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The O.C. Story

by MrAquino

Chapter 51: Chapter 51: Serp-Equines

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Chapter 51: Serp-Equines

"We're coming with you!" EpicKitty yelled, popping out of Pinkie's mane with the others.

"And so are we!" Dash said

"You won't." Matt said. "none of you will come with us."

"What?" Rarity asked "Why?"

"It's simple: They're us... but evil. They may know everything we know and will attack you on sight, or worse."

"If you think that's the right thing to do," Twilight said "We will honor it."

"Thank you," Kane said "We'll make sure Celestia & Luna are fine when we've finished ourselves."

"We'll keep these 4 safe" Pinkie said.

"They'r so cute!" Fluttershy added, rubbing her muzzle gently on Vanilla's.

Moments later:

They arrived to Canterlot, seeing some of the buildings destroyed with fire going on! Some people saw them and ran away out of fear; not even the children wanted to go to Kane! They went inside, seeing only more fire with some screaming on innocents and evil laughter.

"SHOW YOURSELVES!!!" Doug yelled

"If you wish." A more evil sounding Kane said.An explosion came from a building, destroying a few cars next to them. They only saw the silhouettes of themselves in the dust. The Dust settled and they saw an exact copy of themselves!!! They were all identical to themselves in every way, but they all had one smaller front leg than the other.

"We're the Serp-equines." The evil Matt said with the voice of Gollum.

"We're Stronger than you." The evil Gustavo said

"Faster than you!" The evil Doug said with the voice of Pops from Regular show

"Smarter than you!" The evil Kane said.

"But we're evil!!!" The evil Russell said with the voice of Vin Diesel.

"You don't say!" The regal Kane said very condescending like.

"Sure," the Evil Kane said "But We just need a little something first." In a flash, they all grabbed their counters by their face, draining what seems to be energy away. Their smaller legs grew to their normal sized legs, equalizing it. They threw their counters to the floor.

"We did it!" The evil Doug said "Our Polio is gone!!!"

"I knew it!" The regular Doug said "Polio!!!"

"Yes," the Evil Kane said "It is gone, now we can kill our old selves."

"KILL!!!" The regular Kane yelled in fear "That's a bit harsh, isn't it!?"

"No... letting you live is a fate much worse than death... think of this as... mercy killing."

"I wanna do it with my own self!" the evil Matt said with glee

"I agree." The evil Russell said "It is fun."

"Fine." the Evil Kane said "let's have some fun, myself."

"Not on our watch!!!" A voice yelled. They looked down and saw the Mane 6 (Except Fluttershy) standing across the road.

"The mane 6!?!?" they all yelled "Where's Fluttershy?"

"She's with our other friends." Twilight responded

In Twilight's Cottage, Fluttershy with the 4 small ponies, Discord, and Kane's & Doug's dad all sat together, wearing formal attire while drinking tea.

"It's so great to see us all get along so well." Fluttershy said. "Are you enjoying your tea, Mr. Aquino and Cherry?"

"Fine." They both responded

"I wish I had beer instead of this." Aquino whispered to Cherry.

"I wish I wasn't here." Cherry whispered back.

"How about you 4?" Fluttershy asked "Are they bothering you?"

"No," Pan replied "I just wish the dragon thing didn't stare at us like that." They looked at Discord, staring at them, smacking his lips in hunger.

"Discord!"

"What!?" Discord responded, snapping out of his phase "They look... so... delicious." He began to drool a bit. The small ponies ran into Flutterhsy's mane.

"That thing is weird." Cherry commented.

With the others:

"That makes sense." Matt replied.

"Say goodbye!!!" The evil Matt yelled.

"Get ready everyone!!!" Kane yelled. His horn Glew and a puff os smoke appeared. They got up and Pushed their evil selves to another area.

"We have to help them!" Rarity yelled

"I know." Twilight said "Girls, let's split up!" The whole group separated too fight their rival with a member of the Mane 6 joining them. Due to them all happening at the same time, we will look at each fight separately.

Doug Cherry: Doug carried his evil self, crashing through various walls before finding themselves at the docks.

"That was very rude." the Evil Doug said "I should teach you some manners."

"Shut up!!!" Doug replied "I've always hated regular show!!! This is going to be the most happiest day of my life!!!"

"Maybe... or your worst."

"Like hell !" The evil one uppercutted regular Doug. Good Doug fought back, by using his magic, burning his doplegangger's face. the evil returned, using an ice spell to counter the flames. They both went back a bit and charged at each other, using their horns as swords in close quarters combat. Doug took a lot of hits, but it seemed as if he were losing. His evil self charged at him, landing on a boat that sailed across the ocean. It took a while, but Twilight flew next to Doug.

