" I asked trying keep the clouds still.

"Oh dear. I hope none of the animals see these delicious chocolate-filled cotton candy clouds. I'd hate to have to share them." Fluttershy said tricking the animals by using reverse psychology.

After the animals finished the giant chocolate milk pouring cloud. They began to eat the popcorn. Meanwhile Spike burped up a scroll from Celestia. Telling us to head to Canterlot.

"We'll take Ragnarok. It'll take us there in no time." I said as we all head to the library basement.

Intermission brought by chibi Keshaun driving a chibi Ragnarok to Canterlot.

After an hour of flying we made it to Canterlot as Ragnarok's controls we're inverted. I landed Ragnarok on a grassy area. Then we all made a mad dash to the castle.

"Princesses, we came as fast as we could!" Twilight said as we run in the throne room to see all of the princesses

"Thank you all for coming as fast you could." Celestia said.

"Any idea on what's going on?" Justice asked.

"Follow me. I've called you here for a matter of great importance. It seems an old foe of mine, someone I thought I had defeated long ago has returned. Her name.... is Eris." Celestia said as Fluttershy shrieked in fear from looking at the stained glass picture.

"Eris is the mischievous spirit of disharmony. Before my sisters and I stood up to her, she ruled Equestria in an eternal state of unrest and unhappiness. Luna, Nightmare Moon, Daybreak, and I saw how miserable life was for Earth ponies, Pegasi, and unicorns alike, so after discovering the Elements of Harmony, we combined our powers and rose up against her, turning her to stone." Celestia said as we saw the story of it through the stained glass.

"But from what is happening. It seems like it went up in flames." Keith said

"Dad." Justice said mad about his behavior.

"No Justice. He has a point. Since Luna, Daybreak, Nightmare Moon, and I are no longer connected to the Elements, the spell has been broken." Celestia said as I looked at a stained glass picture of the four sisters defeating Eris but I saw what looked like tears in all of their eyes.

"Wait what do you mean you're not connected?" Alice asked.

"Twilight, Pinkie, Fluttershy, Rainbow, Rarity, and Applejack are the new holders of the elements." Caleb said still walking

"This is Canterlot Tower, where the Elements are kept inside since all of you recovered them. We need you to wield the Elements of Harmony once again and stop Eris before she thrusts all of Equestria into eternal chaos." Nightmare said.

"Are you sure? What if we fai-" Twilight said before being interrupted by Pinkie.

"Look we famous!" Pinkie said pointing at a stained glass picture of the mane six, Spike, Caleb, Justice and I saving Nightmare Moon and Luna with our attacks.

"You ten showed the full potential of the Elements by harnessing the magic of your friendship to beat a mighty foe. Although Luna, Nightmare, Daybreak, and I once wielded the Elements, it is you who now control their power, and it is you who must defeat Eris!" Celestia said opening the door.

When she did the room was empty. Everyone sans Spike, Caleb Justice, and I gasped in disbelief.

"That chamber is protected by a powerful spell that only I can break! This doesn't make sense!" Daybreak said in shock.

All of a sudden a giggle echoed though the halls. Everyone started looking for the direction of where it is. I saw that the stained glass picture of Eris was moving.

"Make sense? Oh, what fun is there in making sense?" A female voice said.

"Come out and release the elements!" I said pulling out Ebony and Ivory.

"So this is your new boyfriend Celestia. I'll say one thing he's a keeper!~" Eris said as I blushed up a storm.

"Aw, that's adorable. He's shy." Eris said giggling.

"Enough! What have you done with the Elements of Harmony?" Celestia said.

"I just borrowed them for a teensy little while." Eris said.

"You aren't getting away with this!" Luna said.

"And thought I hear that from Celestia not Luna." Eris said sarcastically.

"Don't you ever insult the princesses!" Rainbow yelled

"Wait Rainbow stop!" I said trying to stop her.

She didn't listen and kept rushing at the window Eris is on before crashing into it.

"You must be Rainbow Dash, famed for her loyalty, the Element of Harmony you represent." Eris said teleporting from the window Rainbow crashed into.

"That's right! I'll always be loyal to the Princesses!" Rainbow said puffing her chest out.

"Heh. We'll see about that." Eris said raising my red flags.

"I can't believe we're wasting our time talking to a tacky window." Rarity said rolling her eyes.

"The beautiful Rarity, representing the element of generosity, if I'm not mistaken?" Eris said acting dramatic.

"So you know who we are, big deal." Applejack said.

"Oh, I know much more than that, honest Applejack." Eris said teleporting to another stained glass window.

"You know allot about us from the sound of it." Twilight said.

"Yes, Twilight Sparkle, and yours is the most powerful and elusive element, magic. Fluttershy's is kindness and Pinkie Pie's is a personal favorite of mine: laughter. [laughter]" Eris said laughing before teleporting again.

"Stop stalling, Eris! What have you done with the Elements of Harmony?" Celestia said glaring at the windows.

"Oh, so boring, Celestia. Really? Fine, I'll tell you, but I'll only tell you my way. To retrieve your missing Elements, just make sense of this change of events. Twists and turns are my master plan. Then find the Elements back where you began.[laughing]" Eris said shifting through the windows and finally disappearing.

"Aw crap. I hate riddles." Justice said.

"What do you reckon she meant? Twists and turns and ending back where we started?" Applejack asked.

"I think I know the twists and turns part." I said pointing at the labyrinth.

"Okay we somewhat have a plan. Parents, Ash, Flare, Gilda, and Tora stay here in case Eris wants to do something to the princesses. The rest of us we'll take Eris." I said.

