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The Ultimate Surprise

by shadowshild612

Chapter 11: Dreams come true

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Dreams come true

I had just walked out onto the balcony everypony had audibly gasped some began to murmur, other looked pale, and the rest were just yelling hurtful things.  

“He can't be our new prince! He's hideous!” Somepony shouted.

“Why would you want him as a son!? He may look like us in form but we don't even know what he is!” Another yelled.

“Yeah! And why is Discord with you! Discord probably created that thing in order to take control again!” The third yelled. All of the one who were yelling were from the group that was insulting me, when we first arrived in canter lot.

I had my head down in sadness, but I could still see Luna, Celestia, and even cadence looking like they were about to rage shift. I looked back towards everyone, and to say the least I was scared shitless. Twilight was already rage shifted, Rainbow Dash was cracking her knuckles, Applejack looked ready to kill, Pinkies hair was straight and she had a knife, Rarity had fainted, spike had his fanges out ready to bite someone, the CMC and Nyx looked on the verge of tears, and Discord, and screwball had giant storm clouds of chaos above their heads as Fluttershy was trying to keep them calm.

“And look! Screwball is there two! She probably helped Discord create that thing, it obviously can't be natural!” The first pony said again. That was a big mistake that last statement caused all three of the princesses to rage shift making the crowd back up in fear.

“You inoculant worms! How dare you say such things about my new son!” Luna shouted louder than her canter lot voice.

“Indeed! whoever said insulting things to Dillan shall be punished!” Celestia shouted.

“And don't think you can ask me for help, no one insults my family!” Cadence said. The rest of my friends going out to the balcony and nodding in approval.

Everypony was so busy with what the crowd said that they didn't notice the crusaders crying. I saw what was going on and went over to see if they were alright.

“Hey girls… You ok?”  I asked them sitting down.

“No!” Nyx shouted loud enough to get the attention of  Everypony including the crowd who could see us through the balcony railings. “Why are they so mean to you!” Nyx continued to cry jumping into my arms along with the others.

“I don't know, but I don't care.” I said making them stop crying.

“H-how can you care?” Sweetie belle asked.

“Because, whether they like it or not I'm the newest prince in equestria.” I said smiling. “I care about all creatures, even if they don't like me.”  I said hugging them. “And I care about the well being of my new subjects, and I'm sure I'll mess some stuff up but no pony is perfect. Not even Lu… mom and aunt Celestia.”

The whole group outside gasped as Everyone I care about most watched especially screwball who was amazed with how I was handling the children.

“I'm sure they made mistakes when they were just starting out, and I'm positive they won't be the last.” I said wiping their tears away. “Here, You all like music right?” they all nodded their heads in agreement. “Then how about a song?”  Once again the crowd outside and my group of friends watched as I began singing along to the rhythm of a song that was playing on my phone.  

Where is the moment when we needed the most?

You kick up the leaves, and the magic is lost

They tell me your blue sky's faded to gray

They tell me your passion's gone away

And I don't need no carrying on

Stand in the line just to hit a new low

You're faking a smile with the coffee to go

You tell me your life's been way off line

You're falling to pieces every time

And I don't need no carrying on

'Cause you had a bad day

You're taking one down

You sing a sad song just to turn it around

You say you don't know

You tell me don't lie

You work at a smile, and you go for a ride

You had a bad day

The camera don't lie

You're coming back down, and you really don't mind

You had a bad day

You had a bad day

Well you need a blue sky holiday

The point is they laugh at what you say

And I don't need no carryin on

You had a bad day

You're taking one down

You sing a sad song just to turn it around

You say you don't know

You tell me don't lie

You work at a smile, and you go for a ride

You had a bad day

The camera don't lie

You're coming back down and you really don't mind

You had a bad day

Sometimes the system goes on the blink, and the whole thing it turns out

Wrong

You might not make it back and you know that you could be well, oh, that

Strong

And I'm not wrong

So where is the passion when you need it the most?

Oh, you and I

You kick up the leaves and the magic is lost

'Cause you had a bad day

You're taking one down

You sing a sad song just to turn it around

You say you don't know

You tell me don't lie

You work at a smile and you go for a ride

You had a bad day

You see what you like

And how does it feel one more time?

You had a bad day

You had a bad day (had a bad day, had a bad day, had a bad day)

Once I was finished singing I kissed each of the CMC`s foreheads. “Now listen, I'm glad that you're all worried about me, but you don't have to be I'm a grown man and I can take care of myself. I don't care what anypony thinks of me and You shouldn't either.  I know you're sad about them making fun of me, but I feel that this has something to do with Diamond tiara and silver spoon right?” I asked their expressions turning to surprise, except for Scootaloo who was looking away from everypony.

“Yes… but…” Applebloom started but looked towards Scootaloo who to my surprise had started crying again.

“It's not just... the…stuff… they...said” Scootaloo began in between sobs. “It's all of this for me… Diamond tiara and silver spoon love picking on me the most… because… because… i'm an orphan!” She cryd loudly while nuzzling into my chest for comfort.

