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The Ultimate Surprise

by shadowshild612

Chapter 10: New family

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New family


We were all on the train going to canterlot castle, we all had the same dream last night thanks to Luna, I was sad and depressed about my family, and being alone in a world of bipedal ponies. We had just arrived at the station, as we got off I noticed that all the canterlot ponies were staring at me with no friendly faces. I heard one of them say.

"Look at how ugly that thing is, he should be thrown in the dungeon for crimes against our eyes." Then the whole group started laughing, I put my head down and put up the hood on my hoodie, that I got from Rarity. I saw Fluttershy notice my mood, she was about to say something when something hit me in the head.

"Get back you monster!!!" I looked up to see dozens of guards around me, all the while the main 6, the CMC, Discord, Spike, and Screwball were all trying to get to me. I just watched as the guards put chains around my neck, hands, and feet as if it would help.

"Mind telling me what I`m being arrested for?" I asked as I pulled my hood back down.

The guards backed away a bit when I spoke but one of them stepped forward.

"You are being arrested for disturbing the peace." The guard with a blue main, and an orange coat said.

"But... I haven't done anything, I just got off the train with my friends." I said pointing to the others. All the guards looked at the elements, Discord, Spike, and Screwball, they all looked confused.

"Y-your friends with the elements of harmony?" one guard said.

"Why is that a sock?" I asked. "also how am I disturbing the peace?"

"Unfortunately, it is because of your appearance, and since you can't change that you'll have to come with us." another guard said.

"But... I can change that?" I said confused. "Didn't the princesses tell you that we were coming?" I questioned. The guards looked confused until a look of realization struck their faces.

"Y-Your Dillan the human that can transform aren't  you?"  The first guard said.

"Yup, ultimatrix Cyclone." I said as I shifted into Cyclone. The guards looked at me in disbelief after my transformation, they quickly regained themselves and made the chains disappear.  

"I take it I'm free to go?" I said guessing.

"Indeed, as long as you stay in that form." The second guard said.

"Ok, ultimatrix form lock code 1010." The ultimatrix beeped and we were off again.

We continued walking, as Rarity wouldn't stop talking about how rude the guards were, we made our way to the hotel where, we were  going to stay I walked up to the counter, and began talking to the group.

"Ok, so who's bunking with who?" I asked.

"Oh, I don't mind sharing a room with Dashie!" Pinkie said excitedly, I looked towards dash who nodded her head.

"Ok, who else?" I said.

"I...D...Don't mind sharing a room with...Discord." Fluttershy said hiding behind her hair, but I could see a faint blush, the others had looks of confusion, but I knew what was up.

"So~, you, and Discord huh ok." I said giving Fluttershy a wink, she blushed harder and looked at me with shock, as the others were still confused.

"Y...you know?" she said stuttering.

"Eeyup." I said imitating big mac perfectly, "it's not that hard to see the signs, don't worry I won't tell anypony, cross my heart, hope to fly, stick a cupcake in my eye." I said going through the motions.of the Pinkie promise.

The rest of the pairs go as followed, Twilight, Nyx, and spike, in one room, The rest of the CMC in another, Applejack, and Rarity in the third, and me, and Screwball in the last. It took us a lot of time to persuade Discord but he eventually gave in. WE were now walking towards the castle, we stopped momentarily at the gate in order to be let in. We then made our way to the throne room.

"Ah, good to see you all." Celestia said as we entered the room.

"Hello, princess"  The elements, Spike, the CMC, and Screwball said bowing.

"Hi Tia" Discord said waving.

"Hey, why did you ask us here?" I said as politely as I could, the princesses were my friends but I don't give respect unless they've earned it, and the princesses haven't earned my respect yet so I didn't bow. The others were used to Discord being disrespectful but when I didn't bow they looked pissed. Celestia noticed this and decided that it was for the best that they knew the truth.

"Calm yourselves, Dillan has made it clear that he only bows, or shows respect to those who have earned it." She said.

"But... princess he should respect you for all that you've done." Twilight argued.

"Oh, you mean like turning someone to stone for having fun/ getting back at the ones who wronged him, without even asking why he was doing it?" I questioned.

They all looked at me with shock even Celestia, but she was looking at Discord.

"Is... Is that true Discord, were you only having some fun while trying to get somepony back for hurting you?" She asked.

"Yes." was all Discord could said.

"Ok, but she's still done other stuff!" Rainbow said.

"You mean like banishing her own sister to the moon, for a thousand years, when she could have fixed it along time ago buy paying attention to Luna?" I responded getting her to shut up, "Any way, I won't truly respect her until she earns it, now I do respect her, and Luna for the acts of raising the sun, and moon but no more."

"We thank you for your praise Dillan." Luna said as she entered the room.  Everypony except for me, and Discord bowed again.

"Your welcome Luna, now not to seem rude but why are we here?" I said.

Celestia and Luna looked at each other smiling, they then turned towards us to speak.

"Dillan... could you please turn back to normal?" Celestia asked. I looked at them confused for a second then realized that I was still in my Cyclone form."Oh, right... sorry, ultimatrix disengage form  lock code 1010." I said as the ultimatrix beeped and reverted me to normal. "There, now why are we here?" I asked again.

