Liam Dusk-Chapter 2-FlutterBitch vs Pinkie

Written by Daniel/Mr.Ghast

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Authors note: I am writing this not at 2 am so this should be better, I also Fixed the first chapter so if you read that before 11/20 re read it, I made It look a lot better, but I dident change anything else

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“So, um, what will we do about Pinkie, Dash?” Said a very worried Fluttershy who thought her secret would go out for all of equestria just because Pinkie could break the forth wall

“Well, I’m not entirely sure…”  Dash replied

“Well, since we already started over the fourth wall, which Pinkie dident just break it, she jumped over it, I may as well help, here, grab my tongue.”

“What the fu…” Both Fluttershy and Dash Started as a tongue appeared out of nowhere and teleported them to an alleyway near sugarcube corner

“Did you really have to do that man?!” said a grossed out Dash

“No” I replied “I just wondered what pony’s tasted like.”

“Sick perverted bastard” Dash muttered under her breath

“I sure am Dash.” And I paused for dramatic affect ‘I sure am…”

“Wai-wha-ha-how did you hear that?” Said Dash, confused

“Well, I am typing this all down, so don’t mutter or think anything bad about me” I said as my voice got louder as scootaloo rounded the corner

“You can take control of other Pony’s!?” Said Dash (Worralied?)

“Only if I have their consent, but I CAN take control of animals without a second thought” I replied

“Bu-bu-but your scootaloo, did she give you permission to use her body?” Said dash Still confused

“A pony? Where? All I see is a dodo chicken” I replied in a smartass tone. “Anyway, are we going to see how far the party has gone or not? We have been talking for far to long”

“I still don’t get how she was able to break the fourth wall…” Said Fluttershy speaking up for the first time since they got there

“It’s Pinkie Pie” Both “scootaloo” and Dash said

They all were wondering what would be in store for them at sugarcube corner. They all saw the dark in the store windows and knew what it meant they all made a plan to get Pinkie pie, and seeing how Shy could go in FlutterBitch mode to help her out, They desided that she would go fly up to the second floor and after dash and the “dodo chicken” went inside she would come and buck Pinkie in the face.

I started mumbling under my breath and a cream/yellow cloth and some Pink hair on top appeared out of nowhere

“Ho…“ Dash started but I cut her off “I’m making this story so I can spawn in as much as I please.”

“Fair enough, so are we going to do this or not?”

As they entered the store Pinkie, Rairity, and Applejack popped out from behind couches and such and yelled “SURPRI-“ But they were cut off by the little “Fluttershy” saying “Pinkie, behind you”

As I took off the shy costume there was a loud crunch of face meeting hooves as Fluttershy bucked harder than applejack getting all the apples off at once and as the rest of the girls were still trying to see what happened as Applejack took a hold of shy and Held her back “WHAT IN TARNATION DO YA THINK YER DOING!” yelled applejack as Fluttershy just laid their with a satisfied look on her face

“OHMYGOSHPINKIEAREYOUOKAY!?” said Twilight and Rairity as they rushed over to their bleeding friend.

No Response

“I bet you all are wondering what just happened aren’t you?” Said “the dodo chicken”

“What are you talking ab-“ Twilight was cut off

“I ain’t scootaloo, I’m the author of this story, we are all here because Pinkie broke the fourth wall, ruined the rest of what was supposed to be a simple romance, and dident listen when Dash told her not to tell anypony about the crush, so now we better get her to the hospital because of Flutterb-shy” I explaned

“And no Rairity, it’s not a simple crush, before you say anything, it WAS a secret crush for ten years” I said before Rairity even had a chance to talk.

“But ah still don’ get it, It’was just a secret crush afta all” Said Applejack still on top of a proud pegasi who followed “Gee, I wonder, would you care to “elaborate” it to them Dash?” She said with a wink towards Dash

“Sure thing, AH-HEM” she cleared her thought “Pinkie knows that Fluttershy has a soft heart, easily broken, and even thought I said it was Fluttershy…” Dash started off as Fluttershy finished “and then she told you guys even after what Dash said"

“Actually, it wasent just us…” Twilight started but stopped as she felt Rarity’s elbow in her side

The room was slient followed by grunting from both Fluttershy and Applejack as she tried to keep Fluttershy from hurting Pinkie some more “THAT BITCH! LET GO OF ME APPLEJACK BEFORE I DO THE SAME THING TO YOU TO!”

“Woah there, somepony, help!” Cired Applejack

“Yeah yeah, I’m doing it, one second, now what was the id for stone, AH! here we go. //replace Fluttershy 1” I said as Fluttershy slowly turned into stone. (Yes I do play a lot of minecraft and back to the story now shall we?)

“Wha, what did ya do!?” Said Applejack with a hint of anger and frae in her voice

“Relax, you said to do something, so I did, she can’t hurt Pinkie anymore, so you should probably take her to the hospital, ill stay here with dash, oh and put scoots back at the cmc’s clubhouse, I’m going back to my computer” and as I said that I left her body and went back to my computer.

“Well, alrite, Twi, stay here, ‘nd make sure he un-stones Fluttershy after we get Pinkie to the hospital.” Said Applejack carefully taking her to the hospital on her back.

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Authors note: Thanks for reading the second part of this, I hope to update on Mondays, wendsdays, and Fridays, some weeks I might cut out wendsdays though and even though today is sunday, there should also be another tommrow, I hope, as long as i dont get to preoccupied with skyword sword Screw it, I woke up to late, might work on it when I take a break at school today