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Rainbow's Crush

by Viynl Scratch

Chapter 6: To admit your feelings REWRITE

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Rainbow Dash and Soarin were sitting in the hospital room, creating an epic Daring Do game that was to be played by the two of them. While creating this game, Rainbow noticed how odd Soarin was looking at her, weird glances or just plain out staring.

"So if we put the the river with the rockodiles here, then the player would have to roll enough numbers to cross it safely or else be eaten and sent back to start", says Soarin looking up towards Rainbow.

"That sounds great Soarin! Umm, by the way, why do you keep staring at me?" Rainbow dash replies.

"Oh, no reason, no reason at all," Soarin sighs, staring into Rainbow's eyes. Rainbow Dash looked away and grabbed her glass of water on the bedside table.

"This is getting a tad bit weird Soarin", Rainbow says.

"Uhh, never mind that, we need to finish the game, right?" Soarin asks, looking away.

"Yeah, let's get to it", Rainbow replies.


After finishing the game, and playing it five times in a row, Dr.Stable walks in with lunch and good news.

"Well Rainbow Dash, your time with us has come to an end, you can go home tomorrow!" Dr.Stable says happily, adjusting Rainbow's bandages.

"Already Doc? I mean, I've been here a few weeks and I don't think my rib has healed" Rainbow Dash says, puzzled.

"Oh Rainbow Dash, you saw the X-rays. Your rib is just fine", Dr.Stable replies, just as happy as he was when he first came in.

"Hey that's great for you Rainbow! You can get right back to training to be a Wonderbolt!" Soarin joins into the conversation, equally joyful.

"I guess it is time to head back to the academy and become a wonderbolt!" Rainbow exclaims.

"That's the spirit!" Dr.Stable and Soarin exclaim in unison.

"Well, I best be going, see you tomorrow!" Dr.stable says happily, walking out of the room.


That night, Rainbow had trouble sleeping. And some weird thoughts.

"Hey Soarin," she asked.

"Yeah Rainbow?" he replied from his cot in the corner.

"You awake?"

"Yeah, or else I wouldn't be talking."

"Well, I just wanted to say, uhh, I, uhh, I think I like you Soarin,"

"I have the same thoughts Rainbow."

"Wait, what?"

"Of course I do Rainbow, I always did ever since I laid eyes on you"

"I, I, I don't know what to say. "

Soarin got up and walked over to the hospital bed where Rainbow lay, and pecked her check. "How about this, Goodnight Rainbow Dash"

"I think that's good, Goodnight Soarin," she said as she nuzzled him.

Author's Notes:

Well, that pretty much finishes up the rewrites and concludes the story :twilightsmile:. Thanks so much for reading and I hope to see you all on some of my other stories!

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