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When mother and daughter get into a fight over a misunderstanding their reconciliation leads to the reveal of Dinky's father, a cruel stallion who broke Derpy's heart. Can Derpy put her past regrets behind to find love and romance in the present?
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Dinky has always known her mother was a little different from a lot of ponies she met. Her eyes went in different directions, but this never bothered the filly until class bully Diamond Tiara began to mock her mother, setting Dinky into a rage. Because of a misunderstanding both mother and daughter believe the other doesn't like them anymore, and they try to make amends towards each other. In doing so Derpy reveals her regrets from the past where a cruel stallion broke her heart and left her alone and pregnant.

Will Derpy be able to overcome the past to find happiness in the present?

Coverart taken from a comic by doubleWbrothers. http://doublewbrothers.deviantart.com/art/Normal-371395121

Teen
Complete
Romance
Slice of Life
Sad

90,281 words: Estimated 6 Hours, 2 Minutes to read: [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]

20 Chapters:

  1. Chapter 1: Misunderstandings. [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Nov 17th, 2014
    2,364
  2. Chapter 2: Regrets of the past [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Nov 17th, 2014
    7,319
  3. Chapter 3: The end of regrets. [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Nov 17th, 2014
    3,687
  4. Chapter 4: Starting anew [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Nov 17th, 2014
    9,910
  5. Chapter 5: Anxious and restless. [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Nov 17th, 2014
    4,611
  6. Chapter 6: Second date [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Nov 17th, 2014
    3,300
  7. Chapter 7: Ghosts of the past. [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Nov 17th, 2014
    5,190
  8. Chapter 8: Unable to let go. [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Nov 17th, 2014
    3,561
  9. Chapter 9: Foolishness and anger. [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Nov 17th, 2014
    3,809
  10. Chapter 10: Team Muffin reunites. [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Nov 17th, 2014
    1,880
  11. Chapter 11: Public declaration of love. [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Nov 17th, 2014
    6,488
  12. Chapter 12: DADDY! [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Nov 17th, 2014
    5,912
  13. Chapter 13: Mixed feelings. [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Nov 17th, 2014
    5,699
  14. Chapter 14: Unorthodox apology [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Nov 17th, 2014
    3,704
  15. Chapter 15: A complete heart [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Nov 17th, 2014
    5,949
  16. Finale part 1: Unified hearts and a huge surprise [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Nov 17th, 2014
    3,779
  17. Finale part 2: Twilight's speech [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Nov 17th, 2014
    2,205
  18. Finale part 3: Unbreakable bond [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Nov 17th, 2014
    3,990
  19. Finale part 4: Alone at last [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Nov 17th, 2014
    4,751
  20. Epilogue: Goodnight [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Nov 17th, 2014
    2,173
Published Nov 17th, 2014
Last Update Jan 16th, 2018

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