"We have a surprise for you Dillan, I'm sure you all remember the joined dream we had last night." Luna said as all eyes looked towards me.  

"As, you all know Dillan has been through a lot regarding his family, so when we saw him in that dream, we... I could not stand to see such a close friend in pain." she said as I looked at her.

"So... I have talked it over with my sister, and she also thinks this will be a good idea." she said leaving us in suspense.

"Oh come-on, just tell us!!" Rainbow dash yelled with her hands in the air.

"Yes... you see, Dillan we have a proposition for you." Celestia said looking at me.

"Yes?" I said a bit uneasy.

Celestia, looked towards Luna who looked extremely nerves, Luna looked back at Celestia and nodded indicating that she was ready for something.  

"We would like to give Dillan the option of... joining our family... as my adopted son." Luna said looking as she might throw up. We all looked on in shock. They, want me to be apart of their family, and Luna wants to adopt me?We were all in silence for the longest time until Luna sighed.

"I... I suppose it was a big risk to take..." she was cut off as I pulled her into a big hug.

"Thank you." I whispered. "I would love for you to adopt me... mom."  I said with a chuckle as I released her. The elements of harmony, Celestia, spike, Discord, the CMC, and Screwball  all looked like they were about to faint, no pony had expected me to rush and hug Luna.

"Well... now that that is settled, we must address the public about the new prince." Celestia said.

"PRINCE!?!, I`m going to be a prince!" I said clearly shocked and a little excited.

"But of course Dillan, what did you expect when you agreed to become my son?" Luna said.

"....Tushay,  but do I need to transform?" I asked. "The ponies on the street weren't very pleased with my appearance, and the guards in the street even tried to arrest me for looking like this." I explained.

"Do not worry, my son as the new prince you will be allowed to walk around freely." Luna said to me smiling making me smile.

We all went to the balcony, and aunt Celestia announced that tomorrow we would hold a coronation for the newly adopted son of princess Luna. The citizens of canterlot went to tell the other ponies, that there is a new prince. Then Celestia sent a letter to princess Cadence, who I found out was engaged to Twilight's brother (I already knew but) no pony thought to tell her.

Cadence arrived about three hours later to get introduced to the new prince. It was Twilight who greeted her and brought her to the room where we were all talking as Rarity wouldn't stop talking.

"I still cant believe you going to be a prince, oh I wish I was a princess I would just a..." she was cut off by dash.

"Just stop Rarity!!! we get it Dillan`s lucky." she said as cadence and Twilight came in.

"Hello every...pony...." was all she said as she saw me. I wasn't really paying attention to the conversation until I realized, it got quiet. I looked around until I noticed cadence was just staring at me. she was just staring at me as the silence was starting to annoy me.

"I take it no pony told you about me?" I said as her eyes widened and she started to find her voice.

"I`m sorry for staring...but...I haven't really seen anything like you before." Cadence said.

"I should hope not, after all, I`m the first human in this version of equestria." I said smiling at her.

"This version?" she asked confused.

"I`ll explain later, for now." I said standing up and extending my hand for a shake. "I`m Dillan, I believe you came here to meet me, right?" I said smirking as she shook my hand, until she heard that Cadence pulled away in surprise.

"Your aunt Luna's new son?" she said with disbelief, and confusion.

"Yes, I'm your cousin, nice too meet you." I said.

"I'm sorry, but what are you, I haven't seen a pony like you." She asked hesitantly.

"It OK, I'm not a pony, I'm a human, and iv come here from a different world." I explained. She was about to respond, when Celestia, and Luna walked in.

"We have gathered the citizens, and the inhabitants of ponyville, come with us please." Luna said. We all followed Celestia, and Luna to the balcony, where Celestia began to tell the ponies about me.

"My subjects, we have gathered you all here to tell you the wondrous news. My sister princess Luna has adopted a son!" She exclaimed, causing loud gasps followed by cheers.

"Yes, Luna has connected to this soul do to the similarities they both have felt loneliness, sadness, and depression. It is do to These similarities that caused my sister, to reach out to this individual that made them friends, however do to the full extent of his sadness, and depression. My sister has become more protective." Celestia spoke, until Luna took over.

"Indeed, I befriended this person because I felt that I could help him, however I never truly knew the amount of help he needed. When I saw his dream I knew, that the only way to help him was to give him a family of his own. Now I must worn you he doesn't look the same as  us, for he is not a pony." She finished as louder gasps, and loud murmurs came from the crowd.

"Now, it has  has come to my attention, that on his way the castle, he was ridiculed, and teased for the way he looks." Luna began as more murmurs were heard. "He also had some trouble with the guards, so let me make it clear, IF ANYPONIE MAKES FUN OF HIM, OR MAKES HIM SAD I WILL NOT STAND FOR IT, AND YOU WILL BE PUNISHED, UNDERSTOOD?" she yelled. Causing the crowd to cringe. The crowed all vigorously nodded yes.

"Very good, now please welcome the newest prince to equestria, prince Dillan!!" Celestia yelled as I walked out onto the balcony.  

to be continued

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