"Be careful everyone. Eris is an expert manipulator. Don't trust her illusions." Celestia said as we started to head to the labyrinth.

After running to the labyrinth thunder sounded through sky.

"Do w-we h-have to go in there?" Fluttershy asked hugging me for protection.

"Nope! Eris forgot about these babies! I'll just do a quick flyover and we'll have the Elements in no time." Rainbow said about to fly before a flash appeared before her wings disappeared.

"My wings!" Rainbow said as Fluttershy's disappeared as well.

"Your horn! My horn! Ahhh!" Rarity and Twilight said at the same time as their horns disappeared.

All of a sudden laughter echoed though the labyrinth as lighting crashed through the sky. Eris arrived from a ball of light. She stretched from the ball and began to laugh again.

"You should see the looks on your faces. Priceless!" Eris said still laughing like she heard a good joke.

"Give us our horns, wings, and the elements." Twilight said.

"You'll get them back in good time. I simply took them to ensure there's no cheating. You see, this is the first rule of our game: no flying, no magic, and no weapons. That also includes these little trinkets." Eris said holding the D-GEARS.

"The second rule is everyone has to play or the game is over, and I win. Good luck, everyone! [laughing]" Eris added before teleporting again.

"Well shit." Justice said slumping on to the ground.

"Come on guys. We can do this even without the D-GEAR. We took on Nightmare Moon, to an army of darkness, to three dangerous monsters, and to thousands of warriors. We can do this!" I said giving Justice and Caleb hope.

"You're right. Thanks for that man." Justice said getting up.

"No prob. Now let's take this labyrinth on." I said as we all head in the labyrinth. Then all of a sudden a bad feeling crawled on my back.

"Together!" The girls said as all of a sudden. Very tall bushes grew from the ground as they separated us.

"Everyone calm down. Just get to center as fast as you can and remember don't trust her illusions." I said as I started to run.

While I was running I ran into Spike.

"Keshaun. Thank Faust I found you first." Spike said hugging me.

"Don't worry. Anyway let's try to find the others." I said returning the hug, then letting go to start running again.

We stop in the middle of a crossroads.

"Any ideas?" Spike asked.

"I think I have one." I said digging through my pockets. I found a bit in it.

"Heads for left and tails for right." I said flipping the coin it landed on tails.

"Alright. Right it is." I said as we kept running.

After a bit we ran into Justice and Caleb.

"Hey! Guys!" I said waving at the two. They turned around and stopped.

"Hey nice to see you two. Haven't seen the girls yet. But I'm sure their okay. So let's keep going." Justice said as we started to run again.

We ran into Twilight who ran into Applejack.

"Applejack! Thank goodness! I thought I heard voices over here. Who were you talking to?" Twilight said as we got closer

Spike, Justice, Caleb and I saw that Applejack's fur color became an ash grey.

"I was talking to... uh... nopony! Nopony whatsoever!" Applejack said lying.

"Did hell just freeze over?" I asked knowing that Applejack never lies.

Caleb punched me in the gut before running again.

"I deserve that to be honest." I said in pain before getting up catching up with the others.

After a bit we found Pinkie who had the same fur color as Applejack.

"Pinkie. I'm glad we found you." I said running over to hug her.

"Oh you are, huh? Why? Need a good laugh?" Pinkie said sounding mad.

"Oh my God!" I said sounding like Joseph Joestar.

"Is something wrong with him?" Twilight asked.

"Pinkie usually wants a hug from Keshaun. So this kinda broke his soul a little." Justice said.

"Let's just try to find the others." Caleb said as we ran again.

After a bit of more running we ran into Rarity hugging a boulder.

"Rarity! Are we glad to see... Why are you carrying a humongous boulder?" Twilight asked as Rarity stopped.

"What do you mean, "boulder"? This big beautiful bedazzling rock is a diamond! And it's all mine. Keep your envious little eyes off it! I found it and it's mine fair and square!" Rarity said pushing the 'diamond'.

"Okay so Eris is reversing the elements." I mentally said as we started to walk again.

After a bit of walking we found a greyed out Fluttershy.

"Fluttershy! I'm so glad to see a friendly face. This awful labyrinth is getting to the girls." Twilight said as Pinkie blew a raspberry.

"Aw, boo-hoo-hoo! Why don't you wave your magic little horn and make everything all right? Oh, that's right, you can't. You don't have one." Fluttershy said flicking her tail as the tip slapped Twilight.

(This is my reaction to this⬇️)

Justice then slapped me out of my reality basically crumbling.

"Thanks I needed that." I said rubbing my cheeks.
After another round of running in this nightmare labyrinth. I saw a cyan blur fly through the sky.

"Aw the Fuck, Shit, God-damned, Son of a Shitweasel on a Fucking waterboard! Are you actually fucking kidding me right now with this shit!?" I said as my rage exploded.

"Well, well, well. Somepony broke the "no wings; no magic" rule. Game's over, my little ponies. You didn't find your precious elements. Looks like we might be due for a big old storm of chaos. [laughter]" Eris said laughing as lighting crashed through the sky also giving us our items.

Too be continued

(Outro sequence)

(Post credit scene
Everyone back at the castle saw what was happening in the labyrinth and seeing Keshaun lost his sanity.

"So anyone got a plan b?" Marcus asked.

"Scream in terror?" Yuki said.

Then everyone did just that.)


Author's Note

Hello everyone this is Keshaunthesilverwolf here with chapter 23. I don't really have a lot to say in this author's note. So I'm just keeping it short. From a howl at the Moon from the silver wolf see you all soon and have a great day or night.

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