"Need a little help?" Twiight asked

"YES!!!" Doug yelled back

"Alright, together now!!!" Twilight's horn glowed, and she fired at the evil Doug. Doug fired with her, both taking shots at the evil self. Soon, they both fired a super beam , brining down their enemy together. The minion fell to the floor, defeated. They went over to him: his skin seemed to fall off, showing a weird snake-pony mix beneath the pony skin.

"Ugh!" Twilight just said "No wonder those guys are called Cobra."

"Tell me about it." Doug said.

"Fools," the evil Doug said "just because I'm defeated... it doesn't mean my friends won't win."

"Maybe." Twilight replied "But we're here to help them just in case." A loud roar came from the distance, stopping everyone in their track.

"We should investigate that." Doug said

"Agreed." Twilight responded

Gustavo: He was chased by his evil self, both entering the zoo, luckily abandoned. Gustavo pulled out his rifle to blast his enemy, but noticed she also had all his equipment. They ran & shot each other, hitting each other's shot similtamiously. They both took cover, in a corner, waiting for their rifles to recharge.

"What'ca doin'?" Pinkie asked. Gustavo jumped out of cover in fear.

"Gotcha!!!" the evil Gustavo yelled, firing at good Gus. Gus dodged the shots and headed for another cover. Pinkie appeared next to him again. Gus jumped again, but not out of cover.

"Stop doing that!" Gustavo yelled "It's creepy."

"Sorry," Pinkie apologized "need any help?"

"Yes: Use your party canon on my mark"

"What's the mark?"

"You'll see." Gustavo went out of cover, firing at his evil clone. the clone got out and began to fire right back!!! They walked & fired at each other at the same time. "NOW!!!" Pinkie came behind Gust, pulling out her party canon and fired at the other Gus. Blinded, the real Gus switched to his 3-D gear, fired the hooks at some walls, and launched himself, kicking the vil in the gut... HARD!!! The evil crashed through a wall, where some of his skin came off, revealing a snake-pony mix!!!

"That's gonna give me nightmares!" Both Gustavo and Pinkie said together.

"MY SKIN!!!" the evil Gustavo yelled "YOU DESTROYED MY BEAUTIFUL SKIN!!!" He put on his gear and fired himself at the two. Pinkie pulled Gustavo's sandwich-sword, placed it in her party canon, and fired at the evil Gustavo. He was knocked out by the sandwich and set off course, landing in a pit full of vipers!!! Gusttavo quickly went down and took off the evil version's gear, making sure he wouldn't escape.

"Now that he's taken care of," Gustavo said "do you-"

"wanna look at all the animals and mock your evil self!?!?!?" Pinkie interrupted

"I didn't think that last part... but YES!!!" They both cheered, but stopped after hearing a loud roar!

Russell: Russell and his counter part ran around the city, chasing each other as if it were a Scooby-Doo chase. A.J. entered, chasing the evil Russell around. She pulled out her rope and tied up the evil Russell on the floor.

"I won't be here for long!" The evil Russell said "My true for will scare y-" A.J. punched him in the face, knowing him out. Russell entered, unaware if the evil form was awake or not.

"yer a coward." A.J. said to Russell.

"I couldn't handle it!" Russell said "I wanted to pass out and land back to meet the human form of you guys!!!"

"Yep... a coward." A loud roar came shaking the floor! Russell grabbed on to A.J., shaking in fear. "We're gonna investigate that."

"NOOO!!!"

Matt: Matt and his evil self fought their way up into a rooftop of a hotel. Using the elevators and inside services, the place became trashed in many ways! On the rooftop, there was nothing around.

"You will be defeated." Matt said "my evil and... crazy form."

"Form?" The other Matt said "I'll show you my true form!!!" He bit his own leg and ripped off the whole skin, revealing a true snake-pony mix!!! "See how beautiful I've become?"

"Ugh!!!"

"Now... die!!!" He charged at Regular Matt. Matt moved out of the way, letting the other fall to his own foolish attack. Rarity entered, panting a bit.

"Did I miss anything?" Rarity asked

"You did." Matt replied.

"Oh... that... stinks."

"It codes, but luckily, he fell."

"Is he alright?"

"Maybe." A loud roar shook the area.

"That doesn't sound good."

"I hope Kane is alright."

"I hoped Dash is being good."

-While everyone was battling their evil self- Kane and his Evil self stayed where they met.

"Why aren't you running?" The evil one asked "I thought you loved to run away."

"It's true I'm not the most bravest thing alive," Kane replied "but I'm not afraid of myself!"

"Oh, just like how you'd disappoint your parents?" Kane froze in shock "My colleagues and I share the memories of all of you, but we ourselves are made to be the complete opposite of you. Your fear of disappointing your parents is what makes you weak, and you don't wish to show your true self, but I'm not at all."

"There's always a weakness to something!"

"True, but then again, not all weaknesses are shown easily."

