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Rainbow's Crush

by Viynl Scratch

Chapter 5: In the Hospital REWRITE

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(Rainbow)

"Yes sir, I will go get her a glass of water and tell her friends, I'll be right back." I heard a pony say.

"Ugh, what happened?" I moaned as I slowly opened my eyes.

"Apparently you fell out of a tornado with a bleeding jaw and a broken rib," replied the doctor, turning off a few machines.

"Oh," I said, looking down at the floor. The nurse walked into the room with a glass of water and a group of ponies.

"RAINBOW!! OH MY GOSH I JUST CAN'T BELIEVE YOUR ALRIGHT! I JUST GOTTA THROW A PARTY!", Pinkie Pie yells out excitedly as she pulled her party canon into view.

"Pinkie! Now is not the time for a party", Twilight exclaims, using her magic to teleport the pink party canon back to Pinkie's house.

"Umm, hi guys, what are you doing here?" I asked the small crowd of ponies that had gathered in her hospital room.

"We came to see you of course darling, what else would we be doing?" Rarity replies.

"Oh, hehe, totally knew that," I say.

"Hey, Rainbow Dash, glad to see your finally awake. I just wanted to tell you that Spitfire sent me to ask about what happened, uh, when you're able to" Soarin mutters, looking towards Rainbow Dash. "And to keep you company, if you like"

"I dunno bout' you guys, but as much as I wanna stay, we should give Rainbow some privacy, after all, she is injured," Applejack said, beckoning everyone to follow her out of the room. I wasn't going to say anything, I was just gonna let them talk.

"Well, I gotta stay here, so uh , see y'all later I guess!" Soarin says nervously, walking over to a cot that had been set up for him.

"Goodnight to you all," said the doctor, walking out of the room, closing the door behind him.

"Hey Soarin, why are you staying here, and sleeping here?" I ask, looking at Soarin who was currently fluffing his pillow.

"Well, Spitfire told the hospital staff that I'm staying here for the next few days to keep you company, and also to find out what happened"

"Well, okay then...Goodnight Soarin"

"Goodnight to you to Rainbow"


(Soarin)

"Good morning you two, it's time to get up, your breakfast is ready", the doctor said as he places two trays down on two separate tables with his magic.

"Geez is it morning already?" mutters Rainbow Dash, sitting up in her hospital bed.

"It is, I guess", I reply, getting off of my cot and grabbing my tray with my mouth. "Mmm, pieeeee"

Rainbow dash face-hoofed. "Seriously Soarin? OHMYGOSH! CHOCOLATE WAFFLES!!"

"Seriously Rainbow Dash?" I replied with a chuckle.
"Seriously you both?!" The doctor, Dr.Stables I think it was, exclaimed, then began to laugh, " Well, I have other patients to tend to, goodbye" With that said, Dr.Stable walked out of the room.
"So Rainbow, what did happen in the tornado that got you so hurt?" I asked, my cheeks filled with pie.

"Ok first, don't talk with your mouth open and, do you really want to know Soarin?" Rainbow replies, looking at her now demolished waffles.

"Well, yeah, I do"

"Umm, ok then, here goes: I was in the tornado, and I was flying past Lightning Dust. By the second time I flew past her, she turned around, looking at me and flying backward. I said 'What are you doing Lightning dust?' and she replied 'Nothing but a little old kick'. After she replied to me she kicked me in the jaw. I tried to fly away before more damage could be done, she kicked me again, breaking my rib and knocking me out of the tornado unconscious." Rainbow said sadly, looking out the window.

"Well, I'm terribly sorry to hear that Lightning Dust was the one who did this to you," I replied. "But with this new information, I want you to know that you have gone to the next level of training, and you will not be seeing any more of Lightning Dust!"

"OHMYGOSHOHMYGOSHOHMYGOSHOHMYGOSHOHMYGOSHOHMYGOSH" Rainbow exclaims. "I, I can't believe I leveled up! Thanks, Soarin!"

Author's Notes:

I have gone and rewritten In the Hospital. Hope you do notice the differences. Thanks for reading :twilightsmile:

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