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The Doctor, Assistant, You, and Wibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey Stuff

by crooked

Chapter 5: [Crow] The Loop...

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It... I couldn't even explain it. The only way to get a picture in your mind of this place is by comparing a small black and white no sound TV box the an 8k ultra HD full color flat screen plasma TV. That was how much more colorful it was.

The first thing that struck me was the population. It was ponies, but at that point I probably wasn't going to be surprised by anything, especially with my Heckler HK45 in the back pocket. I pledged to only use it in emergencies. Now I will pledge to only use it in life or death situations. Which was not now.

"Welcome to Equestia! What do you think?" Derpy was beside me, giggling a little at my shock.

"Well, I really didn't expect this. It's too... pink."

Derpy winced. "Yeah, I wonder who thought of that when she was creating the world..."

"Lauren Faust...."

"Who?"

"Never mind. Why exactly did you want bring me here?"

"Why, to show you our home, of course! Actually, I didn't steer us here. You see, the TARDIS has a mind of its own. So technically, she can decide where to go. She's like a living being. Hence the term, 'she'." The Doctor suddenly popped out of nowhere in particular.

But, before I could ask him how in the world he did that, our attention was diverted to a filly with a pinkish-purple-ish mane. She looked surprised to see me, but not as surprised as she would be, for some reason.

"What are you guys doing here? Derpy? Mr. Hooves? Who is he? And why is that blue box there? Oh boy, I just found another good prank for a loop. Heehee!" I was more than surprised at how she knew about the Doctor, Derpy, and even called me a "he", and a "who", not a "what", which I thought most... ponies... would say. (Honestly, they don't look anything close to ponies. Oh well.) Apparently, Derpy was thinking along the same lines as I was.

"Uhh, how do you know our names, and what's yours? And what's that about a loop?" The filly tilted her head.

"Oh. My name is Sweetie Belle, and I'm.... stuck in a time loop..."

"Oh? Tell me, Ms. Belle, how many loops have you gone through?" The Doctor spoke up, and Sweetie Belle turned her head.

"Sweetie is fine, and I think I've been doing it for about 40 loops. I'm not sure anymore."

"Hmm... I think I might be able to help you. You see, you're stuck in a time loop, and when a certain time passes, everything that is not inside a room you are in resets, I believe. But, if you were to spend a loop in my TARDIS, technically, the TARDIS is in every point of space and time, there but not there. That can make is an anchor to stop the looping. Now, Im not sure what will happen wit h the looping 'magic' after, but I'm sure that you'll at least be able to see a second after the loop ends." I was genuinely surprised. It's not often you see someone who you think is insane suddenly start speaking jargon for five straight minutes. Then again, this is the Doctor.

You know, often times, the more quiet times are more of the important ones. This was one of those times.

"Crow."

"Yes?"

"There's one important rule when you're my companion." He was staring wide eyed behind us.

"And what is that?"

"When I tell you to run... RUN!"

Author's Notes:

Ooooh, just got CLIFFHANGERED!

Hey look! It's a legit chapter! Yaaaaaaaaayyyyyy!:yay:

Sorry for the delay, guys, I've been busy with school homework and projects (if you have no idea what I'm talking about, my bio will explain everything). I'll try to keep my schedule, but I'm afraid I'll have to change it to biweekly, or without schedule at all. Then again, a collab would be nice, but that's for later, when this story has more likes. MOAR!

Yes, for those who know, this was based off A Little Loopy. Hey, I think there's good story material in there, and I asked for permission.

Also, the reason I haven't made a Doctor chapter is because it would be hard to imagine the Dcotor thinking. Needless to say, I will soon do a Doctor chapter. Yes. I am a hypocrite. Deal with it.

Hey look, Crow's got a gun! And that, my friends, is how you make a good "choicer", with many possibilities. Maybe I'll send him to WWII.

Anyway, I just want to thank you guys for all the support, it makes me happy to see that people are still viewing my stories. PLEASE POINT OUT MISTAKES. I'm not a dictionary. But yeah, that's it, seeya!
--crooked

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