"Quit your yapping." Dash said. They turned and saw Dash, sitting on a lamp post "Why don't you two fight each other now? This is starting to BORE me."

"Why don't we?" the Evil one said

"Agreed." Kane replied. He flew into the air very fast! The evil one followed, then Dash. Kane turned around int he air and began to punch his alternate self across the face. Dash came in, doing an uppercut on the evil's back! the evil retaliated, kicking Dash in the face and turning around Kane, both free falling into a building. Kane hit the building hard, but got up firing a spell that blinded the other. The other fired a spell without aiming, destroying an entire building. Kane avoided it and sucker punched the other, making him fall to the floor. Dash came back, and did a Sonic Rain-Nuke on him, causing a crater in the floor! She flew back to Kane, who looked over: He saw that his alternate form lost some skin, but had a weird snake-pony underneath.

"That was easier than I thought." Dash said

"I know," Kane replied "Sorta reminded me of Dragon Ball Z with Man of Steel.

"What are those?"

"It's a human thing."

"Gotcha." The evil one moaned and moaned a bit.

"Give it up! You claimed I was weak through fear? You were beaten by both of us!"

"Not yet." The evil replied. His horn glowed and, in a flash, a large aura came around him, releasing a pulse punning roar!!!

Now:

Matt and Rarity watched as some nearby buildings fell over to the ground.

"What's going on?" Rarity asked

"I have no idea." Matt replied "Last time I saw, everyone dissapered but Kane & his evil self." They looked down and saw that the Evil Matt survived the fall, and Kane was running away!!! The silhouette of a giant creature chased after Kane, knocking the building that the two were on. The fall was rough, but the falling debris aided as areas to jump on while falling.

"What was that!?!?" Matt asked in fear

"A monster Russell may know?" Rarity asked

"We have to find the others!!!"

"I'm already on it!!!" Dash yelled, flying above them "I'll go find the rest, we'll all meet in front of the castle!" Without a word, they both ran to the Canterlot castle. In a few moments, all were at the castle, talking about what that roar was.

"Where'd that come from?" Doug asked "That made almost crap my pants!"

"But you're not wearing pants." Pinkie stated

"I believe it's a metaphor." Twilight said

"Enough of this," Gustavo said "Russell, is this another Godzilla related monster?"

"I don;t think so," Russell answered "but I would love to see another monster fight!"

"Of course you would," A.J. said "but you'll be too afraid to be part of it."

"If I had MechaGodzilla, I wouldn't!!!" They all began to argue, but stopped as the sound of hooves hitting the sidewalk was heard. They saw Kane, running super fast.

"Run!!!" he yelled "Hide!!! DO SOMETHING BEFORE HE FINDS YOU!!!"

"Who?" They all asked

"ME!!!" Out of the corner, a Huge Snake-Pony monster came out, crashing into a building, but chasing after Kane!!!"

"OH S***!!!" Doug yelled. They tried to scatter, but crashed into each other. Kane went past them, but the huge monster stopped and stared at them a bit. They all hugged each other, trembling in fear!!! It showed two front fangs at them and lunged!!! Kane slowed down a bit and hid inside a building, where Photo Finish, Hoity Toity, and Fancy Pants were in.

"Itz ze hero!!!" Photo yelled "why are you hiding?"

"Yes," Hoity said "you should be saving us, not destroying the city!"

"That wasn't us," Kane whispered "it was evil clones!"

"Evil clones?" Fancy asked "How are they?"

"Well, they share all our memories, and skills, but their minds have been altered to be the servants of Cobra: a terrorist organization determined to rule the world!"

"Like that isn't made up." Hoity commented

"Oh sure, but you trust that I beat Godzilla as a giant?"

"Touche'"

"Silence!" Photo yelled "Ze news is on!" A T.V. was on, recording the giant Snake-Pony, and the announcer was spectating on what's happening.

"We're here in Canterlot," the News reporter announced "where a Giant Alicorn-Snake monster is terrorizing Canterlot! It started when the famous heroes, Kane Aquino, Doug Cherry, Matt Cooner, Ruseell Annis, and Gustavo Huerta, were terrorizing the citizens. It's then shown as those were evil clones, and Kane Aquino, after battling his evil self, ran away from this giant snake-pony monster. It seems to be... oh god... it is!!! it's... eating... the heroes and some friends!!!"

"WHAT!?!?!" Kane yelled, staring at the T.V., where he could hear Matt outside, screaming, as his head was outside the monster's mouth, before slurped inside, only to be a bulge in it's throat as it swallowed him whole!

