There are three types of people in the world..Comrades who fight alongside you.
Non-Combatants who you avoid killing when possible.
And Hostiles who are to be dealt with using lethal force
-PFDR training manual, author CDR Twilight Sparkle
Two months ago Twilight Sparkle disappeared during a teleportation experiment. Everypony was beginning to lose hope of ever finding her. Then one day during a Bugbear attack in Ponyville Twilight resurfaces and single hoofed defeats the Bugbear with powerful weapons at her disposal.
Her friends are happy to see her but something is wrong. For one she says she's been gone for over six month and the fact her eyes are not natural and her legs are made of metal.
Gone is the peaceful librarian, she died months ago, in her place is Commander Twilight Sparkle, a mildly unstable, slightly sadistic, highly militaristic, highly intelligent, heavily armed, well trained, heavily augmented mare of war with a questionable sense of morality.
This is her story, how she went from a caring and slightly awkward mare, to a mare with no qualms about handing out death just as likely as she is to look at you.
Best to stay on her good side.
Note: These chapters are uploaded unedited and I will slowly do minor edits here and there and once the story is complete I will have major edits done. I am focusing more on writing the story so as not to lose my motivation to write.
Note2: This is an alternate earth that has some things similar to our own but over all is different so how people behave will be different then our world.
46 Chapters:
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Prologue: Return [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Oct 14th, 2017
5,086
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Chapter 1: Living Nightmare [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Oct 14th, 2017
7,426
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Chapter 2: More Monsters? [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Oct 14th, 2017
5,759
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Chapter 3: First Time [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Oct 14th, 2017
4,883
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Interlude: Dreams or Nightmares? [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Oct 14th, 2017
3,588
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Chapter 4: Decisions [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Oct 14th, 2017
4,533
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Chapter 5: Training [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Oct 14th, 2017
2,965
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Interlude: Homecoming [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Oct 14th, 2017
1,534
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Chapter 6: One of the Crew [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Oct 14th, 2017
3,622
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Chapter 7: The Field [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Oct 14th, 2017
6,868
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Interlude: Parties and Letters [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Oct 14th, 2017
1,556
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Chapter 8: Nightmare Squad [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Oct 14th, 2017
4,847
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Chapter 9: Anger and Hatred [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Oct 14th, 2017
3,992
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Interlude 4: The Princess [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Oct 14th, 2017
1,602
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Chapter 10: Heist [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Feb 11th, 2016
4,741
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Chapter 11: Train [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Feb 11th, 2016
3,992
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Interlude: Royal Guard vs Rebel Soldier [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Feb 12th, 2016
2,693
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Chapter 12: Friends Lost, Traitors Found [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Feb 13th, 2016
6,909
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Interlude: Parents [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Feb 14th, 2016
1,580
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Chapter 13: Regroup and Resupply [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Feb 15th, 2016
4,471
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Chapter 14: A New Mare [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Feb 17th, 2016
3,242
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Interlude: Family Dinner and Council Meetings [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Feb 17th, 2016
3,132
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Chapter 15: Officer on Deck [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Feb 19th, 2016
3,859
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Chapter 16: White Rabbit [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Feb 23rd, 2016
4,401
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Interlude: Lunch with Friends [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Feb 24th, 2016
3,361
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Chapter 17: Psychological Warfare [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Feb 29th, 2016
1,924
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Chapter 18: Vow [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Mar 2nd, 2016
3,089
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Interlude: Recruits [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Mar 2nd, 2016
4,255
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Chapter 19: Intelligence [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Mar 4th, 2016
4,482
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Chapter 20: Escalation [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Mar 5th, 2016
5,241
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Interlude: Breakfast with the Princess [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Mar 6th, 2016
2,260
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Chapter 21: iNSaNiTY [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Mar 17th, 2016
4,805
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Chapter 22: Psychopathy [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Mar 8th, 2016
7,505
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Interlude: The Hive [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Mar 8th, 2016
5,004
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Chapter 23: Civil War [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Mar 9th, 2016
3,437
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Chapter 24: A Simple Walk [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Mar 10th, 2016
2,574
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Interlude: Consequences [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Mar 10th, 2016
2,736
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Chapter 25: Two Fronts [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Mar 11th, 2016
2,842
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Chapter 26: Ponies Can Fly [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Mar 12th, 2016
4,403
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Interlude: Chaos and Cults [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Mar 13th, 2016
4,434
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Chapter 27: Orders are Orders [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Mar 13th, 2016
2,659
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Chapter 28: Preparations [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Mar 14th, 2016
2,705
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Interlude: To the Last [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Mar 14th, 2016
7,137
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Chapter 29: Homeward [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Mar 16th, 2016
5,172
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Epilogue: Memoirs [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Mar 17th, 2016
1,177
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Ascension [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Mar 17th, 2016
4,644