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What If...

by TheMajorTechie

Chapter 174: Terrible writing?

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Author's Notes:

Come at me, grammar nazis! :trollestia:

one beautiful day twilight and derpy Decided, that they shood twi to find something to do They went off to... the Castle of the two Sisters and found a large rabbit!

"What was that?" Twilight cried out a low grumble setting off Twinkie

i DNOT kno? drpy cri "What is it?"

Sdnly lrg bgbr came out of nowhere and shout "HI ALL AM BEAR."

Twilight leaned in close to Derpy, her cheeks growing red.

'kiss Me now!" Purple hoarse yell.

They kiss. The end.

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