"This is Tragic!!! The heroes have been devoured!!! Kane is nowhere to be seen, but reports say he may have either joined his friends, or he ran away. Who will stop this threat? Kane, if you're out there... save your friends by any means necessary... or... Rest in Peace... all of you." the T.V. turned off. Kane sat there, open wide and... crying. He couldn't believe such a thing he did: his friends saved his life after being devoured by a dragon, but he left his friends only to be eaten themselves!!! Then he became furious, after ideas of his friends dying came into head! He began to grow!!! He grew so large, that the building he was in began to break!!! He crashed through the wall and looked at his evil self: he was breaking through the castle, searching for the princess to eat.

"HEY!!!" Kane yelled. The other Kane stopped and turned, making an evil grin.

"Oh," he mocked "you've returned? I'm sorry I couldn't find you, I had... a little snack, as I would call them."

"Let them go."

"I'm sorry, but after some delicious treats, it's hard to let them go! I think they'll help me feel good when I'm done with you!"

"I won't let you do that."

"Try me." They stared at each other for a while.

"Kane?" A muffled voice of Twilight said inside the evil's stomach. "Do it!"

"Shut up in there!!!" The evil said, hitting his stomach! Kane yelled and super punched his evil self. He charged at his fallen self, but the other reacted, biting into one of his back legs!!! Kane backed off a bit, seeing that the bite wound was deep, and being poisoned by his alternate's venom.

"I'LL KILL YOU!!!" Kane yelled. The other got up and hissed. They charged at each other as the evil caused the other to crash into the castle! Kane kicked his other off, retaliating with a punch to the face. The evil was stunned a bit, and Kane grabbed on to his neck with one arm, and proceeded to punch him in the stomach with the other. He could hear his friends screaming & cheering inside a bit, but the other bit on to his punching arm. Kane could now feel his arm & leg getting numb, not moving very well. The evil kept on to him, but Kane swung his numb arm at him, causing him to fall to the ground. He went over to the evil self and stepped on his chest! It tried to bit him, but Kane kicked him so hard, that one of the fangs came off and hit the wall of the castle. Kane went on his knees and punched him with his good arm. His vision began to blur a bit, but he continued, causing the other fang to become loose. The evil got up and spat out his loose fang! At this point, Kane couldn't see a couple of feet in front of him, especially with his glasses on. The evil kicked his face & caused him to fall down on the floor, passed out!

"See ya sucker!!!" The evil yelled "Hey guys inside, you won't die alone, more friend will be joining you from..." he turned and saw Ponyville in the distant. "Ponyville." He began to ran towards the town! Kane was on the floor, desperately trying to get up.

"No," He said to himself "I can't let this happen... they... they must... live. I'm weak... I've always been weak... I'm a disappointment to my family. If I can't save them, then... I'm truly done for... this is the end of my life."

"My son," A voice said. Kane turned and saw his Father with Fluttershy, Doug's father, Discord, and the small ponies.

"Dad?"

"You're not a disappointment. I will agree, you may not be physically strong, but, -I can;t believe I'm saying this-, you're called Strongheart for a reason: You stayed by their side and fought for what's right! You're flawed, but you tried your best! Now: KICK HIS ASS!!!" Kane's vision went red, and he charged at his target much faster than ever!!! Hie evil self was just a few feet before hitting the first house, but Kane tackled him!!! Though he still didn't feel his poisoned limbs, he went full crazy, biting into his evil version's neck!!! The other tried to escape, but Kane wouldn't let him: he kept him on the floor, biting and punching him!!! One fatal blow to the back: the evil puked out his friends finally!!! They flew into the air and landed on the floor, covered in stomach acid. Kane went full maniac on his evil self, punching him so much that both began to bleed... a lot!!! The evil was knocked out, and Kane slowed down a bit, taking heavy breaths. All the ponies & citizens came and saw the two giants, then the victims of evil Kane. Kane was finished with his evil self, as it shrunk down to normal size. The giant released a roar of Victory, making everyone cover their ears. He fell down to the floor, next to his friends. He nudged them gently with his giant hoof, glad to hear them moan a bit.

"MOVE OUT OF THE WAY!!!" Kane's dad yelled, pushing everyone out of the way. "KANE!?!?"

"Hey dad," Kane replied "Thanks for the motivation."

"Motivation? What motivation!?!?!?"

"If that wasn't you... then... then who did that?" He passed out on the floor.

"He should go back to normal." Discord said, teleporting on to the giant's head. "on 3...2...1!!!" Nothing happened. "Oh dear! MEDICS!!!" A bunch of doctors and veterinarians came over, checking on the giant and his friends. The evil woke up and got up!

"This isn't over!!!" He yelled "My others will kill you!!!"

"Others?" Doug's father asked "Who are you?"

"You'll know later. ATTACK!!!" He ran away!!! Down form the sky, giant forms and regular sized clones of them of them came down, along with Clone troopers from Star Wars!!!

"Oh no!!!" Fluttershy yelled "We gotta get them out of here!!!

Next Chapter: Chapter 52: Attack of the Clones and Hiding. Estimated time remaining: 48 Minutes
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