Meet Star Bolt, a young pegasus who lost his memory after using an ability that was deemed legendary. As he grew up not only did he learn to control this ability, but it allowed him to join the Royal Guard and climb up the ranks to the position of Commander. However when war between the royal alicorn sisters casts Equestria into an eternal eclipse, he must take up his gift/curse and fight alongside his officers to not only defeat Princess Celestia in the name of the Nightmare Legion, but to find a way to bring back the Princess Luna that he knew, befriended and fell in love with. This story of love, regret, anger, war, and heartbreak is the path this Pegasus chose to travel, and even though it's viewed as a mistake by most, Commander Bolt will do whatever it takes and fight through any challeng to reach his goal, whatever it might be.
22 Chapters:
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Ch1 The Unknown Colt [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Apr 14th, 2020
2,487
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Ch2 The Exam [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Nov 2nd, 2012
3,523
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Ch3 Commander Bolt's Decision [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Feb 11th, 2020
3,442
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Ch4 The Friendly Foe and the Eclipsed Nightmare [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Apr 21st, 2016
4,697
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Ch5 Two Orphans, Celestia, and New Recruits [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Feb 1st, 2013
4,018
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Ch6 Celestia's Stand and Forgotten Foes [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Sep 24th, 2013
4,419
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Ch7 Peace in Death, Love in War, and Good in Evil [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Apr 19th, 2013
3,239
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Ch8 Confrontations between Nations [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Jul 7th, 2012
4,185
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Ch9 The Bolt That Cleared The Mist [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Sep 24th, 2013
4,598
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Ch10 The Fatal Funnel [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Jul 7th, 2012
4,664
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Ch11 Wounded Spiritually, Physically, Emotionally [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Jul 7th, 2012
4,911
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Ch12 A Murder in Cloudsdale's Shadow [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Jul 7th, 2012
4,711
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Ch13 Past Wounds in Present Skies [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Jul 7th, 2012
4,164
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Ch14 Who I Am [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Sep 24th, 2013
4,575
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Ch15 My Home Front [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Aug 16th, 2013
5,065
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Ch16 The Emotions of War [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Aug 13th, 2012
5,395
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Ch17 True Pain [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Aug 18th, 2012
6,369
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Ch18 Letter Fom a Mare in Love [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Sep 4th, 2012
5,291
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Ch19 The Meeting to End a War [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Sep 9th, 2012
6,065
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Ch20 By the Light of the Stars [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Sep 14th, 2012
4,089
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Ch21 The Fallen Star [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Sep 21st, 2012
3,988
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Ch22 A New Dawn [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Jan 28th, 2014
5,834
Other Titles in this Series:
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Commander Bolt must use his gift to lead Nightmare Moon's army to victory against Princess Celestia
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Commander Bolt, Commander of Nightmare Moon’s armies and once the most feared pony in Equestria, has returned but now he only wishes to live in peace as a lowly wonderer, hear his aftermath, from the ponies he meets in his travels.
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While Star Bolt tries to forget his life of sin. An ancient evil sits and waits for the day that its prison will weaken so it can break free and finish its goal that was started 2000 years ago. The extinction of the alicorn race.