There was a defining silence aside from Scootaloo's crying. It made sense to me now, she had always hung around with me this last few months because she and I could connect. We had both been orphans, and now I have a family. She must feel so alone. I thought as everything clicked into place. I watched the small orange filly crying in my arms. I felt so sorry for her… until.

“Hey.” I said softly getting he to look at me as I smiled down at her. “Is that what this is about?” I said wiping away her tears. “Well, seeing as you were the one who clung to me. literally. Since I got here you're stuck with me now.” I said with a grin as she looked at me in confusion. I Looked over to Luna, Celestia, and Cadence who all nodded in agreement to my idea which i'm sure they knew about. I nodded back and looked back to the small filly looking at me expectantly. I set her down and knelt down to her. I glanced to Nyx, Applebloom, and Sweetie belle. I looked towards Everypony especially Screwball  wondering how she would react.

“Scootaloo.” I said standing up and smiling. “As a prince of equestria, and as your friend, I have a question for you.” I said kneeling down again. “I have heard about your dilemma and would like to help.” I said smiling. “Scootaloo… How would you like it if… I adopted you?” I asked her my smile growing.

Scootaloo's eyes were wide dinner plates after I asked her the question. She and I looked towards Everypony. Rarity had tears in her eyes, Twilight`s mouth was agape, Discord, Fluttershy, and Screwball all gave a thumbs up, Spike was smiling, Applejack just tipped her hat and smiled, my new family all had huge grins, and rainbow gave me a look that said ‘if you're joking I'll kill you'. She looked to the CMC who were all nodding their heads extremely fast. Scootaloo looked back to me with tears in her eyes.

“Yes!!!” she yelled jumping into my arms. “I have a Daddy!!!” She kept on screaming into my shirt as I smirked.

“And I know have a wonderful daughter.” I said hugging her as every pony, including the crowd congratulated us. I guess they heard everything. I thought smiling as I walked out onto the balcony again this time with Scootaloo. “Mares, and Gentlecolts!” I shouted. “I am your new prince, my name is Dillan, and this is my new daughter and your newest princess Scootaloo!” I screamed holding her up lion king style getting an applause.

“You know what this calls for?...” Pinkie started. “A congratulations party!”

We all shared a laugh, but I remembered something important. "Hey everypony. I have a surprise!" I shouted.

Everypony in the room looked towards me. "A gift that only one of my alien forms can create." I said smiling. "Ultimatrix Cordio!" I yelled shifting into a namekian. "Now I need seven stones."

"I have seven gems." Spike said

"Ok that works." I said as I raised my hands into the sky and focused my magic, clouds formed circling above me and lightning struck my hands before blasting the gems making them transform into orbs. They were not the usual orange color but these were green with blue stares in the center. "There we go." I said turning back.

"Um... what are they?" Screwball asked.

"These are called the dragon balls." I said with a smile as spike slowly covered his crotch.  This didn't go unnoticed by me or any one as they all paled. "Not those kind. These are similar to the elements of harmony, gather all seven of them and you can summon the eternal dragon to grant you a number of wishes." I explained.

"Interesting... how many wishes do these ones grant?" Twilight asked skeptically.

"Five." I said smirking as I picked up the dragon balls and headed for the balcony.  I set the dragon balls down and said the magic words. "I summon you shenlock!"  after I said it they started to glow and a bright flash a giant dragon with demon wings appears.

Yee who have disturbed my slumber speak your wishes so that I may return to my slumber Shenlock said irritated.

"I wish I had every single legendary Pokémon scan and a scan of every Pokémon that can mega evolve!"  I shouted.

Your wish is granted!   Shenlock said his eyes glowing as my Ultimatrix glowed and went through each scan I just said.

"See? any one else got a wish." I asked looking back I saw apple bloom with a sad face. "What's wrong Applebloom? If you have a wish just ask shenlock."

"I...I just wish mah parents were alive is all." She said tears in her eyes.

"Applebloom." Applejack said as everyone except me looked sad.

"Ok then!" I said making every one look at me in confusion. "Ask shenlock to bring them back."  I said.

"Dillan my son i'm sorry to say this but that is impossible." Luna said.

"Oh really~?" I said in a sing song voice. "Shenlock! you heard this girls wish correct?" I yelled to him.

Indeed I have and I shall grant it! Shenlock said as his eyes glowed making two pony's appear in front of us one was a stallion, and one was a mare, the stallion had the same build as Big Macintosh, had Aj’s color coat, and had an apple tree for a cutie mark. The mare had bright red hair, light orange coat, and an apple fritter for her cutie mark.

"What?" They said in unison.

"It cant be... Mah... Pah!" Applebloom said hugging them.

"How?" Celestia breathed.

"I`ll  explain latter, shenlock we will save the rest of the wishes." I said

very well until next time. shenlock said before disappearing in a flash of light as the dragon balls fell to the ground.

"You have no idea how hard it was to make them this way, I need a break." I said sitting down as I watched the reunion of the family.

"Party time!" Pinkie yelled as the room was filled with confetti, balloons, and a banister that said, 'Welcome back to life Mr. and Mrs. apple, and congratulations to Dillan, and Scootaloo for getting adopted.'

"Time for sum fun." I said.








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