I have a good idea for my characters past but I would like suggestions for adventures once everything calms down ( it will be quite a while till then I hope) but the sooner I get suggestions the more ideas I will be able to put together for future chapters. Thanks and don't forget to rate!

First Impressions

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Mane six 3rd person

"umm... Twilight are you sure it is safe?" whispered a nervous Fluttershy, they hadn't even gotten to the forest and Fluttershy was already terrified.

"Don't worry, I'll protect you, I'll knock out any monsters in 10 seconds flat" Rainbow Dash yelled proudly, surprising Fluttershy as she gasped an "EEP".

"Now now sugercube, there be no reason to be scared, we'll protech yeh'" Applejack told Fluttershy, while casting Dash a disapproving look.

The mane six stood outside the Everfree forest, they had decided to meet near Fluttershys,well Twilight had sent a message via Spike not leaving much room to debate if they had even wanted to, since her house was the closest to the forest. Twilight had just told them of Celestia's message, while adding in it might have something to do with "humans". As soon as Twilight had finished they heard yelling not to far off. Causing Fluttershy to lose what little confidence she had.

"Ohhh I bet "Humanes" LOVE party's!" Pinkie Pie said defying the laws of physics as she disappeared in a puff of smoke. "Come on slow pokes" yelled Pinkie from the under brush of the forest.

"Pinkie comes back, we don't know what we're dealing with!" Twilights calls went unnoticed as Pinkie was already gone. "We need to stick togeth-" Twilight then realized her it was going on deaf ears as Dash had given chase, while Rarity and Applejack had convinced Fluttershy to go in.

"sigh"

Human 1st person

It was strange, as soon as I passed out I remained aware in a way. As if my body was in use while I was in here. It seems "it" has taken control. Well this sucks. At least it isn't here to torment me.

While I can't tell what I'm doing, I can FEEL what my body is doing. I discovered this from a strong blow to the chest, likely breaking a few ribs. I could feel the voices anger, as if it were my own. I felt my strength returning as if the ribs were being put back into place, but what being has the power to do this? And where would it get the energy? I'm surprised my body is still moving after all I've gone through, then again I shouldn't be surprised of what can happen here.

I grunted in pain, what ever it is doing with my body it sure is pissing some stuff off. Then the pain stopped, the familiar strength was returning. But even more than before. Then I felt nothing... As if it had all stopped.

Rainbow Dash 3rd person

Dash looked down on the forest from above, in a clearing of trees she noticed a bloody mass, her curiosity peeked she flew in closer. She gasped in horror as she saw what Twilight described as a human, except horribly disfigured. It had many pieces of missing skin, allowing one to view the organs beneath. She nearly barfed from the horrible image, before she noticed the evil looking red claw, it could cut a creäture into ribbons. But never one to back down, even when it'd be the correct thing to do, she moved in closer, hiding in a nearby tree.

The creäture moved, obviously awakening. It strangely stood on its back 2 hoofs, it also seemed to be missing a lot of fur, as the only places with it were its head and "other areas" Dash then got embarrassed, as it seemed a bit like peeping, as pony's were able to hide their parts well.

Without warning the monster stared right into her eyes, one kindly and blue, the other a dark abyss. For the first time in ages, Dash felt Genuine fear.The human smiled evilly, inviting Dash into a fight taking an aggressive stance. Dash, still never one to back down, even in fear, rocketed into the human. Hearing the resounding crack of many ribs. The human got right back up and... Smiled. "AGHHHHHHHHHH" Dash yelled as she felt the very life being drained from her, it was the most painful thing she had ever felt. A thousand red hot needles pierced her skin. As suddenly as it had happened it stopped. When dash opened her eyes she saw AJ, Rarity, and Fluttershy, attempting fight the monster. Even with 3 on 1 the monster inflicted many wounds, some fatal. They put up a good fight but for every wound they inflicted upon it, it gave back that times 10. It had had enough, without a seconds consent it begin sucking Dash's friends dry of their life to heal its own wounds. Luckily a magical essence surrounded it, Dash saw Twilights horn glowing, but knowing the strength of the creäture, Dash knew Twilight couldn't hold it for long.

Twilight was faltering, that is all it needed to break free, in seconds it bounded across the distance between them and grabbed Twilight by the throat, lifting her in to the air. Twilight gasped as her windpipe was constricted, the thing was toying with her, it could have killed her in a single blow. Dash Taking Advantage of its distraction, used the last of her strength to propel herself towards it. Before it could react Dash nailed it right in it head with her hoof, such a thing would have killed a lesser creäture but managed to only knock it out. Dash collapsed near the creäture, to tired to care.

Pinkie Pie 3rd  person Pinkie wanted to help her friends, but her fabled "Pinkie senses" disagreed. So she watched as the humane fought her friends. Right before she had had enough Dash charged at the humane choking Twilight. Pinkie let out a sigh of relief. But she still did not interfere, she had a feeling she shouldn't.

Human 1st person

I awoke with a headache, I wish I didn't have to feel like shit because the voice got all pissy. As I looked at my body, it appeared many of my wounds had healed,my chest was covered by a thin sheet of skin, no longer showing my organs. While my leg was covered in scabbing blood, looking a lot better than when I blacked out. What was it fighting? As if to answer my question I heard soft crying coming from nearby. Looking around I saw many colorful pony's that looked, for lack of a better word, fucked up. I felt immense guilt... It may not have been "me" that did it but it was still.. "Me".

I now took the time to see from where the crying was coming from. It seemed to come from a yellow bloody mass, with a blood caked pink mane. As it saw me stand up it whimpered. I would have attempted to soothe it, but it would have only come across as growls. Actions speak louder than words. I slowly approached the pony like creäture, its all too big eyes growing wider as she let out a tiny "EEP". I didn't know exactly what I was doing, but it felt like the right thing to do. I felt incredibly weak again, but I couldn't stop , for what ever I was doing was healing its wounds.

***

I've given so much of myself that I can't even walk in a straight line. There were only two of them left, the rainbow manned one and purple unicorn. I started with the rainbow one, figuring it has more serious wounds due to her shallow breathing. I gave the last of my strength to this pony- no wait, Pegasus, I hadn't really been paying attention to such details, as I was far too tired. This next one could quite easily kill me if I'm not careful.

Oh no... I had been so focused on everything else I hadn't noticed its crushed wind pipe. I put my ear to where I perceive its heart to be, to hear... Nothing. It had only been a minute since I had gotten up p.. Perhaps it is not too late? I don't know what I was doing, but at the moment it seems better to rely on instinct. I proceeded to put my left hand over where the heart likely is... I pushed my power directly into that spot... With satisfaction I heard a faint beat... But its windpipe was still damaged... I gave the last of my strength, life, and blood, to fixing it enough so it could breath. By this time all the other pony's had gathered around. With a single smile I collapsed.